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I invite beginners to join me in this thread to start practice of sentence building.Here any of the member would suggest a topic and then we shall write 5 sentences over it.

I am suggesting here the first topic and it is " Man is architect of his own fate".

i will add my lines in the next sitting.
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Reference to the above post ,here goes my attempt. This practice has been recommended to me by one of my senior friend and I have found it very helpful in brainstorming, creative thinking and expression building. I hope other members would also participate.

1-Cowards attribute their failures to destiny while braves struggle to write their fates their selves.
2- Nothing is impossible for willing hearts.
3- Destiny favours the braves.
4- Persistent struggle always brings success.
5- Obstacles can overcome through commitment and determination instead of scolding the fate.
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Here it goes mine attempt.
1.Man's destiny lies on the line of action he follows.
2.There is no fate but your own fate.
3.Fate has no say in the feet's accomplishment.
4.Those who believe heavily on fortune decries a lot.
5.The will and the resolute approach make inroads for fate.
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@Saleeqa Batool

Nice Idea for brainstorming !

Here goes my attempt for the topic "Man is architect of his own fate"
  • What we do in life, echoes in eternity.
  • Luck is what you have left over, after putting in your 100%.
  • Life applauds the winners and scolds the quitters.
  • One must chalk out his plan better sooner than later if at all he wants to be successful.
  • Destination only welcomes those who face the lashing winds of the time, keep the heads always high and crush the very impediments of the path with iron hands.

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1.fate is what decided by your own hardwork.
2.Winners never quit,quitters never win.
3.Goals are achieved with determination and after hardwork as the duck sees calm on the surface but underneath is tiresome paddling.
4.If a person is willing and eager to win God also joins in.
5.Have confidence on yourself.one who is successful is self-made.
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" Man is architect of his own fate
man wishes to do a lot in this world,
his dream is to touch the sky,
those who wish to make their dreams true,
they are the architect of their own fate.
man works hard to be the architect of his fate and because of his hard work god helps them in writing their own fate.


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Man is architect of his own fate

1) Man is only responsible for its acme and ebb.
2) Fate is not product of inheritance, but a outcome of our struggles, efforts and hard works.
3) Man should niether be leftest not rightest, but just an architect of its own fate.
4) Be a special to let your fate follow you
5) To lead you the way you want to be.

Iqbal explained fate beautifully and said,

" Ager ho Dil Mein Zuq-E-Yaqeen Paida
To Momin ki Nigha Seh kat Jati hein Zanjerien "

" Khudi ko ker buland itna keh her taqdeer seh pehle
Khuda bandey seh pouchey ke tere Raza kia hey "
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Man is Arhitecture of His Own Fate


1. Consistency and countinuity are the stepping stones toward success.

2. Failure is not a bad thing, but makes one more vulnerable to the task.

3. History is full of such type of examples which makes people vigorous and zealous. Shaikh Saadi, Muhammad Ghuri and the life of Zahiruddin Muhammad Baber teach us greatly.

4. Hard work never goes in vain.

5. Conclusion: As you sow, so shall you reap.

A good Verse of Iqbal:

"Khudi ko kar Buland ittnaa
Ke har Taqdeer say pehlay
Khuda Banday Say khud Pochay
Bata Teri Raza kia hai"
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I do beleive in man is architect of his own fate but my mind do not accept this some time. What about those who are not blessed one like us?. Consider a child born in a road side hut. He may possess more intelligence than us! can not he? definately he can; but he may not have chance to explore his qualities. Hard work leads to success but Allah decides what will be fruit of hard work.
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hi guyz i ve a topic to write on that i ''every dog has his day''
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