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Little a very, I have a dream,
to have a house, down by the stream,
where I would live with, whom I need,
for all my life, for my lone love to feed.

but I know, for all my life through,
this dream would never be true,
for on whom, my heart shows it's light,
is far beyond my reach and my sight.

Which leaves me feeling been hypnotized,
I was left alone, again to fantasize.
I kept myself busy for the next time,
thus stayed alone, waiting for a valentine.

It would not go like this again, I thought,
though that has happened to me already a lot.
All this torture make me cry and scream,
for little a very, I had a dream
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Dreaming and idealizing was an innocent indulgence granted by the Almighty to enjoy though ephemerally.This innocence is the reminence of a sweet child in each one of us.You have very beautifully summarized this human habituality in a succinct piece of beauty.

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You have rightly appreciated Secret Admirer's choice but you know I can't always keep dictionary with me and at the same time we love to know what you want to convey. So please try to use simple words for people like me
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You have rightly appreciated Secret Admirer's choice but you know I can't always keep dictionary with me and at the same time we love to know what you want to convey. So please try to use simple words for people like me
I'll (we'll) be highly thankful to you !!!

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@ DDDD

Poetry maybe for everyone(at the same time may not be for everyone,e.g., classics,which are at the best boring for the un-initiated) but criticism is essentially a specialized branch of knowledge. I was appreciating Silent Admirer's posted poem; and appreciation is solely different from paraphrasing for a matriculate.

However,for you the glossary is as under:

Reminicence: which comes as reminding something.[ in the above post I had a typing error]

now you should be happy and play drums.

Adaab.

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