Asslam o alikum Members. Here I've made the two introductions of one Essay so kindly check and tell me which introduction is better one according to the outline. Regards

Good Governance In Pakistan
Outline:
1- Introduction
2- Good governance means absence of abuse, corruption and terrorism
3- Essentials of Good governance
a- Equal participation
b- Institutional supremacy
c- Accountability
d- Rule of law
e- Political stability
f- Transparency
g- Free media
h- Promotion of national cohesion
i- Socio- economic development

4- Success story of developed countries

5- Dismal performance of Pakistan since independence
a- Institutional imbalance
b- Lack of accountability
c- Political instability
d- Rampant corruption
e- Poor relation between center and province
f- Socio- economic crisis:
i- Poverty and inflation
ii- Over-population
iii- Unemployment
iv- Water, energy and food crisis

6- Aspect of good governance in Pakistan:
a- Unrestricted media
b- Independent judiciary
c- Population is mostly youngsters
d- Silent features of civil society against undemocratic political
e- Military through not doing so fair but at all they are serving the national interest
f- Initiatives are taken to tackle with the socio-economic problems

7- Impact of crisis of governance:
a- National image has been globally affected
b- Weak national institutions
c- Lack of tolerance
d- Hike in corruption
e- Reluctance in paying tax
f- Election rigging
g- Economic weakness
h- No effective system of drafting legislation
i- Persisting illiteracy
j- Institutional erosion

8- Recommendation:
a- Balance among all institutions must be assured
b- Good relations between center and provinces
c- Economic policies should be revised
d- Education of the masses
e- Accountability in every department
f- Representation of the people of grass root level

9-Conclusion

Hazrat Umer declared that if a dog of hunger at the bank of Tigris in his reign, he would be answerable to God. He was neither a democratic nor dictator, it was an example of good governance. Good governance promotes national development, protects human security by maintaining law and orders situation, delivering justice, safeguarding the property rights of ordinary people and providing equal opportunities in economic activities. The ultimate test of good governance is the broad satisfactions and ownership by the people. Essentials of good governance are equal participation, institutional supremacy, accountability, rule of law, political stability, transparency, free media, promotion of national cohesion by socio- economic development.
Historical perspective of two centuries shows that countries with disciplined institutions have strengthened themselves effectively and maintained the law and order, equal economic opportunities, and transparency in their countries and reaped the benefits. But unfortunately Pakistan is not one of those countries who had witnessed the exemplary good governance. the crisis of in Pakistan is extensive to the extent that governance in Pakistan is almost in the state of collapse. As there is institutional imbalance, lack of accountability, political instability, rampant corruption, poor relation between center and provinces, and socio-economic crisis are rampant since independence. But it does not mean that there is no "Governance" at all! Unrestricted media, independent judiciary, population is mostly youngsters, silent features of civil society against undemocratic political parties, and military though not doing so fair but they are serving the national interest and initiatives are taken to tackle with the socio- economic problems are the bright side of good governance and other side of the coin.
Impact of crisis of governance has severe consequences and scattered national image has been globally affected, weak national institutions, lack of tolerance, hike in corruption, reluctance in paying tax, election rigging, economic weakness, no effective system of drafting legislation, persisting illiteracy and institutional erosion are few of them. But Pakistan can overcome on all these social, economic, and political evils through some efficient measures. For instance there must be balance among all institutions, good relations between center and provinces, economic policies must be revised, education of the masses, accountability in every department and representation of the people of grass root level. If we work on it we can easily take Pakistan out of this quagmire of crisis of governance.

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Hazrat Umer declared that if a dog of hunger at the bank of Tigris in his reign, he would be answerable to God. He was neither a democratic nor dictator, it was an example of good governance. Good governance promotes national development, protects human security by maintaining law and orders situation, delivering justice, safeguarding the property rights of ordinary people and providing equal opportunities in economic activities. The ultimate test of good governance is the broad satisfactions and ownership by the people. Essentials of good governance can be figured out from the success story of developed countries. But unfortunately Pakistan is not one of these country who have experienced the exemplary governance. Though since independence it has faced the crisis of governance but there are many bright aspects of governance as well. Impact of crisis of governance is worst but with the help of some efficient steps she can easily overcome on such crisis and can come about as a remarkable country for her governance.

so much good and detailed outline. it is really appreciating and commendable.

one thing i have observed that too much lengthy outline cannot be covered within three hours as each and every point needs reasonable explanation. i am not a master of the subject but if i am going to write essay on the same topic,my outline will be a little brief but will include every important point.