Salsm to all,i request to all of u who have command over english please check ny writtig because i am very power in it and give me suggestions so that i can improve my mistakes,here it is:
The pen is mighter than the sword

A coin has two sides,similarly the pen and the sword has both positive and negative qualities.Both things are very common but very useful and important at their place.For the better understanding it is important to know their meaning first.The pen refers to fine art like literature,philosophy,music and sculpture etc and The sword refers to war and its soldiers,therefore both play a vital role.The penis a useful thing that records momentous events,conveys trends,traditions,culture,thinking and values either social,political,or religious from generation to generation.It advices reforms,appreciates works and criticizes the follies of people and their systems,even the pen has power to destroy the prestages but it always works for the benefit and the past is witnessed of such things where we find many instances of its strength.On the other hand The sword is the symbole of bravery and victory also a sign of nobility because most of the times it is used for the purpose of safety,security and defence,but it is also a fact that it brings with it bloodshed and destruction.
It is admitted,that both are useful and dangerous as well but their actions entirely depend upon the intentions of their user/master who used them for his purpose.The history is witnessed that the practitioners of fine art like Allama Iqbal,shakespeare and many more have done their best works and are among the world"s illustrious personage.As far as the efforts and sacrifices of soldiers and freedom fighters are concerned their dignity,honestyand petriotism are praiseworthy.But its also true that pen is morepowerful and less dangerous than sword because a pen can brings contradictions, argumentations even controversies but not bloodshed of oppressed and innocent people,the sword either is used for security or personal gain it alwys brings with it fear,massacre,and destructions.........

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee check it and give me ur precious suggestions

My friend you have been differentiating between Pen and Sword and defining what these are, in a competitive exam one must focus on what is being asked not mere defining the terms.....though there are not much grammatical mistakes but it is beside the mark.....

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Thanks sir,actually i cannot get ur point,so please tell me some detail about ur point.... and know u have seen my writting so,kindly suggest me more things through which i can make it capable of css level....

dear, First of all i appreciate you that you have made courage to write on something, that is nice start.....
- you have just compared what is influence of pen in society and what is influence of sword as well. but here you have to convince with history events, quotations,examples and illustrations that Pen is more influential than sword, Further Pen is instrument of EDUCATION and Sword is instrument of WAR.
-you have not given examples. for this, examples are essential to qualify why pen is more powerful than sword.
- you have not clearly explain the topic that what is the essence of topic words.
- and you have not proved ,till the end,what the topic want to ask.
- AND grammatically your note was fair.
i have expressed what i have observed in your trial topic...
wish you best of luck

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Thanks sir,please tell me any website of essays or reading material from which i can get more knowledge about any topic,or research papers.As you say that i should quote some examples,quotations,and many more that justify my sentences, so from where i can get these things?
one thing more that could you please tell me what are the qualities of a thesis,and how i use it in my writting?

dear i am sending you some sites which will assist you in finding many types of topics that you will want to explore;the topics which you will find belong to what subject whether any article, general,literature , science topic,psychology,islamiat or any research paper you could find from these sites;

http://www.chomsky.info/articles.htm
http://www.whereisdoc.com/
http://scholar.google.com.pk/
http://www.wikipedia.org/

and, the thesis statement , the term used in writing essay, implies a introductory statement ,that mostly used in end of the introduction of an essay,is comprises of main points which you are going to explain them in paragraphs of your essay that is one paragraph is for one main point. and how you will write a paragraph that is explain in number 4 point WRITE A DRAFT