The precies must be attempted in natural way according to the concept and topic of the precise given. Sometimes its good to write in first person but in some topics first person approach seems eccentric.

[QUOTE=Sana Rasool;913065]Synonyms
Stentorian
Louche

Antonyms:
Germane
Sartorial[/QUOTE]

Could anybody plz give the options of the first part i.e mcqs

Let me tell you one thing, if the word author is used continuously it would seem bizarre. This is a kind of autobiography and it's better to use first person for the sake of clarification, as has been used at the place wherefrom the passage was copy pasted.

[QUOTE=shaemureed;913118]The easiest paper in css history. Repent over not appearing this time.
See the translation!
Common man thinks that the laws of country and indivisual freedom are opposit to each other. Apparently this does not seems wrong. Every law has some restrictions to citizens in different form. The more are the laws of a country the the higher are the collective restrictions. The indivisual liberty gets pressed due to more restrictions. In opposit to it, the circle of indivisual freem gets broader if the number of laws are reduced.

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"what happend to john? " asked Helena to West. "he left the company" was the answer from West. "he asked me for a rise but I didnt give to him" said West. "why didnt you gave him rise?" inquired Helen. West replied "he was so lazy". Helen further asked "has he found another job?". "yes, he is working in a film company"answered West. Helen continued asking "what is his salary like?" "I think he earns quite alot" was the answer from West. "does he like the new job? " continued Helen. West responded " i dont know"



Correction would be respected. Best of luck to all who appeared![/QUOTE]
Waoo...great sir...you did wonder...you are so fortunate.

The precise was taken from this website
 

The precise was taken from this sitehttp://www.englishdaily626.com/summary.php?003
here is the precise with solution
We visited Qualla Boundary, a town in Cherokee. The mountain scenery surrounding the town was a breathtaking sight. The traditional lifestyle of the Indians, the tribal crafts they made and the historical pageant played six times a week, presented to tourists a rough image of Cherokee in the 18th century. We also visited the souvenir shops which sold rubber tomahawks and war bonnets. There we befriended a local, George, who told us that besides trade, the "Bingo Weekend," where the tourists can enjoy various kinds of games in a large hall, is another source of income for them during off-tour seasons. Finally, we visited the town's museum where different kinds of arts, like handwoven baskets and carved figurines are displayed. . ( 118 words )

Q.2

SUMMARIZE IN NOT MORE THAN 120 WORDS, DESCRIBING THE AUTHOR'S TRIP IN CHEROKEE. YOU MAY ADOPT THE AUTHOR'S POINT OF VIEW

During my vacation last May, I had a hard time choosing a tour. Flights to Japan, Hong Kong and Australia are just too common. What I wanted was somewhere exciting and exotic, a place where I could be spared from the holiday tour crowds. I was so happy when Joan called up, suggesting a trip to Cherokee, a county in the state of Oklahoma. I agreed and went off with the preparation immediately.
We took a flight to Cherokee and visited a town called Qualla Boundary Surrounded by magnificent mountain scenery, the town painted a paradise before us. With its Oconaluftee Indian Village reproducing tribal crafts and lifestyles of the 18th century and the outdoor historical pageant Unto These Hillsplaying six times weekly in the summer nights, Qualla Boundary tries to present a brief image of the Cherokee past to the tourists.
Despite the language barrier, we managed to find our way to the souvenir shops with the help of the natives. The shops are filled with rubber tomahawks and colorful traditional war bonnets, made of dyed turkey feathers. Tepees, cone-shaped tents made from animal skin, are also pitched near the shops. "Welcome! Want to get anything ?" We looked up and saw a middle-aged man smiling at us. We were very surprised by his fluent English. He introduced himself as George and we ended up chatting till lunch time when he invited us for lunch at a nearby coffee shop.
"Sometimes, I've to work from morning to sunset during the tour season. Anyway, this is still better off than being a woodcutter ..." Remembrance weighed heavy on George's mind and he went on to tell us that he used to cut firewood for a living but could hardly make ends meet. We learnt from him that the Cherokees do not depend solely on trade for survival. During the tour off-peak period, the tribe would have to try out other means for income. One of the successful ways is the "Bingo Weekend". On the Friday afternoons of the Bingo weekends, a large bingo hall will be opened, attracting huge crowds of people to the various kinds of games like the Super Jackpot and the Warrior Game Special. According to George, these forms of entertainment fetch them great returns.
Our final stop in Qualla Boundary was at the museum where arts, ranging from the simple hand-woven oak baskets to wood and stone carvings of wolves, ravens and other symbols of Cherokee cosmology are displayed.
Back at home, I really missed the place and I would of course look forward to the next trip to another exotic place.

