Yes you are true so i endorse your point of view but dissent and diversity is the source of strength

[QUOTE=seher bano;510969]i have read in Saadat Ali shah that we should not borrow even a single word from the original passage except few such as names, events or some others. And in this passage happiness should be changed with some similar word. Well its my observation and might be possible you are right.[/QUOTE]

You have misconstrued the words that are written in Sadaat's book. We can borrow some words. Let me say: What will you write if there is a precis on GLASS? will you change the word just because you can not quote the original words? No way... We can use words in precis that are essential to be used anyhow...

@ saher
 

What about other precis. Have you started solving them?

yes i have started from 2012 and going towards 2000. Slowly slowly i will solve every paper

Please check Correction of sentences (2011)

Incorrect: Please speak to the concerned clerk.
[B]Correct:[/B] Please speak to the clerk concerned.
Incorrect: You have got time too short for that.
[B]Correct:[/B] You have got too short time for that
Incorrect: Not only he was a thief, but he was also a murderer.
[B]Correct:[/B] Not only he was thief, but also a murderer
Incorrect: They thought that the plan would be succeeded.
[B]Correct:[/B] They thought the plan would be succeed
Incorrect: It is unlikely that he wins the race
[B]Correct:[/B] It is unlikely that he win the race
Incorrect: My uncle has told me something about it yesterday.
[B]Correct:[/B] My uncle told me something about it yesterday
Incorrect: I hoped that by the time I would have got there it would have stopped raining.
[B]Correct:[/B] I hoped that by the time I get there it would have stopped raining
Incorrect: They prevented the driver to stop.
[B]Correct:[/B] They prevented the driver from stopping.

Please Check Direct indirect (2011)
“I couldn’t get into the house because I had lost my key, so I had to break a window”, he said.
[B]1.[/B] He explained that he could not get into the house, because he had lost his key. So, he had to break a window.
“Would you like to see over the house or are you more interested in the garden”? She asked me.
[B]2.[/B] She wanted to know whether he liked to see over the house or was more interested in the garden
“Please send whatever you can spare. All contributions will be acknowledged immediately”, said the secretary of the disastrous fund.
[B]3. [/B]Secretary of the disastrous fund requested that sent whatever they could spare; all the contribution should be acknowledged immediately.
She asked if he’d like to go to the concert and I said I was sure he would.
[B]4.[/B] “Would you like to go to the concert? I am sure he will.”
I told her to stop making a fuss about nothing and said that she was lucky to have got a seat at all.
[B]5. [/B]“Stop making a fuss about nothing, she is lucky to get a seat at all.” He said
The teacher said, “You must not forget what I told you last lesson. I shall expect you to be able to repeat it next lesson by heart.”
[B]6. [/B]The teacher reminded the student that they must not forget what he had told them last lesson. He would expect them to be able to repeat that next lesson by heart.
He asked me if he should leave it in the car.
[B]7.[/B] “Shall you leave it in the care?” she asked
He said, “May I open the window? It’s rather hot in here.”
[I]8.[/I] He asked that might he open the window. It’s rather hot in there.

A very good effort with a few little mistakes highlighted by Adeel sb. I am also making an effort. Comments and suggestions will be highly appreciated.

[B]Title :[/B] [COLOR="Blue"]Reasons of psychological discontent[/COLOR]

[B]Precise[/B]: There are numerous reasons of psychological discontent. Some people are despondent because they have been destitute in their early life and now they emphasize on only one side of the life. Recent studies states that some people indulge themselves into drugs to cease the feelings of sorrow and the life itself has no attraction for them. There is a need to awake the desire for joy in such people. With a few exceptions mostly people want to be happy. Some people opt the feeling of discontentment as the only sane option as they had enjoyed the passions of life in their youth and now they only proud of their achievements. This behavior misguides the naive people.

Correction of sentences.
They thought that the plan would succeed or
They thought that the plan will be successful.

[QUOTE=saeed jatoi;514314]Correction of sentences.
They thought that the plan would succeed or
They thought that the plan will be successful.[/QUOTE]

They thought that the plan would succeed:mellow:

[QUOTE=seher bano;509978][B]CSP,s and Seniors, Please Check this precise of 2011[/B]
[B]Precise 2011[/B]
[B]Original[/B]
The psychological causes of unhappiness, it is clear, are many and various. But all have something in common. The typical unhappy man is one who having been deprived in youth of some normal satisfaction, has come to value this one kind of satisfaction more than any other, and has, therefore, given to his life a one-sided direction, together with a quite undue emphasis upon the achievement as opposed to the activities connected with it. There is, however, a further development which is very common in the present day. A man may feel so completely thwarted that he seeks no form of satisfaction, but only distraction and oblivion. He then becomes a devotee of “Pleasure”. That is to say, he seeks to make life bearable by becoming less alive. Drunkenness, for example, is temporary suicide; the happiness that it brings is merely negative, a momentary cessation of unhappiness. The narcissist and megalomaniac believe that happiness is possible, though they may adopt mistaken means of achieving it; but the man who seeks intoxication, in whatever form, has given up hope except in oblivion. In his case the fist thing to be done is to persuade him that happiness is desirable. Men, who are unhappy, like men who sleep badly, are always proud of the fact. Perhaps their pride is like that of the fox that had lost his tail; if so, the way to cure it is to point out to them how they can grow a new tail. Very few men, I believe, will deliberately choose unhappiness if they see a way of being happy. I do not deny that such men exist, but they are not sufficiently numerous to be important. It is common in our day, as it has been in many other periods of the world’s history, to suppose that those among us who are wise have seen through all the enthusiasms of earlier times and have become aware that there is nothing left to live for. The men who hold this view are genuinely unhappy, but they are proud of their unhappiness, which they attribute to the nature of the universe and consider to be the only rational attitude for an enlightened man. Their pride in their unhappiness makes less sophisticated people suspicious of its genuineness; they thing that the man who enjoys being miserable is not miserable. [B](Words Count: 391)[/B]

[B]Precise
Title : Psychological factor of discontentment.[/B]

Psychological factors of discontentment are numerous. The hopeless person is one who fails , in adolescent, to have his due portion of contentment and takes the particular way of life coupled with the extra focus on the accomplishment that are in contrast to the feat linked with it. Possibly, one can be so pessimistic that everything becomes useless for them. Drunkenness always brings momentary contentment. Authoritarians believe that contentment is achievable, but people who desire for intoxicant are pessimistic. They can be made sure about the possibility of contentment. Drinkers usually feel pride of their discontentment and very less people, despite contentment, opt for discontentment. Nowadays there is a general perception that contented people have enjoyed their life and there is nothing new any more. This fact usually distracts the naïve people.
[B](Words 132)[/B][/QUOTE]
A very good effort with a few little mistakes highlighted by Adeel sb. I am also making an effort. Comments and suggestions will be highly appreciated.

Title : Reasons of psychological discontent

Precise: There are numerous reasons of psychological discontent. Some people are despondent because they have been destitute in their early life and now they emphasize on only one side of the life. Recent studies states that some people indulge themselves into drugs to cease the feelings of sorrow and the life itself has no attraction for them. There is a need to awake the desire for joy in such people. With a few exceptions mostly people want to be happy. Some people opt the feeling of discontentment as the only sane option as they had enjoyed the passions of life in their youth and now they only proud of their achievements. This behavior misguides the naive people.
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