[QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;458832]@ zuhaib and usman ,

thanx a lot for pointing out my mistakes .There are synatax and grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences which should be cared now.And ,surely i will do it . I published my expansion without revision and now I have seen numerous mistakes . Well , I am obliged and thankful . So , will write an other one hoping it will present a clear picture .IA,...


Ra Hamat Ul Alameen 'is a title ,no doubt conferred by Allah.but there is a reason of it.Our beloved prophet(S.A.W) faced all the mis deeds of coffers and never decided to avange .and this quality of good attitude is heroic .That's why i have said like that.


@last para
i want to say ''life plays a crucial rule in the making of a hero ,implying he has to face more above then average person ''[/QUOTE]

Right! But you better rephrase that particular sentence involving 'Rahmatal lil aalameen' because its meaning sound confusing. Note the correct spellings of [B]'Rahmatal lil aalameen'[/B]

The phrase 'hard done by' doesn't seem suitable here. Its meaning is: 'to feel that you have been treated unfairly'. I think its better you rephrase this sentence.

[QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;458832]@ zuhaib and usman , [COLOR="Magenta"][/COLOR]

thanx a lot for pointing out my mistakes .There are synatax and grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences which should be cared now.And ,surely i will do it . I published my expansion without revision and now I have seen numerous mistakes . Well , I am obliged and thankful . So , will write an other one hoping it will present a clear picture .IA,...


Ra Hamat Ul Alameen 'is a title ,no doubt conferred by Allah.but there is a reason of it.Our beloved prophet(S.A.W) faced all the mis deeds of coffers and never decided to avange .and this quality of good attitude is heroic .That's why i have said like that.


@last para
i want to say ''life plays a crucial rule in the making of a hero ,implying he has to face more above then average person ''[/QUOTE]

Thanks. :) I am waiting for next one.

Dear, Usman Khalid.

The very two sentences are interconnected.
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The one who aims high, gets destined heaven. It seems as if life has choosen them in order to examine what they can do .[/COLOR]

The subjects should be either in singular or plural.

First sentences carries singular subject and 2nd one plural. So, it creates confusion.

Speech is the gift of all, but thought of few,,,
 

[B][COLOR="Magenta"]Speech is the gift of all, but thought of few[/COLOR]


Barring people who are deaf and dumb, human beings have been blessed with the gift of speech. But while almost every body talks; few people take the trouble of thinking. Talking comes naturally to human beings but thinking requires mental exertion. Every body gifted with reason, but very few persons make use of this faculty. Man is a rational animal, but all man do not benefit by the rational faculty. Thinking is indeed, foreign to most people. The result is that words are spoken, decision is taken, and action is performed by people without any pervious thinking. The want of thinking in most such cases leads to unpleasant and even disastrous consequences. If an individual says or does something thoughtlessly, he may pay heavily for it.

If a politician makes a speech without giving due thought to what he says, he may cause a tumult, an agitation, and even a riot. Politicians are indeed the worst sinners in this respect. They have the gift of the gab but little capacity for thinking. They often blurt out words without realizing the implications of what they are saying. They are reckless in speech they are copious in speech; they are glib-tongued: but they are deficient in thinking power.

If a mob is excited or inflamed, it will not pause to think. It will merely shout slogans and make a lot of noise. Cool thinking is essential part of a wise man’s mental equipment. Indeed, a wise man speaks less and thinks more. And whatever he speaks is the result of his thinking. But wise men are in minority in this world. The world is inhabited largely by talkative people who consider thinking to be hard thing and who, therefore, prefer talking to thinking …
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[B][COLOR="Navy"]seniors check it and point out my mistakes [/COLOR][/B]

[SIZE="3"][COLOR="Magenta"][FONT="Arial Black"]Hope is way of life

life is ground of difficulties and defeats _garden of blessings and beauties. One falls and stands again, the source which makes one stand is HOPE. Ant falls dozens of times while climbing up the wall, but after every fall, hope makes it go upward. Hope is the essence of life. It sustains the existence. Where every thing is lost there hope dwells. On every step of life's stairs there is a carpet of hope and hope is way of life.

