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zuhaib ahmed Thursday, July 19, 2012 12:48 AM

[SIZE="4"][COLOR="Blue"][B][FONT="Comic Sans MS"][SIZE="3"][B]Poverty is the parent of revolution and crime.

Tensions, tortures, tragedies and torments enter in the house where poverty lives in. Poverty shakes the soul of survival. It compels him to revolutionize and commit crime. Poverty makes man rebellion and criminal. The earth, which remains silent for years, bursts up with burning and boiling volcano. In the very way, man who tolerates and bears, breaks the ice and starts being rebellion and criminal with the passage of time.

A poor man takes gun, sometimes for the milk and food of his family, sometimes for the marriage of his sister or daughter, sometimes for the funeral ceremonies of his relative and sometimes being compelled by inflation. No man comes into world being a criminal. It is what poverty makes him. The crime which is increasing day by day into Pakistan is only because of poverty. Poverty is directly proportional to crime.

2500 years ago, a revolution went into Rome, Brought by the Fighter Spartacus and had almost reached to Parish and crash the Rome. That time, only a few people were rich and had all money. Others were the poor and slaves. Their women were sold, raped and tortured. Men were enslaved and huntered by Rich people. Poverty had killed the thousands and a giant revolution came into Rome. Poverty was the father of revolution in Rome.


Gandhi said, "To a man with an empty stomach food is God." Man can do all for his empty stomach. Pakistan should focus over the root cause of crime and revolution. They would know, it is poverty. Every man should be given equal rights and property. As Prophet Mohammad PBUH did.

“When I give food to the poor, they call me a saint. When I ask why the poor have no food, they call me a communist.”


By: The Xuhaib AHmed PiRzaDa. 18-july-2012 12:38 AM



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zuhaib ahmed Thursday, July 19, 2012 06:23 PM

[B][I][SIZE="4"][COLOR="DarkRed"][FONT="Lucida Sans Unicode"] Please, write on it.

Show me a hero and I will write you a tragedy.
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Farrukh Aziz Thursday, July 19, 2012 07:01 PM

[B]Man is the architect of his own fortune[/B]

It is a traditional belief that has been with us since perhaps the world cam into existence, that whatever pleasant or unpleasant happens to us, we tag it as a fate and declare it our fortune responsible for every good or bad event. The fact is that the fault is not in our destiny or stars but it lies in us. Actually we are whatever we make ourselves to be. As Disrweli said a long ago that we make our fortunes and call them fate.This suggests that it is in our hands to make our fortune good or bad and pleasant or unpleasant.

If a student is very hard-working and does his/her preparation for his/her forthcoming exam from the very first . He does not follow the rule of "Study at the eleventh hour" at all. When the time of exam comes, he/she definitely will perform well. Consequently, the outcome will be up to the mark. On the other hand, a student who does not study even he does not open his/her books the whole year.Now his/her result will definitely be negative and below the mark.It was not fortune which made the hard-working student pass his/her exam with flying colors but courage,hard work,etc. In the same way, we ourselves do not work hard and blame our fate for whatever wrong happens to us and declare it bad luck. According to Ovid," Fortune and love favours the brave."

Sometimes the nature tests us by pouring the rain of difficulties and troubles over us .In such circumstances, we do not work with courage and diligence. Come what may we should not leave the path of hard work. It is a only key to be possessor of a good fortune. We can find lots of such people in the history who were born poor but with persistency and hard work, they changed their fate.As Euripedes said, "Fortune truly helps those who are of good judgement."


check it please

zuhaib ahmed Thursday, July 19, 2012 10:51 PM

[QUOTE=Farrukh Aziz;455783][B]Man is the architect of his own fortune[/B]

It is a traditional belief that has been with us since perhaps the world cam into existence, that whatever pleasant or unpleasant happens to us, we tag it as a fate and declare it our fortune responsible for every good or bad event. The fact is that the fault is not in our destiny or stars but it lies in us. Actually we are whatever we make ourselves to be. As Disrweli said a long ago that we make our fortunes and call them fate.This suggests that it is in our hands to make our fortune good or bad and pleasant or unpleasant.

If a student is very hard-working and does his/her preparation for his/her forthcoming exam from the very first . He does not follow the rule of "Study at the eleventh hour" at all. When the time of exam comes, he/she definitely will perform well. Consequently, the outcome will be up to the mark. On the other hand, a student who does not study even he does not open his/her books the whole year.Now his/her result will definitely be negative and below the mark.It was not fortune which made the hard-working student pass his/her exam with flying colors but courage,hard work,etc. In the same way, we ourselves do not work hard and blame our fate for whatever wrong happens to us and declare it bad luck. According to Ovid," Fortune and love favours the brave."

Sometimes the nature tests us by pouring the rain of difficulties and troubles over us .In such circumstances, we do not work with courage and diligence. Come what may we should not leave the path of hard work. It is a only key to be possessor of a good fortune. We can find lots of such people in the history who were born poor but with persistency and hard work, they changed their fate.As Euripedes said, "Fortune truly helps those who are of good judgement."


