Essay Paper 2011
 

[SIZE="4"][FONT="Georgia"][CENTER][B]Compitive Examination for
Recruitment to posts in BS-17
Under the federal government of Pakistan, 2011[/B][/CENTER][/FONT][/SIZE]

[B][U][COLOR="Black"][SIZE="4"][CENTER][FONT="Georgia"][U]Essay[/U][/FONT][/CENTER][/SIZE][/COLOR][/U][/B]

[B][LEFT][U]Time allowed: Three Houres[/U] [/LEFT][/B] [RIGHT][B][U]Maximum Marks: 100[/U][/B][/RIGHT]

[U][B]NOTE:[/B][/U] Make an outline and write a [B]Comprihensive Essay (2500-3500 words)[/B] on any one of the following.



[B]1. Truth is a rare commodity despite the freedom enjoys by the print media and electronic media.

2. Whithout good comunication skills, life becomes impossible in the modern world.

3. The time we live in is the winter of the world.

4. In this country reason does not apply to anything.

5. Does pakistani society regard women as the angle in the house of the source of all evils?

6. Disaster managment and govenment preparedness.

7. Fair play and life, as it is lived, in the land of poor.

8. The pleasure of reading.

9. What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truely indipendent state?

10. Insanity in individual is something rare but groups, parties and nations it is the rule.[/B]

I wrote 2200 words on

[B][U]What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state?[/U][/B]

My Outline was

[B]INTRODUCTION[/B]
Hallmarks of our dependence
What are truly independent states

[B]HISTORICAL PERSPECTIVE[/B]
Alignment towards one superpower
1950s
1960s-1980s
1990s
Post 9/11

External Interferences
Dismemberment of East Pakistan 1971

Nuclear Explosions 1998

[B]MAIN CAUSES[/B]
Lack of National Integration
Failure of Democracy
Poor Economic Growth
Lack of Education & Health care
Dependence on foreign aid

[B]REMEDIAL MEASURES[/B]
Economic Turnaround
National Integration
Provision of Social services
Democracy must be allowed to flourish

[B]CONCLUSION[/B]

Outline was on 1.5 pages and essay on 11 pages

[QUOTE=Yasinleo;271426]these r the actual topics

1.freedom of press n its effects
2.importance of communication skills
5. status of women
6. disaster management
8. reading
9. hurdles in development of Pakistan OR socio-economic problems of Pakistan
10. unity is strength[/QUOTE]
1.statement demands why media having freedom lacks truth factor
2.statement demands importance but it also has two more words life and modern world
5.you have to say her angel or source of evil,not both
6.disaster management is only a part,government facts and figures and measures are also important
pleasures are asked only in case of reading
hurdles to be an independent state-yes socio-economic

I think it was an easy one for the person who prepared..!! I think I prepapared just one essay full fledged :D and dat was in paper ;)

Mein e Bismillah ker deti hun
Logo mera essay nae acha hua,I attempted the first one:(:(:
Only 7 pages and perhaps the wrong handling of the topic:(
:cry:cry:cry:cry:cry:cry:cry:

[QUOTE=mani1;271469]I wrote 2200 words on

[B][U]What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state?[/U][/B]

My Outline was

[B]INTRODUCTION[/B]
Hallmarks of our dependence
What are truly independent states

[B]HISTORICAL PERSPECTIVE[/B]
Alignment towards one superpower
1950s
1960s-1980s
1990s
Post 9/11

External Interferences
Dismemberment of East Pakistan 1971

Nuclear Explosions 1998

[B]MAIN CAUSES[/B]
Lack of National Integration
Failure of Democracy
Poor Economic Growth
Lack of Education & Health care
Dependence on foreign aid

[B]REMEDIAL MEASURES[/B]
Economic Turnaround
National Integration
Provision of Social services
Democracy must be allowed to flourish

[B]CONCLUSION[/B]

Outline was on 1.5 pages and essay on 11 pages[/QUOTE]



Same topic and same outline:vic

I chose topic no. [B]9: Hurdles to being independent[/B]

[B]1) Introduction[/B]
(a) The meaning of Independence/Sovereignty
(b) The sovereign states of the world
(c) The Third World and Pakistan

[B]2) Hurdles[/B]
(a) Illiteracy, lack of awareness, "sheep" mentality.
(b) Weak economy - interdependence, neocolonialism.
(c) Disunity, nationalist sentiments, political instability.
(d) Opportunism, self-serving politicians and people. Brain drain.
(e) Lack of freedom for citizens results in an oppressed state.

[B]3) Solutions[/B]
(a) Introducing rural education to most backward areas, improving overall quality.
(b) Aim for self-sufficiency, land reform, nurture growth.
(c) Promote national ideology,
(d) Promotion of human rights, curbing of power of establishment.


It was something like this. I think it was average at best. I could've written a lot better but I felt so tired after the half-way mark! =(

OOps..!! Farrah..!! Better luck next time :P
Dont woory ho jayay ga clear :)

[QUOTE=Farrah Zafar;271476]Mein e Bismillah ker deti hun
Logo mera essay nae acha hua,I attempted the first one:(:(:
Only 7 pages and perhaps the wrong handling of the topic:(
:cry:cry:cry:cry:cry:cry:cry:[/QUOTE]

Dont worry dear. you have too much time and two remaining chances yet. Attempt your papers for exprience:ph34r:

I did a major blunder by allocating 45 minutes to outline; Yes 45 mins! Therefore due to lack of time I could only write 2200 words. This however has been a very humbling and interesting experience. Hopefully I would do better in next papers