Originally Posted by Arooje Nasir

hey i have read sum of ur hand pieces ......ur grammar is gud....u need to expand ur ideas.....n make outline frst n thn arrange ur all ideas according to that ideas shld flow like water in ur essay dats the essence of essay......... im also working on essays now adays ...i have written essays on 5 topics uptill now n each on 20_30 pages covering all aspects.... cause in exam cany aspect can cum....if u will learn to expand ur ideas then it will b easy for u to write in exam ..cause paper will b unseen n topics can b of any type....

Originally Posted by nisha cute

Dear friends i am totally novice to css and other competitive exams. So far as i have heard, essay paper plays a pivotal role in one's success... Today i am going to write my first essay. I request seniors as well as competent juniors to evaluate my work so that i could start my journey on the right track....




The Process of urbanization in Pakistan.

Urbanization is the process of migration of masses to the urban areas/cities.In Pakistan, the process of urbanization is as old as the country itself. Broadly speaking, our country has witnessed two major urbanization phases i.e, external and internal. The former phase started with the independence of Pakistan. A huge chunk of refugees migrated from India and got settled in the urban areas. Besides,the dismemberment of Pakistan in 1971 further compelled a large number of pro-west people to migrate. Similarly, Iran- Iraq war and US invasion of Afghanistan forced people to get settle in urban areas of Pakistan. The govt. of Pakistan,pitifully,hardly paid any heed to this acute settling problem.

The latter phase is internal migration. The decline in agricultural sector,candidly speaking, is the biggest cause of rural urban migration. According to an estimate, thousands of rural dwellers migrate every year to cities. Secondly, lucrative employment opportunities is the other cause why urbanization process is taking place with such a massive speed. In addition to this, urban areas offer good health and education facilities which also attracts people of backward areas.

While the causes of urbanization are known, the government seems impotent to deal the crisis.Urbanization is a positive process, no doubt.In developed countries such as United States, United kingdom, China etc., urbanization is taking place with greater speed. All this ,however, is due to the attention and proper management on the part of the respective governments. In Pakistan,however, the process is not that transparent rather it is full of flaws. Government's lack of attention and planning, corruption and illiteracy etc., are some of the causes why urbanization process has not borne fruits for Pakistan.

All this, however, does not mean that there is no remedy to it. Situation can be made favorable if the government and concerned authorities take some feasible steps in this regard. To say,there must be proper planning over the management and settlement of new comers to the cities. Secondly,serious attention should be paid to rural development.Last but not least, only honest and competent people should be made the part of policy making. In this way, urbanization can be made a blessing for Pakistan.

i wrote this essay in haste, only in 15 minutes..

Originally Posted by nisha cute

Dear friends i am totally novice to css and other competitive exams. So far as i have heard, essay paper plays a pivotal role in one's success... Today i am going to write my first essay. I request seniors as well as competent juniors to evaluate my work so that i could start my journey on the right track....




The Process of urbanization in Pakistan.

Urbanization is the process of migration of masses to the urban areas/cities.In Pakistan, the process of urbanization is as old as the country itself. Broadly speaking, our country has witnessed two major urbanization phases i.e, external and internal. The former phase started with the independence of Pakistan. A huge chunk of refugees migrated from India and got settled in the urban areas. Besides,the dismemberment of Pakistan in 1971 further compelled a large number of pro-west people to migrate. Similarly, Iran- Iraq war and US invasion of Afghanistan forced people to get settle in urban areas of Pakistan. The govt. of Pakistan,pitifully,hardly paid any heed to this acute settling problem.

The latter phase is internal migration. The decline in agricultural sector,candidly speaking, is the biggest cause of rural urban migration. According to an estimate, thousands of rural dwellers migrate every year to cities. Secondly, lucrative employment opportunities is the other cause why urbanization process is taking place with such a massive speed. In addition to this, urban areas offer good health and education facilities which also attracts people of backward areas.

