ali665
i don't know how much you have written about "prospects" & "problems" of social media. That will decide your fate because that is what they actually asked for. Rest you wrote is just supplementary.

Noormah
Good effort. In my opinion you have passed the exam.

[QUOTE=strategic;1057839]Noormah
Good effort. In my opinion you have passed the exam.[/QUOTE]

ALLAH apki zubaan mubarik karay. Ameeen
JazakALLAH

[QUOTE=strategic;1057834]ammar0543
No essay is complete without cascading effect in it. How can you write an essay on a phenomenon such as global warming without discussing its causes. If you didn't mention causes of global warming, you definitely missed major plot point. Of course, title of essay is usually brief and they don't ask about minute details in topic. You have to explain such points to build up your case. This is so primary. I haven't seen your essay, so i cannot comment how many marks you are going to fetch.[/QUOTE]
Thanks for your response. Well I went through following outlines
1. Introduction
2. Myth vs Reality (Republicans+Oil Companies propaganda vs Scientists)
3. Evidences (Increased CO2 conc., Ocean Surface, heat waves etc.)
4. Effects
4.1 Global Temperature Rise
4.2 Ocean Acidity
4.2 Increased Concentration of CO2
4.3 Glacial Retreat
4.4 Snow melt at Arctic and Greenland
4.4 Disturbed Seasonal Pattern
4.5 Wild Life extinction
4.6 Coastal Areas
4.7 Implications on Pakistan
5. Global Efforts till now
6. How to encounter
6.1 Carbon Tax
6.1 Moving towards fossil fuel free world
6.2 Renewable energy resources
6.3 Switching Food choices and life style
6.4 Collective Responsibility
6.5
7. Conclusion

[QUOTE=strategic;1057836]ali665
i don't know how much you have written about "prospects" & "problems" of social media. That will decide your fate because that is what they actually asked for. Rest you wrote is just supplementary.[/QUOTE]A page and a half each..

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ammar665
you should have emphasized bit more on causes. But overall you made a good outline. well done.

[QUOTE=strategic;1057855]ammar665
you should have emphasized bit more on causes. But overall you made a good outline. well done.[/QUOTE]
I though for 5 minutes about the causes and then I skipped this section. Well, I hope rest of the things will go fine, Inshaa Allah.

ali665
in my opinion that is brief. You didn't manage it well.
You had the material but emphasized more on secondary topics rather than title of the essay

ammar0543
you should have written in detail about causes. Well, what is done,is done. best of luck for your exams

i also wrote it. but what i thought was to write the pros and cons of social media power. i think it was not about pros and cons. what do u say