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m.furqan08 Thursday, August 02, 2012 06:50 PM

Kindly check my expansion.

[CENTER][B][U]Life is tragedy to those who feel and comedy to those who think[/U][/B][/CENTER]

This statement makes a point that those who are courageous and those who use their intelligence well always try their level best to overcome problems of their life and they eventually make their life a happy life and those who don't have courage make their life a hell.

Life is a mixture of happiness and sorrows and every person's life contain some problems.There is not a single person in this world whose life either contains sorrow or happiness.Although some person's life contain more sorrows and some have more happiness,yet God has given equal mind to all persons.It depends upon person whether he wants to fight with his problems or not.

There are many persons in this world who lived a miserable life in their early ages.They had all sorts of problems.But they were courageous and determine.They had courage to solve their problems.Einstein,Bill Gates, Edison and Stephen Hawking are the prime examples of those persons who changes their lives through their courage,determination and talent.They had the courage to fight with their problems.That courage helped them to use their talent brilliantly.

Lives of revolutionary persons gave us a lesson that through courage and determination person can change his life.He can made his life happy and prosperous or he can make his life full of sorrows,griefs and miseries.

Those who don't fight with problems of life ultimately make their life a tragedy.And those who fight make their life a comedy because

"God help those who help themselves"

zuhaib ahmed Sunday, August 05, 2012 06:25 PM

[QUOTE=m.furqan08;461658]Kindly check my expansion.

[CENTER][B][U]Life is tragedy to those who feel and comedy to those who think[/U][/B][/CENTER]
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This statement makes a point that those who are courageous and those who use their intelligence well always try their level best to overcome problems of their life and they eventually make their life a happy life and those who don't have courage make their life a hell.[/SIZE] (Tr to make simple sentences)

Life is a mixture of happiness and sorrows and every person's life [B]containS[/B] some problems.There is not a single person in this world whose life either contains sorrow or happiness.Although some person's life contain more sorrows and some have more happiness,yet God has given equal mind to all persons.It depends upon person whether he wants to fight with his problems or not.

There are many persons in this world who lived a miserable life in their early ages.They had all sorts of problems.But they were courageous and determine.They had courage to solve their problems.Einstein,Bill Gates, Edison and Stephen Hawking are the prime examples of those persons who changes their lives through their courage,determination and talent.They had the courage to fight with their problems.That courage helped them to use their talent brilliantly.

Lives of revolutionary persons gave us a lesson that through courage and determination person can change his life.He can made his life happy and prosperous or he can make his life full of sorrows,griefs and miseries.

Those who don't fight with problems of life ultimately make their life a tragedy.And those who fight make their life a comedy because

"God help those who help themselves"[/QUOTE]

Is this the meaning of TOPIC? I don't think so.
[B]Dear, Usman.[/B] Please evolute it.

usman khalid Sunday, August 05, 2012 06:45 PM

[QUOTE=zuhaib ahmed;462839]Is this the meaning of TOPIC? I don't think so.
[B]Dear, Usman.[/B] Please evolute it.[/QUOTE]

Frankly speaking, I myself don't exactly know the meaning of this proverb!

Dr saad Sunday, August 05, 2012 11:20 PM

Ok, so this is my very first piece of writing..

''A great deal of talent is lost for the want of a little courage''

Unnecessary criticism ,restrictions and demoralization suppress the potential and ambition of a person.while,a little encouragement and motivation nurtures the mind and soul; it braces one to over come the odds and obstacles of life.hence,providing the perseverance to stand against the adversities of time.
Thomas eddisson is a renowned scientist;an inventor who has more than a thousand inventions to his credit.but,a few people know that in his early life,eddison was a dumb student and a slow learner.his mother gave him the courage and support which eventually transformed him into the most prolific inventor of all times.
Thus, talent is like a plant,which needs proper attention and care.if it is not encouraged,then it might never get a chance to bloom.

zuhaib ahmed Sunday, August 05, 2012 11:27 PM

[QUOTE=Dr saad;462958]Ok, so this is my very first piece of writing..

