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When God created the universe, he appointed human beings as his subjugates because, of the cognitive thinking ability, of which they were blessed with; it was expected that, man will fulfill his duties efficiently and he will carry out the commands given to him. But, Alas, man is oblivious of the purpose of his creation; he dwells in self created delusions of paranoia, meddles himself in petty issues, fights over fragile things and quarrel over unworthy plans. Albert Einstein rightly said that ‘‘ two things are infinite; the universe and human stupidity; though I am not sure about the universe'’.
‘To err is human’; and mankind has always proved it by displaying such ridiculous actions like; wagging wars on minor disputes , polluting the land with lethal chemicals like mercury and carbon monoxide, depleting the ozone layer, dumping toxins in the sea, cutting off forests in the name of industrial revolution, harboring the corrupt political system,voting for incompetent candidates, mismanagement, economic meltdown,food crisis, nuclear proliferation, annihilating animals, defying natural phenomenons , global warming and what not? Perhaps, mankind seldom uses its brain and it were these actions of utter stupidity and blunders that compelled Voltaire to say that, ‘the common sense is not common’ .
Thus, from Adam and Eve to the present date; man has always been ignorant and fool; oblivious of the impacts and repercussions of his actions, deeply immersed in the ocean of vices, not realizing that, his life will eventually end. Indeed,his actions depicts that human stupidity knows no boundaries.
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Rome was not built in one day.

This statement lucidly describes the myth of great achievements. The higher order tasks cannot be accomplished in moments. The way that leads to success is long with plethora of hardships. To construct a splendid edifice, the architecture works for years. The marvelous buildings cannot be erected within the days. Thus, one cannot expect a gigantic work to be completed within short time period. The pages of history provide us a large number of instances that support this statement. Nelson Mandela had to wait for three decades to bring the revolutionary change in his country regarding the equal rights for all races. He and his party could not mend the constitution within the days. The liberation of subcontinent and the creation of Pakistan was also a long struggle spanning over a century or more. In the same way, all surprising inventions and mysterious discoveries were not made just in a few days. Edison traveled a long journey of failures before making a light bulb. Alexander Fleming faced a lot of grievances with stoicism for producing the penicillin. Man got the access on moon after the experiments of several centuries. In the same way, the adroitness in tortuous practical works demands the practice of several years. While, the most glaring example is of our beloved prophet Muhammad(PBUH) in this regard, even he had to struggle for decades to eradicate the roots of infidelity and to establish an Islamic state. Almost all fields of life confirms this statement that great work cannot be done in a short time span. It demands a long struggle and firm determination. People who look for the short-cuts to get the pinnacle of glory always find themselves at the nadir of obscurity. Thus, one who aspires a great objective, should gird up himself to work for a long time.

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Rome was not built in one day.

This statement lucidly describes the myth of great achievements. The higher order tasks cannot be accomplished in moments. The way that leads to success is long with plethora of hardships. To construct a splendid edifice, the architecture works for years. The marvelous buildings cannot be erected within the days. Thus, one cannot expect a gigantic work to be completed within short time period. The pages of history provide us a large number of instances that support this statement. Nelson Mandela had to wait for three decades to bring the revolutionary change in his country regarding the equal rights for all races. He and his party could not mend the constitution within the days. The liberation of subcontinent and the creation of Pakistan was also a long struggle spanning over a century or more. In the same way, all surprising inventions and mysterious discoveries were not made just in a few days. Edison traveled a long journey of failures before making a light bulb. Alexander Fleming faced a lot of grievances with stoicism for producing the penicillin. Man got the access on moon after the experiments of several centuries. In the same way, the adroitness in tortuous practical works demands the practice of several years. While, the most glaring example is of our beloved prophet Muhammad(PBUH) in this regard, even he had to struggle for decades to eradicate the roots of infidelity and to establish an Islamic state. Almost all fields of life confirms this statement that great work cannot be done in a short time span. It demands a long struggle and firm determination. People who look for the short-cuts to get the pinnacle of glory always find themselves at the nadir of obscurity. Thus, one who aspires a great objective, should gird up himself to work for a long time.

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the best work you have done i think it is enough to take a good score in any competitive exam. your presentation style is extra ordinary with relent examples.. keep it up. Insallah you will hit your target..best of luck
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Rome was not built in one day.

This statement lucidly describes the myth of great achievements. The higher order tasks cannot be accomplished in moments. The way that leads to success is long with plethora of hardships. To construct a splendid edifice, the architecture works for years. The marvelous buildings cannot be erected within the days. Thus, one cannot expect a gigantic work to be completed within short time period. The pages of history provide us a large number of instances that support this statement. Nelson Mandela had to wait for three decades to bring the revolutionary change in his country regarding the equal rights for all races. He and his party could not mend the constitution within the days. The liberation of subcontinent and the creation of Pakistan was also a long struggle spanning over a century or more. In the same way, all surprising inventions and mysterious discoveries were not made just in a few days. Edison traveled a long journey of failures before making a light bulb. Alexander Fleming faced a lot of grievances with stoicism for producing the penicillin. Man got the access on moon after the experiments of several centuries. In the same way, the adroitness in tortuous practical works demands the practice of several years. While, the most glaring example is of our beloved prophet Muhammad(PBUH) in this regard, even he had to struggle for decades to eradicate the roots of infidelity and to establish an Islamic state. Almost all fields of life confirms this statement that great work cannot be done in a short time span. It demands a long struggle and firm determination. People who look for the short-cuts to get the pinnacle of glory always find themselves at the nadir of obscurity. Thus, one who aspires a great objective, should gird up himself to work for a long time.