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Answer
We visited Qualla Boundary, a town in Cherokee. The mountain scenery surrounding the town was a breathtaking sight. The traditional lifestyle of the Indians, the tribal crafts they made and the historical pageant played six times a week, presented to tourists a rough image of Cherokee in the 18th century. We also visited the souvenir shops which sold rubber tomahawks and war bonnets. There we befriended a local, George, who told us that besides trade, the "Bingo Weekend," where the tourists can enjoy various kinds of games in a large hall, is another source of income for them during off-tour seasons. Finally, we visited the town's museum where different kinds of arts, like handwoven baskets and carved figurines are displayed. .

(Taken from [url]http://www.englishdaily626.com/summary.php?003[/url])

Q.4 (a) English Error Correction Exercise

2. She recommended me that I take a few days off from work.
Answer: She recommended me that I take a few days off from work.
We need to use the subjunctive in this example. This page does a nice job explaining the English subjunctive. The subjunctive form is the infinitive without “to” (go, eat, do, run, etc.)
3. I tried to explain him the problem, but he had difficulty understanding me.
Answer: I tried to explain him the problem the problem to him, but he had difficulty understanding me.
Some verbs can be followed by the indirect object and then the direct object. For example, we can say “I gave John the book.” John is the indirect object and book is the direct object. However, we can’t do this with all verbs. Recommend, explain, and describe are three common verbs that take the following form:
recommend/explain/describe + WHAT + TO WHOM
6. I don’t know why you didn’t go. If I were you, I should have gone.
Answer: I don’t know why you didn’t go. If I were you, I should would have gone.
To talk about a hypothetical past, we can use would/might/could + have + participle. We do not use should to talk about a hypothetical past. We use should to criticize past actions or express regret.
7. Kevin says he stopped to travel internationally because of his family.
Answer: Kevin says he stopped to travel traveling internationally because of his family.
We can use the verb stop with both the gerund and the infinitive. When we use stopwith the gerund, it means that someone was doing something and then stopped.
(Question 2,3,6,7 taken from [url]http://www.businessenglishresources.com/common-english-mistakes-english-error-correction-3a-advanced[/url])

Q.4 (b)
"It isn't fair!" shouted Martin. Coach Lewis
never lets me start the game!"
a. . b. , c. ! d. " e. none

10. Maureen's three sisters, Molly, Shannon, and
Patricia are all spending the summer at their
grandmother's beach house.
a. ; b. - c. ! d. , e. none

11. For the centerpieces, the florist recommended
the following flowers daisies, tulips, daffodils,
and hyacinths.
a. : b. , c. . d. ; e. none
12. Lily is an accomplished gymnast she won three
medals in her last competition.
a. ; b. , c. ? d. : e. None
13. Everyone was shocked when Max Smithfield —
a studious, extremely bright high school senior
decided that college was not for him.
a. ; b. , c. - d. : e. none

Website: [url]https://archive.org/stream/learningenglish_201409/501_Grammar_and_Writing_2006_djvu.txt[/url]


Q.5 (a) Analogies:
1. SLAPSTIC:LAUGHTER (HORROR:FEAR)
2. CONVICTION:INCARCERATION (REDUCTION:DIMINUTION)
3. PROFESSOR:ERUDITE (INVENTOR:IMAGINATIVE)
4. METAPHOR:SYMBOL (ANALOGY:COMPARISON)
5. SPY:CLANDESTINE (ACCOUNTANT:METICULOUS)
6. VERVE:ENTHUSIASM (DEVOTION:REVERENCE)
7. DELTOID:MUSCLE (RADIUS:BONE)
8. DEPENDABLE:CAPRICIOUS CAPABLE:INEPT

(All anologies were taken from [url]http://www.indiabix.com/logical-reasoning/analogies/017005[/url])

Q.6 (a)
1. adverse, averse
Adverse means inauspicious, hostile; averse means disinclined, repelled.
“I’m very much averse to making a long, arduous journey under such adverse weather conditions.”