Philistine, Kashmir and Iraq _people of these countries are living in the valley of deaths but there is a hope in everyone's heart which makes them strike for peace and freedom. They live in tortures, tragedies, tensions and torments but sun of hope rises over them and gives strength to fight. Surely, where there is no way hope makes outlet there.

If we peep into history; we find, those were the heroes who had hope. They did all with hope; even after each mishap and misfortune , they won. As Gandhi said, "“First they will ignore you, then they will laugh at you, then they will fight you and then you will win.” The great scientist, Thomas Edison, stood insurmountable to make Electric Bulb. He tried for thousands times. And, he did it . He fought, struggled and did what he wanted. It is all because Hope shouldered him in all hurdles and pessimistic ideas .

Allah says “Hopelessness is infidelity.” Surely, without hope life becomes no more and worthless. Hope is single way which changes one's world. Disappointment is not way of life but its step unto absurdity. One must be optimist and live with power of hope.

By;

Xuhaib Ahmed pirzada the traveler….
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[B][COLOR="DarkRed"]My Dears, Check it critically.[/COLOR][/B]

[QUOTE=zuhaib ahmed;459152][SIZE="3"][COLOR="Magenta"][FONT="Arial Black"]Hope is way of life

life is ground of difficulties and defeats _garden of blessings and beauties. One falls and stands again, the source which makes one stand is HOPE. Ant falls dozens of times while climbing up the wall, but after every fall, hope makes it go upward. Hope is the essence of life. It sustains the existence. Where every thing is lost there hope dwells. On every step of life's stairs there is a carpet of hope and hope is way of life.

Philistine, Kashmir and Iraq _people of these countries are living in the valley of deaths but there is a hope in everyone's heart which makes them strike for peace and freedom. They live in tortures, tragedies, tensions and torments but sun of hope rises over them and gives strength to fight. Surely, where there is no way hope makes outlet there.

If we peep into history; we find, those were the heroes who had hope. They did all with hope; even after each mishap and misfortune , they won. As Gandhi said, "“First they will ignore you, then they will laugh at you, then they will fight you and then you will win.” The great scientist, Thomas Edison, stood insurmountable to make Electric Bulb. He tried for thousands times. And, he did it . He fought, struggled and did what he wanted. It is all because Hope shouldered him in all hurdles and pessimistic ideas .

Allah says “Hopelessness is infidelity.” Surely, without hope life becomes no more and worthless. Hope is single way which changes one's world. Disappointment is not way of life but its step unto absurdity. One must be optimist and live with power of hope.

By;

Xuhaib Ahmed pirzada the traveler….
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[B][COLOR="DarkRed"]My Dears, Check it critically.[/COLOR][/B][/QUOTE]

other seniors can check that deeply but i want you to replace absurdity with obscurity, thats relevant and polite..b/w nice use of gandhi's quote...:49:

[B][FONT="Arial Black"][COLOR="DarkGreen"]THE WINDS ARE ALWAYS ON THE SIDE OF ABLEST NAVIGATOR:[/COLOR][/FONT][/B]
[B][SIZE="4"]It is wisely quoted by EDWAR GIBBON that “The winds are always on the side of ablest navigator.It unveils the universal truth that man is the architect of his own destiny.It is pure determination and contented toil,which leads him to the culmination of success with flying colours.It is the deligent hardwork,which makes the man second to none.
Life is an integral part of one’s luck. “The harder I work the more luck I seem to have.” This quote depicts that luck or destiny is not something static,It keeps on changing with one’s strives.If we have a glance in the history,then it will be crystal clear to us that only those people names are written with golden words ,who had always sticked to their constant strives and only those were able to pull the winds on their sides.Quaid-e-Azam ,who strived for his nation and was with them through every thick and thin,which resulted in the freedom of a separate nation as Pakistan.
Mughal Empire,which lasted for more than thousand years was the result of many deligent emperors.Thomas Elva Edison, who lighted the whole world with his noble invention,did not sat idle but instead it was his true faith and contented toil which made him to be a navigator who had been able to pull the winds at the ablest side.
By sitting idle and lethargy,we can only jeopardize ourselves.The experiences and examples of the world history proves that the winds and waves are always at the side of ablest navigator.[/SIZE][/B]

