Please make This forum more useful

[Pakistaniguy]

Dear Moderators,

We have joined this forum to learn new things. I will highly appreciate if moderators, senior members, members point out our mistakes in Language. We make many mistakes while writing comments (Not spelling mistakes but tenses or any other gramatical mistake). If it is not possible then I would like to request to all moderators, senior members etc that please correct me whenever I write incorrect sentence. It will help me a lot to improve my Language. I love to learn and develope myself continuously and hence, I will never mind if someone ponits out my mistake. Even I will be highy thankful to him. You can start from my this thread and you can let me know if I have made any mistake in this thread.

Kind Regards.

[Last Island]

I and other mods tried to correct few members but the response we got was like "You are haughty and arrogant". We cannot read people's mind and they can never know our intention. So we stopped serving that way.

[mjkhan]

Supermoderator G,


Madam,i thought diligent guy was asking for way too much but if modz can really do this or try to do this then please dont deprive us of this opportunity to learn(while enjoying(at least for me)) just because of some"one" other.

if your intentions are good then why to worry about consequences.infact a dominant majority will welcome this step very warmly.

[Pakistaniguy]

Originally Posted by Last Island

I and other mods tried to correct few members but the response we got was like "You are haughty and arrogant". We cannot read people's mind and they can never know our intention. So we stopped serving that way.

Yes, I can understand. I do not know that why people think it negatively. I request you and everyone to kindly correct me whenever I make mistake. I will be highly thankful. My language is not good and I want to make it perfect. Contrary, I will leave using this forum because I joined it for my improvement.

[Last Island]

We are at your disposal.

[Pakistaniguy]

Originally Posted by Last Island

We are at your disposal.

For my satisfaction that you will correct me, can you please point out mistakes which I made in my last thread:

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/general/d...akistan-4.html

[polaris]

Originally Posted by diligentguy

If it is not possible then I would like to request to all moderators, senior members etc...

i guess there should not be "to" after "request" in above sentence:

If it is not possible then I would like to request all moderators, senior members etc...

[candidguy]

I would request seniors etc to correct me,where i'm wrong.(not'that correct me')

It will help me alot in improving my english.(not 'to')

or you can say,it will help me improve my English.

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Originally Posted by candidguy

I would request seniors etc to correct me,where i'm wrong.(not'that correct me')

It will help me alot in improving my english.(not 'to')

sorry you were right there.

it will help me to improve my language.sorry again.sorry,I think error checking suits Last Island but not me.so Last Island do fix my mistakes as well if I commit any.

[Last Island]

Originally Posted by diligentguy

For my satisfaction that you will correct me, can you please point out mistakes which I made in my last thread:

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/general/d...akistan-4.html

My conclusion regarding the story of Osama's Death:

Pakistan Govt and US govt mutually decided to play this drama due to (the) following reason (reasons):

1. It was decided by US authorities that forces from afghanistan will be withdrwan by this or next year but they were still facing much confrontation and hence, they (confrontation, hence they) decided to make (fabricate seems more appropriate) this story.

2. Obama did not want to make himself unpopular (or it can be written as did not want to lose popularity) by withdrawing unsuccessful forces from afghanistan. He was required to (Afghanistan for after that he would have been required to) give reason reasons to his nation and opposition.

Why I thought that both Pakistan and US govt have mutually decided this game:

1. Silence of Govt on this issue.
2. Our politicians were distrubuting seats after this drama.
3. Silence of Pakistan Army (ISPR). They were also aware about this drama.
4. There is a possibility that the operation was done by pakistani forces and not US forces (not by US forces) . (the sentence continues so full stop should not be used here) Because (because)according to villagers that the people (villagers, people) invloved in (the) opertion were talking in Pushto.
5. Obama discussed with president that this drama will be (a) win-win situation for both of us but basicaly they made pakistani politicians fool. (they fooled Pakistani Politicians or they made a fool of Pakistani politicians) Though they are now appreciating the efforts of Pk govt but they have sullied Pakistan all over the world. They will have now reason to stay here in pakistan with large number of thier agents. (Now they will have reasons to stay here in Pakistan with a large number of US agents)

The only thing which I am not understanding is (the) press release of our foreign office that US did not inform us about this operation. Where as Obama (operation, whereas, Obama) is appreciating the efforts of Pakistani govt and saying that he had discussed this issue with president. Please comment. __________________

@ Candidguy

It will help me to improve my English.
It will help me improve my English
It will help me in improving my English.

All of the above are correct.

[candidguy]

Originally Posted by Last Island

@ Candidguy

It will help me to improve my English.
It will help me improve my English
It will help me in improving my English.

All of the above are correct.

Yes,I realised that to improve my english is also right that's why i said sorry,as I had sort of objectioned his right sentence.