2. altogether, all together
Altogether means wholly; all together means everybody in a group:
“It’s altogether too bad that you can’t come.”
“All together, now: ‘Good morning, Sir!’”

3. allude, elude
Allude means to refer to; elude means to dodge or escape.

4. braise, braze
Braise means to cook slowly in liquid (usually meat); braze most commonly means to solder with an alloy of copper and zinc.

5. curb, kerb
Curb means to control, as in “curb your temper”, while kerb is the edge of a footpath or sidewalk.

6. faze, phase
The most common error is the use of phase when the writer means faze. To faze someone is to fluster or confuse them, whereas phase is mostly used in reference to a stage in someone’s life—though it can be a stage in almost anything else:
“Like most children, Danny’s going through a phase of refusing to eat his vegetables.”
“Nothing fazes my mother, who can produce a meal for unexpected guests at a moment’s notice.”

7. maybe, may be
Another tricky one, best explained by demonstration:
“Maybe you could explain this to us a little clearer.”
“It may be a good idea to give us a clearer explanation of this.”

8. moat, mote
Somebody found this confusion in Twilight by Stephenie Meyer. Moat is a deep, wide ditch surrounding a castle, fort or town. Usually filled with water, it is intended as a defence against attack. Mote is a tiny piece of substance, as in motes of dust that can show up in a sunbeam. Apparently Meyer had written “dust moats”.
Taken from: [URL]http://labarker.com/WritingRelated/words.html[/URL]

Q.6 (b)
89. Smash hit -
Meaning - Refers to music, films which are very successful.
Example - His music became a smash hit in a week's time.
90. Murphy's law -
Meaning - Means that if anything can go wrong, it will.
Example - Let's be prepared for the worst but don't forget the Murphy's law.
91. Place in the sun -
Meaning - Finding a place in the sun refers to a position which provides you all the success and happiness you want in your life.
Example - Getting married into the renowned business family in the town, she found a place in the sun.
96. Wooden spoon -
Meaning - Imaginary prize for the last person in a race.
Example - We won a wooden spoon at the fashion show.
Note: (1,2,3,4 taken from [URL]http://www.careerride.com/idioms-meaning-and-examples-part-4.aspx[/URL])

56. Go bananas -
Meaning - Refers to someone who behaves in a crazy way out of emotions.
Example - Your decision to go abroad for a year will make your family go bananas.
54. Beard the lion in his den -
Meaning - Challenge someone in his own area.
Example - If he doesn't come to see me today, I'll have to beard the lion in his den.
53. Groan inwardly -
Meaning - Refers to a feeling where you want to express despair, disapproval or distress, but you keep quite.
Example - She was quite disappointed at the sarcastic remark by her friend but looking at the situation sh groaned inwardly.
Note( 5,6,7 taken from [URL]http://www.careerride.com/idioms-meaning-and-examples-part-3.aspx[/URL])

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Ιndirect speech: Helen: Mr West, what's happened to John?
Mr West: He's left the company
Helen: Why has he done that?
Mr West: He asked me for a rise but I didn't give it to him.
Helen: Why didn't you give him a rise?
Mr West: Because he was lazy.
Helen: Has he found another job?
Mr West: Yes, he is working in a film company.
Helen: What is his salary like?
Mr West: I think he earns quite a lot.
Helen: Does he like the new job?
Mr West: I don't know.

"
Mrs. Helen asked Mr. West as to what had happened to John, to Which latter replied that he had left the Company. When she inquired of Mr. West for the Reason he replied that John had asked him for a raise which he declined. When She asked Mr. West the reason for not promoting him, his answer was that john was lazy. She also asked whether john had found another Job. Indeed, John had been working in a film industry affirmed Mr. West. When she asked Mr. West about his salary, he replied that John might be earning quite a lot. She also asked whether john liked his new job or not to which Mr. West replied in his inability of knowledge. ": waiting

[QUOTE=Nazish Hina;913071]What else can be used? I used "I"

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when you write a precise you have to use the third person .i.e 'one' has to go through the rules of precise before attempting it on the exam day.

Direct and indirect wasn't mentioned in syllabus

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OMG.... you won't find these words in any diction...

difficult one.....