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[FONT="Arial Black"][B][U] KNOWLEDGE IS POWER :[/U][/B][/FONT][/COLOR]
[FONT="Arial"][B][SIZE="3"]It is wisely stated that knowledge is power. It is the knowledge which distinguishes human from the animal. By dent of knowledge man had proved to be the most powerful creature of the present world.It is ostensible that knowledge is the ultimate power but unfortunately,we have not yet been able to utilize the power of knowledge in true a manner.It is implicit that knowledge had provided us ineffable inventions that eases our lives but we must not also forget the deadliest wars.America the super power claims to be the most civilized country with the power knowledge but he had attacked Hiroshima-Nagasaki with the most destructive weapon,the atom bomb which devastated the lives of the innocents.
If we use our knowledge wisely then it will be the greatest power in a true sense.It is the knowledge which has enabled the man to step on the moon and travel the distant places with no time.The primitive knowledge has enabled to know about our ancestors and make our today’s generation better.
The last Prophet of Islam ,Muhammad(P.B.U.H) made the ignorant people to come along the true path of Islam with the power of His knowledge and made half of the world to embrace Islam.Many centuries had passed but His followers are still present,this is only because of the power of knowledge.
Death may cease the life but the everlasting knowledge remains forever by influencing the people from time to time,because knowledge is the only power that is not destructible.[/SIZE][/B][/FONT]

[B][FONT="Arial Black"][COLOR="Green"] Religion is the greatest benefactor of human race:[/COLOR][/FONT][/B]

[B][FONT="Arial Black"][SIZE="5"]
[FONT="Arial"][SIZE="4"]It is wisely said that religion is the greatest benefactor of human race.Human psychology has compelled themselves to be guided by others.So religion can be used as a true mean of guidance .There are many religions existing in the present world for making it a better place for living.Every religion may have different perspective but they meet at the same point which is for the benefit of human race.
If we come along the true path of islam,it gives the complete code of life which is based not on fallible and limited human intellect but on the guidance of the omnipotent.These codes of conduct break in the political,social,economical matters concerning man. His public and personal life ,which could be proved as the greatest benefactor for human race. Religion has made them fully stable.
Lets say, The religion Islam has left behind the HOLY QURAN, as a true sense of guidance, in which every aspect of human lives has been elaborated.If we come along with religion with full determination,so it has and is the greatest benefactor of human race.[/SIZE][/FONT][/SIZE][/FONT][/B]

[QUOTE=alihashmatkhoso;459029][B][COLOR="Magenta"]Speech is the gift of all, but thought of few[/COLOR]


[COLOR="Magenta"]Barring people who are deaf and dumb, human beings have been blessed with the gift of speech.[/COLOR] [B](Either this sentence makes no sense or I can't understand, having tried a lot.)[/B] [COLOR="Magenta"]But while almost [/COLOR] [B](Same for this)[/B] every body talks; [COLOR="Magenta"]few[/COLOR] [B](A FEW or FEW)[/B]people take the trouble of thinking. Talking comes naturally to human beings but thinking requires mental exertion. Every body [B]IS[/B] gifted with reason, but very few persons make use of this faculty. Man is a rational animal, but all man [COLOR="Magenta"]do not[/COLOR] [B](DOES NOT)[/B]benefit by the rational faculty. Thinking is indeed, foreign to [COLOR="Magenta"]most[/COLOR] [B](??)[/B] people. [COLOR="Magenta"]The result is that[/COLOR] [B](kiss ka result)[/B] words are spoken, decision is taken, and action is performed by people without any[COLOR="Magenta"]previous[/COLOR] [B](What does it mean here)[/B] thinking. The want of thinking in [COLOR="Magenta"]most such [/COLOR] [B](??)[/B] cases leads to unpleasant and even disastrous consequences. If an individual says or does something thoughtlessly, he may pay heavily for it.