While the causes of urbanization are known, the government seems impotent to deal the crisis.Urbanization is a positive process, no doubt.In developed countries such as United States, United kingdom, China etc., urbanization is taking place with greater speed. All this ,however, is due to the attention and proper management on the part of the respective governments. In Pakistan,however, the process is not that transparent rather it is full of flaws. Government's lack of attention and planning, corruption and illiteracy etc., are some of the causes why urbanization process has not borne fruits for Pakistan.

All this, however, does not mean that there is no remedy to it. Situation can be made favorable if the government and concerned authorities take some feasible steps in this regard. To say,there must be proper planning over the management and settlement of new comers to the cities. Secondly,serious attention should be paid to rural development.Last but not least, only honest and competent people should be made the part of policy making. In this way, urbanization can be made a blessing for Pakistan.

i wrote this essay in haste, only in 15 minutes..

Originally Posted by Arooje Nasir

its not necessary to cramp books... and even try no o use bookish language ... coz examiner is more educated than us... he need our effort.... but yes do concern current material regarding sum statistics u can use any magazine or news paper articles for dis information... add routine life examples to explain ur point ...if ur giving statistical ratios .. do explain them a bit.....it is imp to know the current situations on topics like corruption, education, poverty, n scientific topics like climate change or global warming....


and im using net language here on forum .... but im sure i will not use such short terms in exam

Originally Posted by Ahmed Faisal

I second to Arooje Nasir; and would like to add some more valuables about essay preparation. If someone wants to clear the Essay paper with flying colors, he/she has to keep an eye on daily newspaper, preferably dawn. Notably, keeping an eye on news paper is not enough. In fact, one should note those details on daily basis in notebook. the benefit of this exhaustive work is that when the time comes you have already collected the data; and you need only to compile this raw data in essay form.

Originally Posted by nisha cute

Dear friends i am totally novice to css and other competitive exams. So far as i have heard, essay paper plays a pivotal role in one's success... Today i am going to write my first essay. I request seniors as well as competent juniors to evaluate my work so that i could start my journey on the right track....




The Process of urbanization in Pakistan.

Urbanization is the process of migration of masses to the urban areas/cities.In Pakistan, the process of urbanization is as old as the country itself. Broadly speaking, our country has witnessed two major urbanization phases i.e, external and internal. The former phase started with the independence of Pakistan. A huge chunk of refugees migrated from India and got settled in the urban areas. Besides,the dismemberment of Pakistan in 1971 further compelled a large number of pro-west people to migrate. Similarly, Iran- Iraq war and US invasion of Afghanistan forced people to get settle in urban areas of Pakistan. The govt. of Pakistan,pitifully,hardly paid any heed to this acute settling problem.

The latter phase is internal migration. The decline in agricultural sector,candidly speaking, is the biggest cause of rural urban migration. According to an estimate, thousands of rural dwellers migrate every year to cities. Secondly, lucrative employment opportunities is the other cause why urbanization process is taking place with such a massive speed. In addition to this, urban areas offer good health and education facilities which also attracts people of backward areas.

While the causes of urbanization are known, the government seems impotent to deal the crisis.Urbanization is a positive process, no doubt.In developed countries such as United States, United kingdom, China etc., urbanization is taking place with greater speed. All this ,however, is due to the attention and proper management on the part of the respective governments. In Pakistan,however, the process is not that transparent rather it is full of flaws. Government's lack of attention and planning, corruption and illiteracy etc., are some of the causes why urbanization process has not borne fruits for Pakistan.

All this, however, does not mean that there is no remedy to it. Situation can be made favorable if the government and concerned authorities take some feasible steps in this regard. To say,there must be proper planning over the management and settlement of new comers to the cities. Secondly,serious attention should be paid to rural development.Last but not least, only honest and competent people should be made the part of policy making. In this way, urbanization can be made a blessing for Pakistan.

i wrote this essay in haste, only in 15 minutes..