Please comment on 'Internet: A blessing or a bane.'

[Riaz Ahmed Alizai]

INTERNET:A BLESSING OR A BANE
Communication in all its manifestations has brought a radical overhaul in life,which was banking on orthodox ways of interaction.Inventions have embellished the life by the act of dispelling the longevity of the dusks of ignorance and superstitions.Internet,being the brainchild of human intellect,has revolutionized the lives.It has squeezed the entire world into a global village.Contacts are no more difficult for individuals dwelling at different parts of the world.It has weaved together the industrialists,scientists, students,intellectuals,academia and political thoughts of the universe.It is serving as entertainer,motivator,educator,planner, counselor and the important source of information.With a single click one can open the list of one's interests.Its pace made its significance more universal.It is helping people in shaping their perceptions as regards different walks of life.Its revolutionary utilities have made E-Shopping and E-Business possible.The availability of stuff regarding all subjects has amount to its diversity.It is providing people with a single platform,where people are getting themselves joined like beads.Besides its large-listed utilities there are many reasons to believe that its positivity is often over weighed by casting its negative impact over Psycho-Social horizons of life.Cyber crimes have jolted the confidential practices which is becoming exposed to many owing to illegal practices of hackers and crackers.It is being used as an rudimentary tool against many faiths in the name of freedom of speech.People given to anti-social and anti-state actions are using it for their malicious objectives.People are prone to discard their cultural traits by imitating others.Its unethical usage is eroding layer of recognized standards from civilized societies.People often seek pleasure in surfing and goggling after useless aims.Young generation is becoming more detracted owing to wastage of their precious time.Travesty of many stuffs have hammered the tenets of universal acceptance.Indubitably,internet has its negative impact on the mental horizons which has parceled its lot to the social life yet its positive usage can not be negated.Its utilities are far more than its curses. Admittedly,Human life has seen a magnificent change since it has become under the purview of this great technology.

[zakirsamo]

Dear You have tickled only the one side of the availing of the internet as the source of interaction and benefitting the individuals but whereas it has certain disadvantages which have dragged the youths back, like unnecessary use of connection and devastating their precious time instead of the study.

Thanks,

Zakir Hussain Samo
Larkana

[mussaa]

over use of Vocabulary. If you want to write in competetion examination you will learn from good teachers that use of vocablary is good but excess of vocabulary is not accepted.and it can also bring the selection of wrong word for a situation into play.first write it in a bit simpler English then ask for further comments.

[Riaz Ahmed Alizai]

both thumbs up for u dear....cud u please guide me in this regard,,,as to how should i treat such topics.,,,,,,,,meaning thereby,should i write in simple words.....hmmmmm?

[mussaa]

tomorrow i will try to give you the pattern for expansion of ideas and tell you the necessary details how you should write in the paper.you seem to me a Master of English.But make it sure don't be over confident in English as most of the Masters of English fail in English paper as the requirement from a CE student is a bit different and students follow the same techniques used in Master examination in CE.

[rishzzz]

Originally Posted by Riaz Ahmed Alizai

INTERNET:A BLESSING OR A BANE
Communication in all its manifestations has brought a radical overhaul in life,which was banking on orthodox ways of interaction.Inventions have embellished the life by the act of dispelling the longevity of the dusks of ignorance and superstitions(Though the bombastic type of sentences at the very start appreciated but plz dont be complex for the examiner, by using difficult words you may cut his continuity and interest in your expansion).Internet,being the brainchild of human intellect,has revolutionized the lives.It has squeezed the entire world into a global village.Contacts are no more difficult for individuals dwelling at different parts of the world.It has weaved together the industrialists,scientists, students,intellectuals,academia and political thoughts of the universe.It is serving as entertainer,motivator,educator,planner, counselor and the important source of information.With a single click one can open the list of one's interests.Its pace made its significance more universal.It is helping people in shaping their perceptions as regards different walks of life.Its revolutionary utilities have made E-Shopping ?and E-Business ?possible.The availability of stuff regarding all subjects has amount to its diversity.It is providing people with a single platform,where people are getting themselves joined like beads.Besides its large-listed utilities there are many reasons to believe that its positivity is often over weighed by casting its negative impact over Psycho-Social horizons of life.Cyber crimes have jolted the confidential practices which isare becoming exposed to many owing to illegal practices of hackers and crackers.It is being used as an rudimentary tool against many faiths in the name of freedom of speech.People given to anti-social and anti-state actions are using it for their malicious objectives.People are prone to discard their cultural traits by imitating others.Its unethical usage is eroding layer of recognized standards from civilized societies.People often seek pleasure in surfing and goggling after useless aims.Young generation is becoming more detracted owing to wastage of their precious time.Travesty of many stuffs have hammered the tenets of universal acceptance.Indubitably,internet has its negative impact on the mental horizons which has parceled its lot to the social life yet its positive usage can not be negated.Its utilities are far more than its curses. Admittedly,Human life has seen a magnificent change since it has become under the purview of this great technology.

You improved speedily and i must say if you kept on going like this (only aviod being extra shekspeare and be simple enough) You will snatch the victory by your improved expansion on daily basis.

