IT IS MORE PAINFUL TO DO NOTHING THAN TO DO SOMETHING..

this statement means that idleness cause pain nd sourness in life.it is a source of irritation who are all the time engaged in doing something,if these peoples are over powered by idleness owing lack of any preoccupation,they r upset,they feel like a fish out of water
late justice M.R KAYANI in one of his speeches pointed that he always want to work,so on sundays,he went to his garden for gardening to make himself busy.he was fond of doing something thanremain free on rest.
life is with movement nd without a move a body is like corspe.the scientist,schlors,politicians nd other outstanding personalities remained never idle.living nations always made themselves busy in some sort of work.in western nd other developed countries people even go to tea cafe nd by taking tea they work..it is also said that"idle mind is home of devil".so insted of ging home to devil in ourselves,we should must keep ourselves busy in any activity...
plz comment on it....

aoa i tried to point out grammatical as well as construction errors in your work.Reproduce the same para considering the following friendly directions:
a- you couldn't prove the point "why not doing something is painful" nor "why doing something is less painful".you did describe that there are number of plus points in working,but you have to prove,as suggested by the title, that though working is painful ,but then so and so points(you may give examples to explaining how working is tough but the benifits drawn thereafter help reduce the apin of work etc...) lesson the pain of work

b- similarly do describe how idleness is more painful than action(qoute examples here)

c- do extent the length on your para.

Good luck

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i agree with kawish.
u could not justify the topic.
work on what kawish has said.she has very well pin-pointed the issues in ur paragraph.
Thanx

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