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[QUOTE=zeekaay;913187]when you write a precise you have to use the third person .i.e 'one' has to go through the rules of precise before attempting it on the exam day.[/QUOTE]
"one" did read the rules.
From where "one" read the rules. It was written to keep the original tone.
"One" isn't as stupid as you think.
And "one" didn't like your nasty comment one bit

[QUOTE=Nazish Hina;913348]"one" did read the rules.
From where "one" read the rules. It was written to keep the original tone.
"One" isn't as stupid as you think.
And "one" didn't like your nasty comment one bit[/QUOTE]
In my hall, all the learnt ones used the personal pronouns. I myself am of the opinion that one should use personal pronouns for the sake of clarity. You know it would look hilarious when one would write: the writer wanted to go for a tour. The writer's friend suggested him to go to Cherokee and the writer agreed. Lolz

[QUOTE=abbas khan 119;913360]In my hall, all the learnt ones used the personal pronouns. I myself am of the opinion that one should use personal pronouns for the sake of clarity. You know it would look hilarious when one would write: the writer wanted to go for a tour. The writer's friend suggested him to go to Cherokee and the writer agreed. Lolz[/QUOTE]
Why there is such a level of ambiguity,Have you read the precise [B]carefully[/B]?
At the very beginning the writer has told he made a trip to Cherokee along with his friend john.
That's simple instead of I,he ,one and blah blah you can use "[B]they[/B]".
And I don't think that examiner would be a lame duck of such a kind as to deduct your marks on the basis of just this controversy.
I hope you people have got it what I mean.

[QUOTE=abbas khan 119;913360]In my hall, all the learnt ones used the personal pronouns. I myself am of the opinion that one should use personal pronouns for the sake of clarity. You know it would look hilarious when one would write: the writer wanted to go for a tour. The writer's friend suggested him to go to Cherokee and the writer agreed. Lolz[/QUOTE]
What did you use?
And who are those learned ones? :D
[QUOTE=ursula;913363]Why there is such a level of ambiguity,Have you read the precise [B]carefully[/B]?
At the very beginning the writer has told he made a trip to Cherokee along with his friend john.
That's simple instead of I,he ,one and blah blah you can use "[B]they[/B]".
And I don't think that examiner would be a lame duck of such a kind as to deduct your marks on the basis of just this controversy.
I hope you people have got it what I mean.[/QUOTE]
No, Ursula, the problem is not I and we or they.
It is I, we, they vs The author, the writer

[QUOTE=Nazish Hina;913370]What did you use?
And who are those learned ones? :D
[/QUOTE]

one was a pms officer and the second was m.phil in English

[QUOTE=Nazish Hina;913370]What did you use?
And who are those learned ones? :D

No, Ursula, the problem is not I and we or they.
It is I, we, they vs The author, the writer[/QUOTE]
Han,what!
As we haven't visited, so logic of I we is wrong,because examiner will read it as the student is exploring his journey.
Refer to "author" ,than read the passage which tell you that he was accompanied by his friend and at the very start of next paragraph he (the author) has mentioned "we".
:))

[QUOTE=abbas khan 119;913379]one was a pms officer and the second was m.phil in English[/QUOTE]
I like them both. :D
Let's see what examiner does. Or just erase our memories for 7 months..

GEnder Equality is a mYth
 

Introduction:
What is Gender Equality?
origin of the term
History(From western point of view--shakers,From Islamic point of view)

Supporters views
1:Hillary Clinton
2:Malala yousafzae
3:Cady stanton
4:Quid's view

International support.

1:UN conference in Beijing(1995)
2:UN conference in Nairobi(1985)
3:UN conference in colombia(1980)
4:UN conference in Maxico (1975)

Areas in which Women participated

1: Education
2:Sports
3:Politics(mentioned names here)
4:Media
5: i dn remember now :p

Failure of efforts in promoting G.E

1:RApe(all across india and pakistan...case study Mukhtar mai)
2:Marital Rape( Survey 2014 of pakistan,tabaasum adnan story-international courage prize winner)
3:Honor killing( shermin obaid documentry:"A girl in the river")
4:Zero job opportunities in the Arab countries
5:Suffragist Movement(USA,Germany and Switzerland)
6:Hijab --restriction in France
7:Genital Mutilation
8:Freedom of Movement
9:Health issues
10:Acid attacks
11:Domestic violence(western countries-Middle East)
12:Old Tradition( Yemen,Afghanistan,Iran)

this is what i remember about 19 pages including outline

preci title: Atrip to cherkhoe:A county in the state of oklahoma
 

Atrip to cherkhoe:A county in the state of oklahoma:vic

[QUOTE=Maddiha nasim;913392]Introduction:
What is Gender Equality?
origin of the term
History(From western point of view--shakers,From Islamic point of view)

Supporters views
1:Hillary Clinton
2:Malala yousafzae
3:Cady stanton
4:Quid's view

International support.

