Outline : Pakistan's economy

[KAWISH]

aoa all dear members hope u all are fine.pls comment on this outline.thanks

Pakistan’s economy: threats and hopes
A- Introduction
B- Current situation (facts)
C- ECONOMIC PROBLEMS OF PAKISTAN:

a-what are these problems?
* internal threats:
1. illiteracy
2 .poverty
3. corruption
4. misuse pf resources
5. provincial tussles
6. deteriorating law and order conditions
7. extremism
8. political uncertainty
9. habit of borrowing and consequences of this borrowing
10.water,power and energy crisis

*external threats:
1.threats of reaching the war on terror on into our borders
2.proxy war b/w India n pak in Afghanistan
3.global financal crunch and Pakistan
4.international protectionism rising
5.climate change
6.propoganda against Pakistan by India

b-causes and effects of these problems

D- emerging multi-polar world and lessons for Pakistan

E- positive indicators/hopes for the future:
1. multi-polar world a hope
2. judicial activism aimed at country’s betterment
3. world’s efforts on climate change
4. positive indicators in our economy
5. pledge of Friends of Pakistan to promote country’s economy etc.
6.efforts of higher education commission, a positive indicator for the future
7. consciousness of government

F-Opinion for consideration:
a-individual level effort
b-state level effort

G-Conclusion

Regards

[New Student]

@Kawish

A nice attempt. However it seems as if you are focusing more on impact of extremism on Pakistan's economy. I would recommend you to write on the lines I have posted to your query somewhere else. Some additional guidelines (although you have incorporated some of the factors I am writing below, but I am giving extra hints) :

1. Power and gas loadshedding and its impact on industrial output.
2. Food crisis
3. Mismanagement of economy (Monetary and Fiscal)
4. Persistent trade deficit
5. Budget deficit
6. IMF and World Bank's conditions for aid and their impact on Pakistan's economy (To remind you that IMF and World Bank conditions basically require us to reduce trade and budget deficit and have a smaller government role in economy i.e. more privatization)

Some points that you can delete or modify:

1. Climate change (I dont know how you are going to relate this to economy, although it has a bad effect on our economy in the long rum but this effect will not be limited to us rather it would affect whole world)
2. Pledge of friends of Pakistan (I highly doubt this aid, in simple words it is zabani jama kharch. It is because countries dont give aid to correct our balance of payments and reduce our budget deficit)
3. International protectionism rising (I dont know how you can say that, if you can elaborate I would be thankful)
4. Consciousness of government (hahahaha)
5. Multi polar world (Dont know how you can relate this to our economy)
6. You can lump together three headings i.e.
a. Pakistan war on terrorism
b. Proxy war between India and Pakistan in Afghanistan
c. Indian propaganda against Pakistan (I am not sure how this is going to affect our economy)

It would be much better to post a complete essay where reader can assess your essay.

Regards

[Sabah Hunzai]

Originally Posted by newstudent

@Kawish

1. Climate change (I dont know how you are going to relate this to economy, although it has a bad effect on our economy in the long rum but this effect will not be limited to us rather it would affect whole world)
Regards

you have correctly pointed out the irrelevancies in the given outline by Kawish.I was about to leave the same observations. However, the factor of Climate change I thought, as Kawish might have thought in similar fashion, one can relate this factor with food crisis.

[KAWISH]

@newstudent
thnk u so much.thats exactly i thought obt my outline ,thats its more abt extremism.anyhow the point you mentioned n that i missed is due to some net problem at my end.it was for three times i had to type this outline n everytime i posted ,my a/c was logged out.anyhow i do have explaination n a clear mind on how im going to relate those points to my topic,but your pointing out ll still help coz now i ll try to make it more clear n relevant.
if somebody is interested n learning abt that relevance i can do that.

@sabah hanzai
thank u too i ll definatly work on the directions of you respected members.
Regards

[Kashif Abro]

Dear Friend this introduction paragraph kindly check this and give feed bcz im new in this forum.
Introduction:
Economy plays vital role in every country. It is presumed that economy is like back bone of the country.Because the rapid industrial growth, better utilization of resources and development is highly dependent on economy. In contrast economy of Pakistan is in stable due to economic challenges. In addition there is in consistent growth rates. Further more High fiscal deficit, High debt burden, inflation, trade deficit and poor social sector indicators.In the context due these factors Pakistan economy have been disturbed.
Kindly seniors give me feed back.

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@kawish

pretty good attempt. Irrelevant points must be pointed out. What about Foreign Direct Investment. It is a main point of your essay. Anyhow, you attempt seems quite good except some points which are irrelevant. Best of Luck.