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Farhan
i am afraid you have messed up a bit here. You should have gone for easier one,while they were available to you. Still don't lose heart and best of luck for coming exams. |
[QUOTE=strategic;1057818]Farhan
i am afraid you have messed up a bit here. You should have gone for easier one,while they were available to you. Still don't lose heart and best of luck for coming exams.[/QUOTE]I was really confused in 4 topics at last unknowingly I went for this one. Sent from my SM-E500H using Tapatalk |
Assalm o Alaikum
In the topic "The threat of Global Warming and ways to encounter it.", was it wise to discuss the causes in details when they have not been mentioned/asked in the topic itself? And if it was necessary to go into the details of causes too, no matter whether they have been asked or not, then how much deduction should I expect. Regards |
Attempted "Emerging Power of Social Media: Prospects and Problems"
Outline 1. Introduction 2. Definition (s) 3. Types of Social Media (viz-a-viz purpose) a. Blogging b. Microblogging c. Social Networks d. Messaging Platforms e. Video Shring f. Photo Sharing g. Literary Ventures 4. What is the power of Social Media: Meaning 5. Manifestations of Social Media Power a. Tahrir Square (Egypt) b. Zainab Murder Case (Pakistan) c. Manifestations in India (RSS) d. Preferences in Diplomatic Arena 6. Prospects 7. Problems 8. Conclusion Wrote over 2,000 words in 16 pages including outline (29 lines in each page with approximately 4/5 words in each row). Satisfied with my arguments, references, quotes and subsequent discussion. However, feeling on the lower side as my writing is bad and perhaps it became worse (cutting) during the last hour when i had to rush to complete the essay. |
[QUOTE=ammar0543;1057821]Assalm o Alaikum
In the topic "The threat of Global Warming and ways to encounter it.", was it wise to discuss the causes in details when they have not been mentioned/asked in the topic itself? And if it was necessary to go into the details of causes too, no matter whether they have been asked or not, then how much deduction should I expect. Regards[/QUOTE] IMO, one cannot directly discuss 'ways' to counter a particular phenomenon. It was perhaps prerequisite to explain what is the threat and how it is caused. |
[QUOTE=ali665;1057826]IMO, one cannot directly discuss 'ways' to counter a particular phenomenon. It was perhaps prerequisite to explain what is the threat and how it is caused.[/QUOTE]Thanks God; this thought nearly gave me heart attack. I also emphasized on causes.
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Saaila
Commendable effort. You will do great |
I opted topic 9. ‘Will ‘Rule of law’ always remain an impracticable myth in our country?’
1- Introduction -How media has desensitised the corruption culture in Pakistan. -Pakistan rank in Transparent International Corruption -Pakistan rank in Global Gender Gap Report. -over 1.8 million cases pending in Pakistan- Dawn Report -Recent Examples of Zainab, Naqeeb, PM case Thesis statement : Rule of law is one of the fundamental pillars of democratic countries, Unfortunately Pakistan is one of those democratic crountries where rule of law would always remain impracticable 2- Genesis of Rule of Law in pakistan 3- Brief History of its implementation in early stages -establishment of FACC -NAB 4- Manifestation of lack of Rule of Law - Public sphere -Economic sphere -Social sphere -administrative sphere 5-Why it is a myth ? current Impediments. - institution victimization -exploitation of weak -weak judiciary - state incompetency to apply education at primary level -poverty -political instability -Economic Instability 6- Why it will remain a Myth ? Future Constraints -reforms and instituion building -economic reforms -political turmoils -lack of ppl to come forward -Role of judiciary and Parliament 7- Global view - Khaleda Zia’s arrest -Turkey 2013 corruption scandal -irelan re elections 8- conclusion How shall we reap fruit of rule of law in future if we are not sowing the seeds today. Comments ? |
ammar0543
No essay is complete without cascading effect in it. How can you write an essay on a phenomenon such as global warming without discussing its causes. If you didn't mention causes of global warming, you definitely missed major plot point. Of course, title of essay is usually brief and they don't ask about minute details in topic. You have to explain such points to build up your case. This is so primary. I haven't seen your essay, so i cannot comment how many marks you are going to fetch. |
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