Communication is a genie of the current era

It is well said that the world has become a global village. It is the communication which has shrunk the world into a village. One century back, it was nearly impossible to contact from one country to another country within a minute, hours or even days but now it has become quite possible with the help of genie which also called communication. With the advancement in technology and mass communication it has become possible to get any information within seconds. In this regard, our Tv channels are doing well. Whenever, any incident take place, it appears on the tv channels within seconds. It has become possible because of new technology which has brought the world's countries closer to one an other. Besides, this communication is also doing well in many disciplines e.g. aeronautical, satellites and in missile technologies. Communication is considered a genie of the current era. It has played a vital role for the betterment of society. It keeps the people updated everyday. That is why it is said that the communication is a genie of the current era.

Please point out my mistakes and correct them with your own example so that I can manage to do well in my writing practice.

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These are only 181 words. Please, expand it more. Word count for expansion is 250-300. It is better if you expand it first. Then, a member can guide and suggest you well.

If only you understand what I say.

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Criticism and pointing out of mistakes would be appreciated.

Long before the advent of Islam, India had close relations with other countries because of trade and business purposes. After the completion of Islam, a complete deen, when it appeared and introduced into India, where there was caste system, supremacy of Hinduism over other religions. Most of the people began to accept Islam. Whereas, Muhammad Bin Qasim's attack upon Sindh is also an other important historical event which influenced the people from Islam. Similarly, after him, Mahmud Ghauri and Ghaznavid had also done amazing works in order to spread Islam. Eventually, Islam had been introduced by other five dinesties which are khilji, sayed, lodhi and so on. In this connection from 1526 to 1707, Mughals boosted Islam and explored it to the other regions. Nevertheless, from 1857 to 1947 Britishers ruled over India as ruler of a colony. Eventually, Islam provided an outstanding ideology to the people of Muslim regions and Ideology of Pakistan took place and finally Pakistan came on the world map on 14th August, 1947.

Is it an expansion and what is the topic?

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A few mistakes are highlighted and coloured. Expand it!

This is the true picture of world’s seventh nuclear power, one of the richest countries in coal and gas reserves-Pakistan, which is engulfed by the cruel clutches of poverty since her inception.

This is the true picture of world’s seventh nuclear power, one of the richest countries in coal and gas reserves-Pakistan, which is engulfed in the cruel clutches of poverty since her inception.

A little confusion in by and in? please correct it.

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Sir Zuhaib aap dooro ke check kar rahe hen or mere nae please jese apne asihamemona ka check kia he wese meri be composition check karen

Both are used. You should use IN.

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Originally Posted by faixa Sir Zuhaib aap dooro ke check kar rahe hen or mere nae please jese apne asihamemona ka check kia he wese meri be composition check karen

My goodness!

G! G! I check it as far as my knowledge is concerned.

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Islam is the attractive Religion Long before the advent of Islam, India had close relations with other countries because of trade and business purposes. After the completion of Islam, a complete deen, when it appeared and introduced into India, where there was caste system, supremacy of Hinduism over other religions. (Restructure it correctly.) Most of the people began to accept Islam. Whereas, Muhammad Bin Qasim's attack upon Sindh is also an other important historical event which influenced the people from Islam. Similarly, after him, Mahmud Ghauri and Ghaznavid had also done amazing works in order to spread Islam. Eventually, Islam had been introduced by other five dinesties which are khilji, sayed, lodhi and so on. In this connection from 1526 to 1707, Mughals boosted Islam and explored it to the other regions. (What does it mean?) Nevertheless, from 1857 to 1947 Britishers ruled over India as ruler of a colony. Eventually, Islam provided an outstanding ideology to the people of Muslim regions and Ideology of Pakistan took place and finally Pakistan came (emerged) on the world map on 14th August, 1947.

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. The topic 'Islam is the attractive Religion' you have given to your paragraph is not suitable. It does not suit your paragraph by any means.

. What was this all about? It seems to me mound of facts. It is a complicated time line about the advent of Islam in India.

I have corrected/ amended some of your grammatical mistakes, errors, omissions, and structure of sentence. Despite this could have been much better...Overall you doing good job...keep it up.

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Thank you sir Zuhaib Da Skeptic and Faisal

To Err is Human, To Forgive Dine

Human by nature can not control himself to not commit mistake because it is a natural phenomenon. Human is not an angel, he does mistakes by either consciously or unconsciously. As a matter of fact, people face a lot of problems either of family, individual or other business problems. He is not an angel who does not make mistakes. He has not divine sources so that he can be a purified and free from mistakes. In this world every person does mistakes and errors because it is a natural truth. No one can reject it. Some time human make blunders, it hurts the animals and other living thinks that are considered inhuman acts. But these kinds of errors can either be consciously and unconsciously. Uncounsiously mistakes are error. It can be forgiven but the consociously mistakes can not be forgiven because a person who does or commit mistake by his own will. If he hurts some body who does not hurts him then it would be called an unfair act. But when the hurted human forgive him it is called a great humanity. That is why it is called to err human to forgive divine.