''A great deal of talent is lost for the want of a little courage''

Unnecessary criticism ,restrictions and demoralization suppress the potential and ambition of a person.while,a little encouragement and motivation nurtures the mind and soul; it braces one to over come the odds and obstacles of life.hence,providing the perseverance to stand against the adversities of time.
Thomas eddisson is a renowned scientist;an inventor who has more than a thousand inventions to his credit.but,a few people know that in his early life,eddison was a dumb student and a slow learner.his mother gave him the courage and support which eventually transformed him into the most prolific inventor of all times.
Thus, talent is like a plant,which needs proper attention and care.if it is not encouraged,then it might never get a chance to bloom.[/QUOTE]

[B]Dear, word limit for expansion is 250-300. You have written only 130 words. Please, expand further. Get them around 270. [/B]

Dr saad Sunday, August 05, 2012 11:42 PM

bro, next time i will...
lekin zara is pe bhe roshani daal dain pehlay..

zuhaib ahmed Sunday, August 05, 2012 11:49 PM

[QUOTE=usman khalid;462848]Frankly speaking, I myself don't exactly know the meaning of this proverb![/QUOTE]

[B][COLOR="DarkRed"]"Life is a comedy to those who think; a tragedy to those who feel."

Sir, man is hurt by feelings not by thinking. When one feels life, he feels tragedy. The tragedies of life, like; death, horror, war, terrorism etc. But, one who thinks life, life is comedy for one. One laughs at life. One who knows everything is temporary; enjoys life like a comedy.
in other words.

If one uses mind, world is funny and if one uses heart, world is tragic.

Regards,[/COLOR][/B]

agnes Monday, August 06, 2012 12:09 AM

IT IS HARD FOR EMPTY BAG TO STAND UPRIGHT

An empty bag lying in a shelf has no ability to stand upright same is case with human beings, the people having no courage and faith on their skills can never achieve anything in their lives and without knowledge even they can't take stand for their rights. If they are unable to achieve anything in their life just because of lack of their faith, skill and knowledge, they los heart and never bother to improve themselves. Contrary to this people having proper knowledge, faith on their skills and tremendous courage don't find anything in the world which they can't achieve. Due to their knowledge they also possess the ability to stand for their rights and fight for it if neccessary.
A man like Quaid e Azam whose "bag" was full of courage, knowledge, wisdom , faith on his abilities and Allah and devotion took stand for the rights of his nation. He presented his point of view in front of british with the great valour and stood firmly on his stance and finally got the seperate homeland for the Muslims of India. It was his faith on his skills and knowlege which gave him tremandous courage to fight for the rights of Muslims of India and also the Muslims of India had faith on his abilities that he was the man of valour and courage, can fights for our rights. This support kept the Quaid e Azam upright against any hardship and hindrance in his way to success.
The knowledge, courage and a lot of struggle is main thing which takes a person closer to the success. The lossers or lazy persons just want to spend a luxury life and pay no heed to struggle and this attitude takes them to the failure in every step of life. This maxim is still applicable to human life as it was many years ago. Empty bags are never welcomed in the society.

ssara Monday, August 06, 2012 08:22 PM

[B][I][COLOR="DimGray"]Dear members, How to start expansions.....Should we suppose to attempt on Current affairs topics, what are the topics of expansions? or it consist on the topics of Idioms, phrase, or what?


Thanks.....
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zuhaib ahmed Monday, August 06, 2012 08:33 PM

[QUOTE=ssara;463317][B][I][COLOR="DimGray"]Dear members, How to start expansions.....Should we suppose to attempt on Current affairs topics, what are the topics of expansions? or it consist on the topics of Idioms, phrase, or what?


Thanks.....
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[B]Topics of expansions are proverbial statements and quotations. [/B]

For further, scroll back to 2nd post. Read topics of expansion to get exact idea of expansion writing.


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