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Nice outline, your reasons are solid. but you could do better and i wanna i ask 1 ?
dear how many pages did you write?
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I wrote 23 pages in total. My introduction consisted of one page, which is as follows:

(The United Nations was established in the wake of Second World War to save the succeeding generations from the scourge of war and to ensure a prosperous humanity. But a cursory glance at the past six decades makes it crystal clear that the UNO has miserably failed to meet the expectations embodied in its charter i.e to promote peace and ensure amicable settlement of disputes. Political disputes continue lingering and the socio-econoic sufferings of a large proportion of mankind have not abated. These failures can largely be attributed to the gradually becoming unrepresentative character of the United Nations.)

How many marks would I be able to secure?
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@Nek Muhammad

I wrote 23 pages in total. My introduction consisted of one page, which is as follows:

(The United Nations was established in the wake of Second World War to save the succeeding generations from the scourge of war and to ensure a prosperous humanity. But a cursory glance at the past six decades makes it crystal clear that the UNO has miserably failed to meet the expectations embodied in its charter i.e to promote peace and ensure amicable settlement of disputes. Political disputes continue lingering and the socio-econoic sufferings of a large proportion of mankind have not abated. These failures can largely be attributed to the gradually becoming unrepresentative character of the United Nations.)

How many marks would I be able to secure?
As far as my assessment is concerned, your essay; quantitatively as well as qualitatively is enough good. Dear you'd be able to secure good marks.
Wish U Best Of luck
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thanks yusafzai for ur response
i think we need not worry abt not defining third gender....defining third gender in this essay is like defining 'women' in essay titled 'can women b equal to men in pakistan?' so cheers....All is well...
Great!! That's a valid point. U made my day. Thanks and let's hope 4 da best.
I discussed my essay with one very senior prof. and he said "Very few would ve attempted dis topic nd should be scoring one" ... i've no clue/experience of marking though, just sharing his remarks.
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Pakistan is rich in natural resources but very poor in their management.

now this is essay is about good governance and issues of governance in Pakistan.
now those who attempted it,did they mention about natural resources?
if mentioned how they tackle natural resources part of essay?
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but i think u not talk about to correct bottom line management?
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I could not write 2500 words ,mine would be 1700-1800 almost. Does it affect?



My Outline wasn't comprehensive like yours but points were same and No. of pages too.
u wrote betweeb 1700-1800 words....well one of my cousin he wrote 1800-2000 in year 2008 he scored 42 marks...his outline was outstanding and he attemtped the essay very well....he told me that to take care of the length.....it should be cross the limit of 2500 words....if u want to score passing marks....he was failed in islamiat unfortunately although he scored over all 664/1200....
and one of his frnd she aslo failed in essay by one mark and her score was 700/1200....and u know at 700 u can expect top position in css.... so see just neglecting few things u can even loose ur position....
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yep i agree with wasfa.
remember dear fellows one thing when u r in exam hall: "STAY SAFE". try ur best in making it sure that ur essay meets the requirement presented by the paper-checker. read the instructions carefully and attempt accordingly. i remember 1 of my very talented friends who didn't read the instructions for essay in ce09, hence did not wrote the outline, and was so tense for the rest of two days. and of course, tension is what u can't afford during css exam. therefore, to avoid unnecessary burden on ur nerves, stay safe, try ur best that ur essay meets (or is almost near about) the requirements thereof. for example, the length wanted is 2500 words. if u cannot write 2500 or plus, then at least ur essay should b round about 2000, 2100 words.



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Hey Guys Very Few Of you have Attempted An Essay On ' Without Independent Truth Finding Commission Accountability is Unachievable. Plz come up with the Crux of what this Essay should be All about. Tc
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wsalam ayezzaS, your outline is superb.. how come u wrote 57 pages, i could only manage 24, r 25 i think...
my outline, though not as comprehensive as yours, was as follows;

1. Different approaches to religion ( a pie in the sky etc)
2. the statement is a myth (how come)
a. Crusades (these were for political reasons and not for religion)
b. Renaissance and Reformation (30 years war for political reasons)
c. Partition (muslims used ideological nationalism in order to counter territorial nationalism and not for pure religious purpose)
d. CLash of civilization theory
3. Who is responsible for creating this myth:
a. media
b. neo cons
4. summary of different religions (how they are doing good to human relations)
5. conclusion
i forgot some points... plz do comment on my effort
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A.A hey dearies i attempted an essay on the same topic i.e RELIGION has done more harm than good to human relations"...mine essay was a strenous effort as it was about 57 pages long...i didnt draw any margin lines and my handwritig aint much wide...
outlines were 29-m just giving a gist ov them over here...
RELIGION-a narration of the term
religion-an enduring legacy
a saga that is many a thousand year old
an analysis ov the world religions
FROM hu-TAAH ov egypt to QURAN...GOD the desire ov all!
an endeavor for peace
PEACE A wish of all world religions
reason ov the clashes-IGNORANCE
clash ov civilizations-origin,narration n flaws
from bernard lewis to sam huntingn-more realism than truth
existentialism-that takes to religion
humanism-the legacy ov each faith
terrorism-an outcome ov ignorance
NOAM chomsky illustrates the altered religious percepas
man is prone to error
error in understanding-leads to conflict
islam-a humanistic phenomena
religion-a search for peace
religion-not at fault
human intellectual erroneos perspectives-reasons ov the harm

conclusion-reason ov conflicts,sorrows n disastrous deeds is ignorant human mind religiond bears no fault!
so people,there were many other as well-dnt remember thm all...3 pages were for them n 54 for their elaborations!///..please do comment n pray!:
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@farrukh...you dont know how good is it to hear from you...i thought people forgot mine...thanks a million dear...and yours is a very nice attempt too...it was a tough topic to grasp but as you managed to undertake the theory-the flawd theory ov clash ov civilisations-so the essay would have been a real good attempt!
well.....ALLAH blessed me to write and moreover-religion had has been an agony all my life-that restless pain for the quest ov truth helped a great deal!
please pray for me and may ALLAH bless you too...amen..
thanks again.
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