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Old Tuesday, November 15, 2011
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Default Death - a hope
Is this what a curse is supposed to be?
A death of dreams, a death of morality,
a death of child, a death of spirituality,
Never being able to see past this debris

Waking up, dreading the day to be,
closing my ears to all the reality,
liening to myself, calling it irrationality,
I never could see hope or glee

Crying at night, for the day to be
would death bring hospitality,
a parting of pain, some normality?
or just like a night - dreading a day to come...

-By me
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closing my ears to all the reality,
liening to myself, calling it irrationality,

a typo i guess,
ended with a non rhyming abruptness...!

nice lines...
be happy

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