I can't stop me to tell you that you are turning out to be a very good writer..... Hope you will save the skin of this complement

Regards

[amadabro]

Originally Posted by Riaz Ahmed Alizai

INTERNET:A BLESSING OR A BANE
Communication in all its manifestations has brought a radical overhaul in life,which was banking on orthodox ways of interaction.Inventions have embellished the life by the act of dispelling the longevity of the dusks of ignorance and superstitions.Internet,being the brainchild of human intellect,has revolutionized the lives.It has squeezed the entire world into a global village.Contacts are no more difficult for individuals dwelling at different parts of the world.It has weaved together the industrialists,scientists, students,intellectuals,academia and political thoughts of the universe.It is serving as entertainer,motivator,educator,planner, counselor and the important source of information.With a single click one can open the list of one's interests.Its pace made its significance more universal.It is helping people in shaping their perceptions as regards different walks of life.Its revolutionary utilities have made E-Shopping and E-Business possible.The availability of stuff regarding all subjects has amount to its diversity.It is providing people with a single platform,where people are getting themselves joined like beads.Besides its large-listed utilities there are many reasons to believe that its positivity is often over weighed by casting its negative impact over Psycho-Social horizons of life.Cyber crimes have jolted the confidential practices which is becoming exposed to many owing to illegal practices of hackers and crackers.It is being used as an rudimentary tool against many faiths in the name of freedom of speech.People given to anti-social and anti-state actions are using it for their malicious objectives.People are prone to discard their cultural traits by imitating others.Its unethical usage is eroding layer of recognized standards from civilized societies.People often seek pleasure in surfing and goggling after useless aims.Young generation is becoming more detracted owing to wastage of their precious time.Travesty of many stuffs have hammered the tenets of universal acceptance.Indubitably,internet has its negative impact on the mental horizons which has parceled its lot to the social life yet its positive usage can not be negated.Its utilities are far more than its curses. Admittedly,Human life has seen a magnificent change since it has become under the purview of this great technology.

nice effort

[Dolokhov]

i also attempted the same topic (internet - a blessing or a bane)
As far as my expansion is concerned, i explained first that internet is the most remarkable invention of the last century ..... it has many benefits but the misuse of it has made it bane for us as our youth.... but still its benefits are much more than its disadvantages. then i explained some of the many benefits. in the end i said it is not the internet but it is the use of internet which makes it bane or blessing for us ..........
i thought at that time (very short time in fact) that the examiner was asking to take a stance and was asking to defend it.
i tackled it like that so i do not know whether it was right or wrong way to do it

[nowsherwan]

This is my second attempt, the first one went without comments.Hope to get some comments this time.
Internet: A blessing or a bane

Advances in the fields of science and technology have turned the world into a global village.Communication has played a vital role in abridging gap between human populations.Internet being the most advanced form of communication has greatly influenced everyday life.In the fields of business, education and technology,internet is not less than a blessing. Human life is greatly eased by internet.Apart from facilitating human life, it has brought millions of people on a single platform, thus reducing distances.Its social influence is greater than its contribution in science and technology.Social contacts are enhancing, criminals are traced, information is disbursed, marriages are taking place, wars are fought and even treatment can be done from a distant place through this miraculous invention which is internet.However, this is one side of the picture.The other side in in complete contrast with the first one.Internet has transformed the social life of man into a mechanized form. Human beings have become mere machines of flesh and blood, where recognize each other through faces, and not though basic humanly qualities of emotions.By bringing civilizations together, internet has also contributed toward diffusion of evil and vice. It has become quite easy for people to deceive each other.Children are the worst effected lot, which are not only denied the right to play in open airs but are also made prone to countless social evils.Thus, internet is both a blessing and a bane.Its list of benefits does not fall behing its list of drawbacks.The answer to the aforementioned topic lies in the usage of internet.As an adage says "its not the gun but man behind the gun who fights", similarly its not the internet but the way it's used makes it a blessing or a bane.

[Sakk]

Originally Posted by nowsherwan

This is my second attempt, the first one went without comments.Hope to get some comments this time.
Internet: A blessing or a bane

Advances in the fields of science and technology have turned the world into a global village.Communication has played a vital role in abridging gap between human populations.Internet being the most advanced form of communication has greatly influenced everyday life.In the fields of business, education and technology,internet is not less than a blessing. Human life is greatly eased by internet.Apart from facilitating human life, it has brought millions of people on a single platform, thus reducing distances.Its social influence is greater than its contribution in science and technology.Social contacts are enhancing, criminals are traced, information is disbursed, marriages are taking place, wars are fought and even treatment can be done from a distant place through this miraculous invention which is internet.However, this is one side of the picture.The other side in in complete contrast with the first one.Internet has transformed the social life of man into a mechanized form. Human beings have become mere machines of flesh and blood, where recognize each other through faces, and not though basic humanly qualities of emotions.By bringing civilizations together, internet has also contributed toward diffusion of evil and vice. It has become quite easy for people to deceive each other.Children are the worst effected lot, which are not only denied the right to play in open airs but are also made prone to countless social evils.Thus, internet is both a blessing and a bane.Its list of benefits does not fall behing its list of drawbacks.The answer to the aforementioned topic lies in the usage of internet.As an adage says "its not the gun but man behind the gun who fights", similarly its not the internet but the way it's used makes it a blessing or a bane.

Very aptly written, humble vocabulary and conveyed the idea very nicely. :-)