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Raz Wednesday, March 18, 2009 11:58 PM

[B][CENTER]A humble request to our qualifiers: [/CENTER][/B]

Please share your tips for the papers mentioned before your names as follows:

usman khalid> Composition
Emoemar>Essay
amubarak>EDS, Pakistan Affairs, Mercantile Law
Jani Abro and F.S.> Sindhi


Regards

razdar_hai Thursday, March 19, 2009 10:06 AM

my DMS
 
essay 43

precis 52

EDS 73

current 42

pak affairs 44

islamiat 50

Political science(A) 55
(B)58 TOTAL=113

British History (A)48
(B)57 TOTAL=105

Constitutional LAw 61

International Relations 54

TOTAL WRITTEN=637
VIVA =159
TOTAL=796
Merit # 267(10th in Balochistan)

asif ahmed Thursday, March 19, 2009 11:34 AM

D M S
 
Tarique Manzoor Chandio

Merit No: 8

1st In Sindh (r)
Essay 56
Eng Comp 53
E D S 83
Current Affairs 46
Pak Affairs 56
Islamiyat 67
History Indo Pak 114
Pol: Science129
Sindhi 93
Constitution Law
Total Written 747
Interview 167
Total 910.

Dr.G.AsgharMemon Thursday, March 19, 2009 12:17 PM

@ F.S , Razdar, Asifr, lala, red hawkand all other qualifiers...

it has been found that C.A, pakistan affairs, essay and composition are very low scoring subjects... any one who is above 55 marks; blessed ones with 60 is supposed to be highest scorer in these subjects. 60 marks in these subjects must be considered 85 marks in eds!
I m taking this issue on the behalf of this whole forum members who want to give it their best shot. Please let us know in explanatory details how did u manage to get these huge numbers. share us your tips.
This forum is no less than an organized academy to us; where our guides are qualifiers....we are in the best company indeed, and surely in safe hands.
p.s : for the ease of understanding..in addition to your proposed ways. tell us length of answer given, markers highlighters for ornating, style of writing which predominated mind of a qualifer;whether analytical, factual, examples mentioned in abundance, use of flow charts or maps, use of poems, anecdotes in essay? length of answers in composition, precis attempting pattern....
i sense that ths sounds a bit exhaustive, but your help shall not go in vain..trust us!
regards

Help us!!

usman khalid Thursday, March 19, 2009 09:40 PM

For Dear Members Sumair and Raz
 
For Dear Sumair:

I attempted the essay: 'Peace: The essential message of our religion'. I wrote approximately 2000 words. I paced my essay like this:
Meaning of Islam: Peace by submitting one's will to the ALMIGHTY
concept of peace in other major religion: divine and man-made religions
only islam implemens peace practically
islam as deen-e-fitrat
examples: sulah hudaibia, meesaq-e-madina, fatah-e-makkah, muhammad bin qasim's arrival in sindh etc. to date.
qutations of various personalities about islam
verses from holy quran and hadis
comparison with other religions
In WW1, over 20 million and in WW2, over 40 million died. It never happened in islam
Examples from the life of Holy Prophet (PBUH)
Western view of islam: West is presenting wrong image of islam through their weapon; Media
Finally, Conlusion

I followed this approach.

and Dear Raz,

I prepared much for composition paper. The book, 'Exploring the world of english' proved very beneficial for me. I was able to solve the grammar portion (Direct/Indirect, Correction, Idioms, Pair of Words, Vocab) much better. I think one must do this portion in start. These are confirmed marks. I used a book, the name of which i have forgotton now, it had 100 quotations eloborating their meanings. I used it for expansion of idea question. For precis question, again, 'Exploring the world of english' came in handy. It has very good tips regarding precis. Beleive me, i forgot to write the topic of precis (consisting of 5 marks), even then i scored 61 by the grace of ALLAH.

hope it helps...

Chauhdary12 Thursday, March 19, 2009 09:58 PM

[quote=usman khalid]I used a book, the name of which i have forgotton now, it had 100 quotations eloborating their meanings. I used it for expansion of idea question. [/quote]

Assalam-u-Alaikum to all,

I'll be very thankful to you, if you please tell me the name of the quotations book.

Raz Friday, March 20, 2009 01:58 AM

[QUOTE=asif ahmed]Tarique Manzoor Chandio

Merit No: 8

1st In Sindh (r)
Essay 56
Eng Comp 53
E D S 83
Current Affairs 46
Pak Affairs 56
Islamiyat 67
History Indo Pak 114
Pol: Science129
Sindhi 93
Constitution Law
Total Written 747
Interview 167
Total 910.[/QUOTE]

Dear Tarqi Manzoor accept my heartiest congratulations on your marvelous performance in CSS. We are proud of you.

Please do share your tips for scoring in Sindhi. You have extra ordinarily performed in your mother tongue.


Regards

Noor_2009 Friday, March 20, 2009 07:01 AM

@amubarak


Geri, J. Richard & Zimbardo, G.Phillip. (2005). These r authors name but U did not mention book name? 2nd kiya ya book buy ki ja sakti haa photo copy format ma??? :sad: What will be its price?? Plz tell me
Thanks.
Regards..

555 Friday, March 20, 2009 10:59 PM

Here goes my DMS
essay : 50
Composition:59
EDS: 81
C.A.:41:oo
Pak.A:44:oo
Islamic studies:47:oo
Sociology:43:oo
C.Law: 41:oo
Forestry:64
Public admin.:62
Physics:70+68=138

Total in written=670
viva=140
Aggregate=810
Merit order=186

Emoemar Saturday, March 21, 2009 12:01 AM

Thank you all for your kind remarks.

As far as my essay goes, I am myself pleasantly surprised :) and very thankful to Allah, but i will recount what i did keep in mind while attempting the paper.

Firstly, i went for a topic i knew i had sufficient knowledge/know how of, in my case being " Global Warming, Fact or Fiction?".
Now i know that for some it is a pretty dull topic, but my aim was to go for a topic i was comfortable with and would not mess up too much even if i went off-track.

I started off by spending a few minutes to have a think about what i would write, and how i was going to present what ever relevant info/arguments i had. To help me with that i made a rough sketch of the different points i will be discussing and organized those points so as to form a coherent narrative/argument.

I think i spent about 15 - 20 mins in the above activity. But i after that i just kept writing, while of course consulting the outline i had drawn frequently to help me stick to the line of arguments i had chosen.

At that moment in time i was luckily well informed regarding the topic, and therefore splashed around different examples, scenarios, factors, figures, measures etc at relevant places. In fact i think my essay more than anything revolved around these examples/scenarios, and they formed an integral part of the argument process for each section. I was also mindful to relate everything to the topic at hand and to each other, where applicable, in order to have a well knit analysis rather than a disjointed patchy collage of facts alone.

Also i had looked at the past papers and had seen that the requirement of essay is 4500-6000 words, so had gone into the exam keeping in mind that limit, and when i drew my outline i still had that limit in mind and only noticed the new limit (of fewer words) in the Essay 2008 paper later on. Nevertheless, couldn't bring myself to leave any of the things i had decided to write about so i just went ahead and wrote em all :blush: . I think my final essay was around 6300-6500 words, but by this i am not advocating every one to do the same, just what i had done. I think the most difficult part of writing this much was to be mindful not to repeat what i had written, i think i did not really repeat much at all, except for emphasis of course.

Rest as i have already said, i was my self pleasantly surprised and grateful to Allah for the outcome of my effort.

Hope this answers your queries, and helps you in approaching your own essay.

Regards


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