1:UN conference in Beijing(1995)
2:UN conference in Nairobi(1985)
3:UN conference in colombia(1980)
4:UN conference in Maxico (1975)

Areas in which Women participated

1: Education
2:Sports
3:Politics(mentioned names here)
4:Media
5: i dn remember now :p

Failure of efforts in promoting G.E

1:RApe(all across india and pakistan...case study Mukhtar mai)
2:Marital Rape( Survey 2014 of pakistan,tabaasum adnan story-international courage prize winner)
3:Honor killing( shermin obaid documentry:"A girl in the river")
4:Zero job opportunities in the Arab countries
5:Suffragist Movement(USA,Germany and Switzerland)
6:Hijab --restriction in France
7:Genital Mutilation
8:Freedom of Movement
9:Health issues
10:Acid attacks
11:Domestic violence(western countries-Middle East)
12:Old Tradition( Yemen,Afghanistan,Iran)

this is what i remember about 19 pages including outline[/QUOTE]
Same mistake, committed by me in 2013 essay. Anyhow, best of luck.

CSS 2016 ENGLISH PRECIS & COMPOSITION SOLVED.

Q2 Precis solution:

Title:
Author's trip in Cherokee


The author visited Qualla Boundary, a town in Cherokee. The mountain scenery surrounding the town was a breathtaking sight. The traditional lifestyle of the Indians, the tribal crafts they made and the historical pageant played six times a week, presented to tourists a rough image of Cherokee in the 18th century. They also visited the souvenir shops which sold rubber tomahawks and war bonnets. There they befriended a local, George, who told them that besides trade, the "Bingo Weekend," where the tourists can enjoy various kinds of games in a large hall, is another source of income for them during off-tour seasons. Finally, they visited the town's museum where different kinds of arts, like handwoven baskets and carved figurines are displayed. . ( 118 words )

Q:3 COMPREHENSION.

Q.1. Why most of us fail in our efforts for self-improvement?

We fail in self improvement because our plans need a lot of effort and time to execute them. But, owing to shortage of time our plans become unmanageable. Hence, it results in our failure to improve our self.

Q.2. Why is it a basic mistake to announce our resolution to everybody ?

To announce our resolution to everybody is a rudimentary mistake because our exposing plans to everyone makes us look silly when our determination go in vein. It is even worse If We fall in previous bad days without achieving our ambition after we have exposed our plans.


Q.3. Why did the writer not carry out his resolution on New Years Day?

The writer did not carry out his resolution on New Year's Day because he had a good pretext to shun either of his plans-- exercising. Upcoming over night party made him so exhausted that he failed in continuing his resolution for a couple of days. Finally, He gave up one of his resolution ie exercising, but he was still enthusiastic to read.

Q4. Find out the words in the above passage which convey the similar meaning to the following:

1. Intimidating ( formidable)
2. Peril ( pitfall)
3. Repeal ( fend off )
4. Dwindle ( wane)
5. Barb (Jibe )

CORRECTION:(SOLVED)

ii) she recommended that I take a few days off from work.

(iii) i tried to explain the problem to him, but he had difficulty understanding me.
Put Just TO HIM after Problem.

IV) "I will do the grocery shopping for you Grandma," lucy said.
Quotation mark and Grandma's G capital.

V) We took a tent, a cooler, and a sleeping bag (IT itself is correct.)

(Vi) I don't know why you didn't go. If I were you, i would have gone.

(Vii) kevin says he stopped travelling internationally because of his family.

