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Tu Rafu na kar, Mere hum'nawa, Wohi naam le, Mera Dil Dukha,
Na mila Mujhe Mera Dil Ruba, Meri Jaan gae, Mera Dil Ruka,
Teri Bewafai tou Dil'nawa, Meri Humsafar hai, Magar Bata,
Jahaan Raund'ne ko hazaar thy, Tujhe kuen Sanam, Mera Dil Mila,
Mera Dil ye kehta hai ab Mujhe, K Gali talak bhi na Jaun Main,
Wohi Roz o Shab, Wohi Log hein, Magar ab k hai Mera Dil Khafa,
Main chala k Cher'un ga Gul ko per wahaan Baagh ka tha ajab samaan,
Kal Ghair ko jo liye Wahaan, Huwa ru'numa, Mera Dil Jala,
Meri Dhak Dharak, Mere Pal Do Pal, Isi Wehem mein hein Mubtala,
Mera Dil Wafa, Mera Dil Jafa, Mera Dil Bhalla, Mera Dil Bura,
Mera Dil Lahu ka Charagh hai jo Bikhair de ga Laalian,
K Jo Jal k Kar de ga Roshni, Isi Waaste Mera Dil Bana,
Tujhe ilm hai Mere Haal ka, Mujhe ilm hai Tere Haal ka,
Koi Nama'br, koi Khat Naheen, Mera Khoon Sada, Mera Dil Hawa....
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Radeef, qafiya hilay huay hain, wazan bhi poora nahi hai. Abhi aap ko muta'ala ki zarurat hai. Maroof shora ka kalam parhain.
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Koi Ba'qaida teacher naheen hai, so behr se ba'bahra hoon, but I'll follow your tips.
Thank you Sister
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Babar dil tmhara apna hai,, feelings tmhari apni hai to dosro ko q follow karoge? Make others to follow u brother.. Keep it up
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Meri zuban kisi ne khareed li...
Mera qalam kisi ka ghulaam hain...
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Well brother, my sister was talking about some basics, she wasn't forcing me to change the topic of my creations. Thank you "Pyare bhai" !
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