Seniors please check outline of my essay. i am doing it first time so please evaluate it so i can be able make it more better. i shall be thankful to you.


Energy Crises in Pakistan

Outline:
1. Meaning of energy crises
2. Historical prospective
3. Current situation of energy in Pakistan
4. Main causes
a) Under utilization of installed capacity
b) Political hurdles in development of dams
c) Lack of foreign exchange to purchase energy
d) Line losses
e) Lack of technical abilities
f) Poor usage by people
g) Poor management by government
h) Corruption
i) International pressures
j) Lack of political will to tackle this issue
5. Effect of energy crises
a) Unemployment
b) Poor crops
c) Decrease in exports
d) Increase in imports
e) Pressure on economy
f) Inflation
g) Destruction of local industry
h) Psychological effect on people
6. Solution of energy crises
a) Development of Kalabagh dam, Bhasha dam and Neelam Jehlam project on priority basis
b) Tax reforms to generate revenue
c) Thar coal project
d) Exploring new sources of energy (wind energy, sun energy, bio mass energy etc)
e) Developing peace pipe line on urgent basis
f) Ensure transparency in projects
g) Good governance
7. Conclusion

There is no need of defination of energy crisis,any how good effort.

Regards

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thanks,,,

please guide me than what should be first point in this outline.

You must include "Introduction" word here.

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thx,,
sir would you like to tell me that what do you do, i mean css qualifies or aspirant

it means that there is no need to define the topic we are writing?

well as far as I know .. one should give a very brief introduction to a start an essay ..

Introduction is for describing what you are writting.ok

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Struggle exhausts you,irritates you .But it gives you the elegant reward of lifetime called SUCCESS.

Dear,i am CSS hopeful.In 2012 i attempted essay on energy crisis and passed.

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Struggle exhausts you,irritates you .But it gives you the elegant reward of lifetime called SUCCESS.

@Bozdar Iqbal

I,m confused about "thesis statement" in introduction of an essay how we can define a thesis statement? can you please explain it with a brief example!
Thanx in anticipation...too confused i'm