VIII) "Don't run!" Mr. Salman shouted.
Inverted comma


PUNCTUATION
Q4(b)

1) It isn't fair!" shouted Martin. "Coach Lewis*
never lets me start the game!"*
Inverted comma before Coach

II) Maureen's three sisters, Molly, Shannon, and*
Patricia, (COMMA) are all spending the summer at their*
grandmother's beach house.*

III) For the centerpieces, the florist recommended*
the following flowers:(COLON) daisies, tulips, daffodils,*
and hyacinths.*

IV) Lily is an accomplished gymnast;( SEMICOLON) she won three*
medals in her last competition.*

V) Everyone was shocked when Max Smithfield --
a studious, extremely bright high school senior--(Hiphen SAME AS ABOVE)
decided that college was not for him.*


Q5. (a)Analogies:

1. SLAPSTIC:LAUGHTER (HORROR:FEAR)
2. CONVICTION:INCARCERATION (REDUCTION: IMINUTION)
3. PROFESSOR:ERUDITE (INVENTOR:IMAGINATIVE)
4. METAPHOR:SYMBOL (ANALOGY:COMPARISON)
5. SPY:CLANDESTINE (ACCOUNTANT:METICULOUS)
6. VERVE:ENTHUSIASM (DEVOTION:REVERENCE)
7. DELTOID:MUSCLE (RADIUS:BONE)
8. DEPENDABLE:CAPRICIOUS (CAPABLE:INEPT)

Q.5(b)
Halena asked Mr.West what it had happened to john. Mr. West answered that he had left the company. She further inquired why he had done that. He replied that Mr. John had asked him for a rise but he had not given it to him. She asked Mr. West why he had not given him rise. He answered that Mr. John had been so lazy. She further asked whether Mr. John had found another job. West replied in affirmative and told her that he was working in a film company. She kept asking what his salary is like. He answered that he thought he earned quite alot. Once again, she inquired if he liked the new job. He replied that he did not know.

Q6 (a)
I)
Adverse means unfavorable, contrary or hostile
There are adverse weather conditions in this city.

Averse means unwilling or disinclined or loath
He was averse to discussing the conference.
II)
Altogether means " thoroughly."


The thought of a third world war is altogether frightening

All together means " in a group."

The children were all together on the bus.

III)
Allude:
To make indirect reference

The Animal Farm alluded to the communist regime.

Elude: To escape from someone or something.

The fugitive eluded the police for several months before his girlfriend turned him in.


VI) Faze: disturb

Traffic outside my home fazes me during my sleeping time.

Phase: Specific period of event

Tge world has become global village in the phase of 21st century.

VII)
Maybe: perhaps
Maybe he will die soon.

May be: Model verb that shows possibility

It may be the last chance to acheive one's goal.



Q6 (b) Idioms

Murphy's law
things go wrong that go wrong

Eg. Bad things are likely to continue according to Murphy's law.

Place in the sun -
Satisfactory and wishful position.
Eg. She earned place in the sun by acheiving the ownership of a large scale business.

Wooden spoon -
Imaginary prize.
Eg. They could only win a wooden spoon after losing the game.

Go bananas -
person behaving awkwardly.

Eg. She went bananas when she saw her messy room.

Beard the lion in his den -
Challenge someone in his place.

Eg- If he doesn't come to see me today, I'll have to beard the lion in his den.


Q7. Translation:

Generally people believe that the laws of country and freedom of man are opposite to each other. Apparently, it is not wrong notion. Every law imposes certain restriction on denizens. If there is the greater number of laws in country, there are considerable cumulative restrictions. Because of multiple restrictions, the liberation of man is burdened with a load of their debt. Contrarily, if there is the limited number of laws, the domain of man's freedom is widened.

(Vii) kevin says he stopped travelling internationally because of his family.

objective was too difficult, like we are decedents of Shakespeare :(

[QUOTE=nida ghaus;913723]objective was too difficult, like we are decedents of Shakespeare :([/QUOTE]
FPSC did not want people to attempt that exam. This much was obvious.
Don't lose heart, not many have been able to do it.
In fact I don't even know 2 people who were able to do it.

blunder
 

hey friends i have committed a blunder and out of nervousness , i forgot to give title :( ... shall i expect 5 marks deduction?

[QUOTE=bakhtawar89;913725]hey friends i have committed a blunder and out of nervousness , i forgot to give title :( ... shall i expect 5 marks deduction?[/QUOTE]
Yes, you shall.
I almost made this mistake and instead of putting it at start I had to put it at the end.

