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All human beings are liable to err. To be at peace with oneself,the realization of this fact is essential.Humanity is faced with numerous struggles and difficulties.We should view our own problems as part of a universal struggle and brace ourselves to meet every difficulty with fortitude.To be frantic and desperate n such occasions cannot help the situation .Perhaps the greatest folly is for each of us to hug his troubles to himself.Often the path through our worst worries can be made smoother if we seek the guidance of a trusted friend. But there are limits to human wisdom.The only adequate way to endure large evils is to find large consolations.The key to this search is prayer.The faith in a beneficent "Higher Power" can carry us through our most anxious moments.It has cured many people of their diseases and banished melancholy from their hearts.It was faith in God coupled with hardwork, which enabled Alexis Carrel to face ridicule and rejection calmly and finally became the recipient of the Nobel Prize.Finally ,how much less we should be if we could see our struggle as a part of the struggle of a whole creation intent on growth and renewal. By doing so, we not only make our lives easier ,but we also add our bit to the sum of human dignity and faith.

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Realization of errors made by human beings is necessary. Individual's struggles and difficulties can be viewed as universal efforts and face it with bravery. Despondent's behaviour is of no value in this situation. Route to problems can be easily paved by discussing it with trustworthy companion.
big problems can be resolved by seeking help from Allah Almighty,Who is Benfeactor for all. we can make contribution in humanity by considering ou individual's efforts as universal struggle.
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Role of Induvual struggle in human dignity

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