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well nisha i gave cursory look to your essays...your flow, language etc are good..but you have to work hard on your organization..further here are my some suggestions which may help you..always try to mention 3 aspects of a topic:causes,impacts and possible solutions(your suggestions) and as every coin has two sides same is the case in essay writing,try to discuss both sides ...e.g in failure of democracy in pakistan also give optimistic touch
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i want an essay on women empowerment in Pakistan with outline. can some one help me in this regard
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Go through the following link wherein you would find each and every important essays...
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i want an essay on women empowerment in Pakistan with outline. can some one help me in this regard
dear,for writing complete essay here much time required which i have not because of some other assignements here i am postiong outline with some hints.....

women empowerment

outline
introduction
in introduction try to elucidate , why necessary to empower women, islamic view about women empowerment, how women can be empower, etc


factors responsible for lack of women empowerment
1.historical background
2.misinterpertation of religion
3.lack of education in society
4. lack of education of women
5.lack of job opportunities
6.lack of democracy
7.lack of modernisation


effects
1. slow economic growth
2.illiteracy
3tortueron women
4.conservative society
5.fundamentalism in religion
6.rapid growth of population
7. unemploymewnt


mesures
1. more representation of women
2. seprate and more educational institutions for women
3. moer and better jobs for women
4. tarining workshops for women
5.advancement of women in all fields
6.propogation of true religious view about women
7.moral laws for protecting women

impacts of women empowerment

economic impacts
social impact
educational impacts
moderate society
psychological impacts

conclusion



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is it necessary to cite women protection bill?
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yes you can cite it , but in exam it depends upon the nature of the question ..
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dear,for writing complete essay here much time required which i have not because of some other assignements here i am postiong outline with some hints.....

women empowerment

outline
introduction
in introduction try to elucidate , why necessary to empower women, islamic view about women empowerment, how women can be empower, etc


factors responsible for lack of women empowerment
1.historical background
2.misinterpertation of religion
3.lack of education in society
4. lack of education of women
5.lack of job opportunities
6.lack of democracy
7.lack of modernisation


effects
1. slow economic growth
2.illiteracy
3tortueron women
4.conservative society
5.fundamentalism in religion
6.rapid growth of population
7. unemploymewnt


mesures
1. more representation of women
2. seprate and more educational institutions for women
3. moer and better jobs for women
4. tarining workshops for women
5.advancement of women in all fields
6.propogation of true religious view about women
7.moral laws for protecting women

impacts of women empowerment

economic impacts
social impact
educational impacts
moderate society
psychological impacts

conclusion



stay blessed
very good outline, in impacts you can mention the women who changed History like Margaret Thatcher, Maria Treshkova etc.....it is always good to substantiate your points with giving references of Historical personalities.....

BUT i am observing on the forum that people are focusing on selective study be it optional subjects, compulsory or even essay...this is abating the charm of the competitive exam, FPSC should do something to curb that trend and i think they have done something in last CE in this regard...
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thank you Ali and bilal. I am sparing only one hour for essay every day, is this enough time? i write short essay daily.
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thank you Ali and bilal. I am sparing only one hour for essay every day, is this enough time? i write short essay daily.
That is enough time, i know a guy who never in his life practised an essay, just went to exam hall, did an essay and came off with flying colors every time...reasons; first it is ALLAH's blessing who confers on us the honor, we are nothing...second reason is the art and prowess, once you know the art and have the prowess then you won't have to practice and do selective study, you would write on anything impromptu...

As we are aspiring for a competitive exam, we are all good enough.....
Nisha you yourself would be good at everything but one and you have to find that weakness and work on it, That's it....

some of us would be lacking in grammar, the others would lacking in sentence syntax, still others won't have the appropriate vocabulary to succinctly yet comprehensively express their thoughts, while still others won't have the data to write on a topic.....

What is our Job? our job is just to find that prob and then just work on it, this way our energies, effort and time would be saved and it won't be wasted on things that we are already good at.....find that weakness....

Those who hearken to my counsel would find it useful.

Good luck...
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bilal i am not safistfied with my writing style, i still feel there is something lacking.
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