Anyone still remember the MCQs of English (Precis & Composition) ?:?

Yes I remember, they are below :


SLAPSTICK : LAUGHTER

A. fallacy : dismay B. genre : mystery
C. satire : anger D. mimicry : tears
E. horror : fear


SPY : CLANDESTINE

A. accountant : meticulous B. furrier : rambunctious
C. lawyer : ironic D. shepherd : garrulous
E. astronaut : opulent

.
JAUNDICE : LIVER

A. rash : skin B. dialysis : kidney
C. smog : lung D. valentine : heart
E. imagination : brain

DEPENDABLE : CAPRICIOUS

A. fallible : cantankerous B. erasable : obtuse
C. malleable : limpid D. capable : inept
E. incorrigible : guilty

They are the only available on the site, others I can't remember very clearly,

whats the mistake i committed in essay

Please don't scare her! Something that has gone wrong for one candidate doesn't actually go the same way for others. No two persons can have same marks for somewhat similar outlines. similarly the fate of two essays can't be all the same. It wasnt a good idea to point out a mistake in her outline this way I believe. Now Madiha will be in a state of worry for all these 6 months.

Madiha! keep praying and have faith. Try to improve all this time for your next attempt while praying for this one. Good luck :)

All MCQs
 

[B][U]Synonyms:[/U][/B]
1. Nabob
2. Pall
3. Sacrosanct
4. Louche
5. Stentorian
6. Loquacious
7. Chimera
8. Temerity
9. Propinquity
10. Vociferous

[B][U]Antonyms:[/U][/B]
1. Germane
2. Fatuous
3. Sapient
4. Mutational
5. Impecunious
6. Irascible
7. Approbate
8. Supercilious
9. Quiescent
10. Sartorial

Synonyms:
1. Nabob : [B]Bigiwig [/B]
2. Pall : [B]Satiate [/B]
3. Sacrosanct: [B]Sacred [/B]
4. Louche: [B]Indecent[/B]
5. Stentorian: [B]Loud [/B]
6. Loquacious: [B]talkative [/B]
7. Chimera: [B]Illusion [/B]
8. Temerity: [B]Stupid [/B]
9. Propinquity: [B]nearness[/B]
10. Vociferous: [B]Strident [/B]

Antonyms:
1. Germane: [B]irrelevant[/B]
2. Fatuous: [B]sensible[/B]
3. Sapient:
4. Mutational
5. Impecunious
6. Irascible : [B]placid[/B]
7. Approbate : [B]condemn[/B]
8. Supercilious: [B]meek[/B]
9. Quiescent: [B]active[/B]
10. Sartorial: [B]cheerful[/B]

Hats off to FPSC for setting such a horrific paper that is around 35% out of the syllabus. Thanks to Lord at least this time my synonyms and antonyms went better and I am hoping to sail this horrific paper.

My 13+ vocabs are correct. 3 Analogies, 4 corrections, 4 idioms, 5 Pairs of words, 2 punctuation, Narrative passage was fine but not really good, translations and précis done really well but in the last I was short of time so could not manage to solve all the comprehension well. However, I am hoping for the best. Wishing you all the best of luck :)

[QUOTE=exclusively;913832]Synonyms:
1. Nabob : [B]Bigiwig [/B]
2. Pall : [B]Satiate [/B]
3. Sacrosanct: [B]Sacred [/B]
4. Louche: [B]Indecent[/B]
5. Stentorian: [B]Loud [/B]
6. Loquacious: [B]talkative [/B]
7. Chimera: [B]Illusion [/B]
8. Temerity: [B]Stupid [/B]
9. Propinquity: [B]nearness[/B]
10. Vociferous: [B]Strident [/B]

Antonyms:
1. Germane: [B]irrelevant[/B]
2. Fatuous: [B]sensible[/B]
3. Sapient:
4. Mutational
5. Impecunious
6. Irascible : [B]placid[/B]
7. Approbate : [B]condemn[/B]
8. Supercilious: [B]meek[/B]
9. Quiescent: [B]active[/B]
10. Sartorial: [B]cheerful[/B]

Hats off to FPSC for setting such a horrific paper that is around 35% out of the syllabus. Thanks to Lord at least this time my synonyms and antonyms went better and I am hoping to sail this horrific paper.