If a politician makes a speech without giving due thought to what he says, he may cause a tumult, an agitation, and even a riot. Politicians are indeed the worst [COLOR="Magenta"]sinners[/COLOR] (Which sin do they commit) in this respect. They have the gift of the gab but little capacity for thinking. They often blurt out words without realizing the implications of what they are saying. [COLOR="Magenta"]They are reckless in speech they are copious in speech; they are glib-tongued: but they are deficient in thinking power.[/COLOR] [B](Avoid repetition. Simply write it, like; They are reckless, copious and glib-tongued in speech but deficient in thinking power.)[/B]

If a mob is excited or inflamed, it will not pause to think. It will merely shout slogans and make a lot of noise. Cool thinking is essential part of a wise man’s mental equipment. Indeed, a wise man speaks less and thinks more. And whatever he speaks is the result of his thinking. But wise men are in minority in this world. The world is inhabited largely by talkative people who consider thinking to be hard thing and who, therefore, prefer talking to thinking …
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[B][COLOR="Navy"]seniors check it and point out my mistakes [/COLOR][/B][/QUOTE]

Good efforts. Dear, try to use correct sentence structure. Many of your sentences, I couldn't comprehend easily not because of language but expressions and sentences structure.
Try to follow unity and brevity. Further, Usman Khalid can tell you well.

Overall, good.

[QUOTE=~BraveHeart~;459200][COLOR="Green"]
[FONT="Arial Black"][B][U] KNOWLEDGE IS POWER :[/U][/B][/FONT][/COLOR]
[FONT="Arial"][B][SIZE="3"]It is wisely stated that knowledge is power. It is the knowledge which distinguishes human from the animal. By dent of knowledge man [B][COLOR="Magenta"]had[/COLOR][/B] (HAS) proved to be the most powerful creature of the present world.It is ostensible that knowledge is the ultimate power but unfortunately,we have not yet been able to utilize the power of knowledge in [COLOR="Magenta"]true a manner[/COLOR] [B]IN A TRUE MANNER)[/B].It is implicit that knowledge [COLOR="Magenta"]had[/COLOR] [B]HAS)[/B] provided us ineffable inventions that [B][COLOR="Magenta"]eases[/COLOR] [/B][B] EASE)[/B] our lives but we must not also forget the deadliest wars.America the super power claims to be the most civilized country with the power [B]OF[/B] knowledge but [COLOR="Magenta"]he[/COLOR] [B]SHE)[/B] had attacked Hiroshima-Nagasaki with the most destructive weapon,the atom bomb which devastated the lives of the innocents.
If we use our knowledge wisely then it will be the greatest power in a true sense.It is the knowledge which has enabled the man to step on the moon and travel the distant places with no time.The primitive knowledge has enabled to know about our ancestors and make our today’s generation better.
The last Prophet of Islam ,Muhammad(P.B.U.H) made the ignorant people to come along the true path of Islam with the power of His knowledge and made half of the world to embrace Islam.Many centuries [B][COLOR="Magenta"]had[/COLOR][/B] [B]ARE)[/B] passed but His followers are still present,this is only because of the power of knowledge.
Death may cease the life but the everlasting knowledge remains forever by influencing the people from time to time,because knowledge is the only power that is not destructible.[/SIZE][/B][/FONT][/QUOTE]

[COLOR="DarkRed"][B]Good one. Try to write precisely and with unity. You could do better. Overall quite well. Keep it up:)[/B][/COLOR]