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Old Sunday, August 12, 2012
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Originally Posted by nabilach View Post
thanx zuhaib, but there surely will be room for improvement as there were some mistakes in my last expansion but nobody corrected them. Please please all fellows read it carefully. i will be grateful.
while, the statement given by you to expand 'train up a child in the way he should go' has made me much confused. however, i am trying to do it.
Indeed, there is always a room for improvement.

I have already said that you write very well but let me share my point of view.
Excess of everything is bad. You write examples 5 to 6. It gives quite good taste but make your example about 3 and give a relevant quotation. It shall beautify and strengthen your expansion.

Thanks.
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