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O, my friend

I want to keep you in my breath
Until my breath, you stay with me

I want to capture you in my eyes
Until my vision, you stay with me

I want to hide you in my heartbeat
Until my heartbeat, you stay with me

I want to save you in my memory
Until my memory, you stay with me

In fact

I want to prison you in my soul
Until my soul, you stay with me

(my work)
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O, my friend

I want to keep you in my breath
Until my breath, you stay with me

I want to capture you in my eyes
Until my vision, you stay with me

I want to hide you in my heartbeat
Until my heartbeat, you stay with me

I want to save you in my memory
Until my memory, you stay with me

In fact

I want to prison you in my soul
Until my soul, you stay with me

(my work)
well done doli,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, really nice and impressive
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