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Quite well done. Good sentence structure. Precisely done. Quite relevant examples. Unbreakable chain of thoughts.
Keep writing, I await your next attempt.
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When God created the universe, he appointed human beings as his subjugates because, of the cognitive thinking ability, of which they were blessed with; it was expected that, man will fulfill his duties efficiently and he will carry out the commands given to him. (Try to make simple sentences.) But, Alas, man is oblivious of the purpose of his creation; he dwells in self created delusions of paranoia, meddles himself in petty issues, fights over fragile things and quarrelS over unworthy plans. Albert Einstein rightly said that ‘‘ two things are infinite; the universe and human stupidity; though I am not sure about the universe'’.
‘To err is human’; and mankind has always proved it by displaying such ridiculous actions like; wagging wars on minor disputes , polluting the land with lethal chemicals like mercury and carbon monoxide, depleting the ozone layer, dumping toxins in the sea, cutting off forests in the name of industrial revolution, harboring the corrupt political system,voting for incompetent candidates, mismanagement, economic meltdown,food crisis, nuclear proliferation, annihilating animals, defying natural phenomenons , global warming and what not? Perhaps, mankind seldom uses its brain and it were these actions of utter stupidity (re-arrange it) and blunders that compelled Voltaire to say that, ‘the common sense is not common’ .
Thus, from Adam and Eve to the present date; man has always been ignorant and fool; oblivious of the impacts and repercussions of his actions, deeply immersed in the ocean of vices, not realizing that, his life will eventually end. Indeed,his actions depicts that human stupidity knows no boundaries.

Good efforts. But, you could do better.
Try to write precisely. Do not make long and complex sentences.
Over-all Good efforts. Keep writing.
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Nice work by all of you guys ,especially zuhaib bro .Its helping the new comers like me very much . Keep it up .God bliss you all.
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Sweet are the uses of adversity.


This statement highlights the importance of adversity in human’s life. Adversity is any unfavourable condition faced by the man i.e poverty, illness, oppression, subjugation and vice versa. Man, the most cognizant creature on the earth, can learn more in the state of adversity. His abilities get polished and his covert qualities get explored. It is because, in these conditions, he becomes aware of the realities of life. He understands the importance of work more than he can in any time of comfort. Many great men, who are shining in the pages of history, were the good learner of their times of adversity. Zaheer-ud-din Babar, the founder of mughal sultanate in India, himself writes about his experiences of hardships in his early life in his memoir. He made the sweet use of his adversities. He calls adversities a good school to train up a man for getting a higher position in life. Madam Curie, the Nobel laureate, was such poor in her early life that she had to do a number of menial jobs to bear the expenses of her education. Hellen keller, the internationally known writer, was facing a number of physical handicaps, but she did not allow them to hinder her way to success. John Nash, another Nobel prize winner was suffering from a severe psychological disorder. Marx weber, a prestigious social researcher, faced very dangerous paralysis strokes but did not give up. Similarly, Abraham Lincoln, the famous president of America, belonged to a very poor family. He got that position by making the good of his hard times. There are hundreds of such examples that confirm the sweetness of adversities. In fact, adversity is a blessing in disguise. It serves as a teacher and trainer. Man gets the harsh lessons that prepare him for the time to come. Thus, obstacles and hardships do not come to hinder the way of progress but to train up a person to swim through the opposite waves. He who makes the best use of his difficult times can never fail to achieve his objectives.
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This statement highlights the importance of adversity in human’s life. Adversity is any unfavourable condition faced by the man i.e poverty, illness, oppression, subjugation and vice versa. Man, the most cognizant creature on the earth, can learn more in the state of adversity. His abilities get polished and his covert qualities get explored. It is because, in these conditions, he becomes aware of the realities of life. He understands the importance of work more than he can in any time of comfort. Many great men, who are shining in the pages of history, were the good learner of their times of adversity. Zaheer-ud-din Babar, the founder of mughal sultanate in India, himself writes about his experiences of hardships in his early life in his memoir. He made the sweet use of his adversities. He calls adversities a good school to train up a man for getting a higher position in life. Madam Curie, the Nobel laureate, was such poor in her early life that she had to do a number of menial jobs to bear the expenses of her education. Hellen keller, the internationally known writer, was facing a number of physical handicaps, but she did not allow them to hinder her way to success. John Nash, another Nobel prize winner was suffering from a severe psychological disorder. Marx weber, a prestigious social researcher, faced very dangerous paralysis strokes but did not give up. Similarly, Abraham Lincoln, the famous president of America, belonged to a very poor family. He got that position by making the good of his hard times. There are hundreds of such examples that confirm the sweetness of adversities. In fact, adversity is a blessing in disguise. It serves as a teacher and trainer. Man gets the harsh lessons that prepare him for the time to come. Thus, obstacles and hardships do not come to hinder the way of progress but to train up a person to swim through the opposite waves. He who makes the best use of his difficult times can never fail to achieve his objectives.
Quite well done. You write beautifully.
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thanx zuhaib, but there surely will be room for improvement as there were some mistakes in my last expansion but nobody corrected them. Please please all fellows read it carefully. i will be grateful.
while, the statement given by you to expand 'train up a child in the way he should go' has made me much confused. however, i am trying to do it.
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