My 13+ vocabs are correct. 3 Analogies, 4 corrections, 4 idioms, 5 Pairs of words, 2 punctuation, Narrative passage was fine but not really good, translations and précis done really well but in the last I was short of time so could not manage to solve all the comprehension well. However, I am hoping for the best. Wishing you all the best of luck :)[/QUOTE]
Temerity: Audacious
Mutational: Parental

[QUOTE=exclusively;913832]Synonyms:
1. Nabob : [B]Bigiwig [/B]
2. Pall : [B]Satiate [/B]
3. Sacrosanct: [B]Sacred [/B]
4. Louche: [B]Indecent[/B]
5. Stentorian: [B]Loud [/B]
6. Loquacious: [B]talkative [/B]
7. Chimera: [B]Illusion [/B]
8. Temerity: [B]Stupid [/B]
9. Propinquity: [B]nearness[/B]
10. Vociferous: [B]Strident [/B]

Antonyms:
1. Germane: [B]irrelevant[/B]
2. Fatuous: [B]sensible[/B]
3. Sapient:
4. Mutational
5. Impecunious
6. Irascible : [B]placid[/B]
7. Approbate : [B]condemn[/B]
8. Supercilious: [B]meek[/B]
9. Quiescent: [B]active[/B]
10. Sartorial: [B]cheerful[/B]

Hats off to FPSC for setting such a horrific paper that is around 35% out of the syllabus. Thanks to Lord at least this time my synonyms and antonyms went better and I am hoping to sail this horrific paper.

My 13+ vocabs are correct. 3 Analogies, 4 corrections, 4 idioms, 5 Pairs of words, 2 punctuation, Narrative passage was fine but not really good, translations and précis done really well but in the last I was short of time so could not manage to solve all the comprehension well. However, I am hoping for the best. Wishing you all the best of luck :)[/QUOTE]
Your good title of precise???
I also got 15+ correct(I really enjoyed this portion)
Mutation:antonym parent
And sapient,meaning scholar ,my answer to this mcq was also correct,but I didn't remember the option.
Rest,it was halwa except analogies,because I didn't make it in my practice.
I have just one query!
is there any deduction on cross cutting.(since in the paper I had done precise three times and cut two with lead pencil,should I hope that examiner will have tenderness towards my paper's insolubrious impression)

[QUOTE=ursula;913842]Your good title of precise???
I also got 15+ correct(I really enjoyed this portion)
Mutation:antonym parent
And sapient,meaning scholar ,my answer to this mcq was also correct,but I didn't remember the option.
Rest,it was halwa except analogies,because I didn't make it in my practice.
I have just one query!
is there any deduction on cross cutting.(since in the paper I had done precise three times and cut two with lead pencil,should I hope that examiner will have tenderness towards my paper's insolubrious impression)[/QUOTE]

Good yar, It is all about the so-called slaughtering trend of FPSC. They always hit one paper to fail the candidates. No, it does not matter, because crossing would be considered rough work.. It looks FPSC will slaughter essay paper again. The scoring trend of composion paper would likely be carried out as they used to be in CE-2015. They have made blunders in setting composition paper. Analogy, Idioms & narrations are not in the list of syllabus. So how can they ask for such questions? Does it make sense! Moreover, synonyms and antonyms were 20 in number, whereas, in accordance with syllabus they needed to be 10. It is evident that they will give leniency in composition paper. One the other hand, essay papers seems to be easier, yet it is technical one. Therefore, they will slaughter essay paper again. :)

Stupidity of mine slaughtering trend is beyond my comprehension.You mean paper checkers [B]deliberately[/B] fail students.

[QUOTE=ursula;913860]Stupidity of mine slaughtering trend is beyond my comprehension.You mean paper checkers [B]deliberately[/B] fail students.[/QUOTE]

passing essay is not a difficult task, but fulfilling all the requirements of essay writing is a hill task. So whenever fpsc has to target the essay paper the criteria for essay checking tightened. Resultantly only those pass it who possess a good command. I.e command over comprehension, relevant writing, adequate vocabulary, good grammar, completeness in essay, proper organization, following four forms of discourse, coherence and lolz

Let me tell you one thing more: comprehending the css essay paper is a hill task. Majority for example would have mixed up gender with sex in gender equality essay. Likewise foreign aid would have been taken either as donation or debt only.