Originally Posted by smartminded

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Originally Posted by Muhammad Ali Qureshi

Rich Men have no Fault

We live in this word with the label such as “Rich” and “Poor”. Some people are bestowed with wealth and resources while some are with the curse of poverty. People from their parents along with genes also inherit the lives with they are going to lead.
The words like “Justice” have merely existence in the dictionaries. Therefore poor should be cautious about following right path and wrong doing because law applies to them strictly. Rich men do not have to be worried for their committed illegal and bad deeds. Their money and means are sufficient to protect them from all actions which could be taken against their sins. If some rich men commit the illegal actions and some ones dare to complain of them and raise the voice against them; the mouth are bonded of these bold person and lesson is taught them that “Rich Men have no fault”. Hence in any contest where rich and poor are involved; the ultimate result is that the rich wins over the power. This is even evidence in international scenario too. For Example, the USA, the world’s super power whenever wanted to attack on any Muslim country she attacked without any proofs or evidences and violated the Human Rights. No one was and is to take action against USA. Same is the case with the Wadeera and Jageerdar (feudal) system in the Pakistan. They do injustice with the poor, violet the Human Rights, and commit the unlawful acts. The poor can not take action because they lock the mouths of the poor and educate that “Rich men have no fault”. The inequality is not a new concept. It exists from the arrival of Adam on earth. The Elder brother killed his brother because he had power. He buried his brother’s body and removed evidences. It seems like the rules are made only for the poor and powerful have no concern to these.

Please figure out my grammatical mistakes.

Originally Posted by Sana Rizwan Qureshi

I have found no grammaticla mistake, it is good expansion

Originally Posted by Sana Rizwan Qureshi

I have found no grammaticla mistake, it is good expansion

Originally Posted by AliRehman5

Is Democracy an ideal form of Government

Democracy is the form of government where all eligible citizens have an equal say to all the matters that affect their lives. Democracy encompasses equal social, political and culture write to all the eligible persons.Everyone has a right to participate in government either directly or by the support of elected representatives. if we see the history of all democracy it was restricted to elite class only until full enfranchisement was warn for all adult citizens in most modern democracies through the suffrage movement. A democratic government contrasts to form a government in which power of government is exercised by one person, as in monarchy or by small number of individuals as in oligarchy but today s democracy is an amalgamation of both monarchy and oligarchy. several variations of democracy exist but two forms of democracy are well known in which citizens execute their wills one is in which all eligible citizens have an direct and active role in decision making of government in modern countries all eligible citizens enjoy their sovereign power but political power is executed by one elected representative this is call representative democracy the idea of representative democracy arose during the era of enlightenment, middle east, Europe American and french revolution. thus, it is the best form of government providing equal rights of all citizens to enjoy their lives peacefully.
Please seniors point out all the grammatical mistakes in above passage.

Originally Posted by Engrnasirsattar

Please check this... it might not be perfect but it can give you idea what i am talking about....

"Rich men have no fault"
The money is an indispensable pillar of the economy.it is considered as the (us "a" instead of "the")replacement of the respect and has ruined the beauty of the relations(this sentence is not 100% true. avoid using like this sentence).
It has become a trend in the society to go for the financial values rather then moral values.Money has become the symbol of social status.Achieving a social status means that on(one) has got immunity from having a fault.It is because a rich man has all the facilities for living an extra-ordinary life.The money is supposed to be the great weapon (weapon is not suitable word here because weapon does not hide anything;if you use weapon then sentence must be in the sense of weapon)for hiding the faults.Being (a)rich man stamps the feel of being respectable.The authority and law in order institutions also salute the one which has (remove has and use holds)money.Depending upon the social setup and infrastructure ,an environment is itself created by the priorities of the communists in which everyone is busy in making money.Some of the communists are very desperate and they even use unfair means the(for getting) get money to enhance their status in the society.In ultimate words they use unfair means to get respect in the society.The doctrine that a rich man has no fault has also affected the social and religious life of the people.They are also moving away from their religion.The role of media is like adding fuel to the fire.They(media is considered as singular words thought it is plural word ) show in their advertisements that a man with a good car has so many fans and how the people are desperate the become like that man.
We will have to change the routes and motives for the definition of a good person or a person without faults.We(shall) will have to identify a new criteria for that in which the moral values are sure to be preserved.We(shall) will have to devolpe (develop)a new concept in the society that money is not everything and it is the purity of soul that is everything.
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