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[B]Good work. [/B]

zuhaib ahmed Friday, July 20, 2012 12:37 PM

[CENTER][B][SIZE="4"][CENTER][SIZE="4"][FONT="Microsoft Sans Serif"]Call No Man Happy Till He Is Dead[/FONT][/SIZE][/CENTER]

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kashifali85 Friday, July 20, 2012 03:48 PM

[QUOTE=zuhaib ahmed;456031][CENTER][B][SIZE="4"][CENTER][SIZE="4"][FONT="Microsoft Sans Serif"]Call No Man Happy Till He Is Dead[/FONT][/SIZE][/CENTER]

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Dear zuhaib, yesterday u have assigned a topic "Show me a hero and I will write you a tragedy."
but no one wrote it even u..

zuhaib ahmed Friday, July 20, 2012 05:52 PM

[SIZE="4"][B][FONT="Arial Black"][B][SIZE="4"]Show me a hero and I will write you a tragedy

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Where ever the Hero is; Tragedies reside within him. To be Hero, one has to smash mountains, cross fires, pass by tensions, torments, tortures and tragedies of transient world. Those became Heroes who fought till their last breath and their lives had become nevertheless a tragedy.


The Great Fighter, Spartacus. His Life was Full of tragedies. Writer, Howard Fast, has written a wonderful novel on him. Spartacus was a slave, he was tortured, huntered, beaten and smashed. Then, he become rebellion, he started to fight against Rome for the slaves and poor of the world. He had almost crashed the army of Room with the help of thousands of slaves. But, Alas! His friends died along with his good friend Kirasis. And, he too was killed and chopped into pieces. Thousand slaves were hanged on crosses. Spartacus is the Hero of every time with a life full of Tragedies. Where ever the slaves are beaten, tortured and punished; There the name of Spartacus Blooms up.


Horace Walpole said, "The world is a comedy to those that think; a tragedy to those that feel." Indeed, heroes feel the life. But, they fight being optimist. If there would be no tragedy with them, they would be the common men. fitzgerald has rightly said, "Show me a hero and i will write you a tragedy."

By: Xuhaib Ahmed Pirzada.





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Anum Bashir Friday, July 20, 2012 09:53 PM

MAN PROBES INTO SPACE BUT NOT INTO HIMSELF

since The day man has been created, he is busy in exploring this universe. he has conquered the lands, measured the depth of oceans, devised ways to fight atrocious weather conditions, but despite these what he fails in is to discover his own self. he is unable to peep into his own soul. man tries to find the reasons for existence of this universe but overlooks himself as a conspicuous part of it.
discovering or knowing yourself means to discover your potentials, to uncover actual cause of your existence, to understand your relation not only with God but with his creations as well. the man who has accurate perception of his self knows his worth and thus is among satisfied souls. as we can observe this in lives of oliya Allah, their rank was elevated because they were quite aware of not only their potentials and strengths but duties too.
Allah SWT demand us to look into ourselves just as he asks us to explore this universe because no man can understand true reason for creation of this universe unless he has completely comprehended meaning of his own.

dear senior members plz check mine as well,, i know there are hundreds of mistakes in it :( but this was all i could write on this topic!! this is my very first attempt. plzzzzz guide me :(
n RAMAZAN MUBARAK to every one :))

kashifali85 Friday, July 20, 2012 09:57 PM

[QUOTE=zuhaib ahmed;456031][CENTER][B][SIZE="4"][CENTER][SIZE="4"][FONT="Microsoft Sans Serif"]Call No Man Happy Till He Is Dead[/FONT][/SIZE][/CENTER]

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Call No Man Happy Till He Is Dead

Our life is full of desires. Desire of love, success, accumulation of wealth, absolute power etc. Some of desires can be accomplished but some of desires remain unaccomplished man tries his best to fulfill all his desires but some of them are lucky whatever they desired they get and others do not.
Since the creation of Adam man always tried to make himself happy for the sack of his own happiness he never ever hesitates to take the rights and lives of others. Adam was admonished but for the sack of his happiness he had to commit sin similarly his own son Qabeel also had murdered his brother for his happiness.
There are also certain examples we find not in the annals of history but even today. Gautama Buddha, he had to leave every luxuries of life and went to jungles and deserts in order to find the sufferings of man he concluded that man can be happy provided that he has to leave his desires because when desires cannot be fulfilled than man fed up from his life. Simultaneously Hazrat Ali (r.a) said that the dust of grave can quench the thirst of man’s desires.
To sum up, desires are natural outcome of man through his desires he invented too much things he always make things better and best. Although man tries to fulfill all his desires and get happiness but life is too short for him that he cannot get every happiness till he is dead.

By: Kashif Ali

CSP, seniors and others r requested to comment.Thanks

Anum Bashir Friday, July 20, 2012 10:17 PM

MAN PROBES INTO SPACE BUT NOT INTO HIMSELF

since The day man has been created, he is busy in exploring this universe. he has conquered the lands, measured the depth of oceans, devised ways to fight atrocious weather conditions, but despite these what he fails in is to discover his own self. he is unable to peep into his own soul. man tries to find the reasons for existence of this universe but overlooks himself as a conspicuous part of it.
discovering or knowing yourself means to discover your potentials, to uncover actual cause of your existence, to understand your relation not only with God but with his creations as well. the man who has accurate perception of his self knows his worth and thus is among satisfied souls. as we can observe this in lives of oliya Allah, their rank was elevated because they were quite aware of not only their potentials and strengths but duties too.
Allah SWT demand us to look into ourselves just as he asks us to explore this universe because no man can understand true reason for creation of this universe unless he has completely comprehended meaning of his own.

dear senior members plz check mine as well,, i know there are hundreds of mistakes in it :( but this was all i could write on this topic!! this is my very first attempt. plzzzzz guide me :(
n RAMAZAN MUBARAK to every one :))


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