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1.We shall dia rather than surrender.

2.I had gone to delhi two days back.

3.He had been attacked by the enemy yesterday.

4.he left for lahore before i reached his place.

5.the thief was watched as he jumped over the wall.

6.while his enemy made secret preparations,he was doing nothing.
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1.We shall dia rather than surrender.
We would like to die rather than surrender.

2.I had gone to delhi two days back.
I went to Delhi two days ago.

3.He had been attacked by the enemy yesterday.
He was attacked by the enemy yesterday.

4.he left for lahore before i reached his place.
He had left for Lahore when I reached there.

5.the thief was watched as he jumped over the wall.
The thief was watched when he jumped over the wall.

6.while his enemy made secret preparations,he was doing nothing.
His enemy was making secret preparation, while he was doing nothing.
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Q.1 : We shall die rather than surrender.
Ans : We will die rather than surrender.

Q.4 : He left for lahore before i reached his place.
Ans : he had left for lahore before i reached his place.

Q.5 : The thief was watched as he jumped over the wall.
Ans : The thief was watched as he was jumping over the wall.

Q.6 : while his enemy made secret preparations,he was doing nothing.
Ans : While His enemy was making secret preparation,he was doing nothing.
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1.You should slowly read this letter.

2.I have read shakespeare's plays,who is a great dramatist.

3.She neither offended me nor my friend.

4.Strict rules to the students were passed.

5.The snow covered the hill that had fallen during the evening.
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1.You should slowly read this letter.
You should read this letter slowly.

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2.I have read shakespeare's plays,who is a great dramatist.
I have read shakespeare's plays,who was a great dramatist.

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3.She neither offended me nor my friend.
She neither offended i nor my friend.

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4.Strict rules to the students were passed.
Strict rules were passed for the students.

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5.The snow covered the hill that had fallen during the evening
The snow that had fallen during the evening covered the hill.
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1.We shall dia rather than surrender.
We'd rather die than surrender.


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Correct the following sentences:

1.If the books have been cataloged last week, why haven’t they been placed on the shelf?
2.I really dug the character of Brutus.
3.The setting of a story effects the story’s plot.
4.Arctic trees are scrubbiest than trees in milder climates.
5.Quebec rises in a magnificent way above the St. Lawrence River.
6.During Colonial days, a school room looked rather empty.
7.The helium- filled balloon rose in the air.
8.If I had the address, I would have delivered the package myself.
9.Do you know that these gloves have lay on the bureau all week?
10.If I would have known about the team tryouts, I would have signed up for them.
11.Valarie claims that cats made the best pets.
12.By next month Ms. Jones will be Mayor of Tallahassee for two years.
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1.If the books have been cataloged last week, why haven’t they been placed on the shelf?
If the books were cataloged last week, why haven’t they been placed on the shelf?

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2.I really dug the character of Brutus.
I really admired the character of Brutus.

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3.The setting of a story effects the story’s plot.
The setting of a story affects the story's plot.

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4.Arctic trees are scrubbiest than trees in milder climates.
Arctic trees are scrubbier than trees in milder climates.

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5.Quebec rises in a magnificent way above the St. Lawrence River.
Quebec rises magnificently above the St. Lawrence River.

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6.During Colonial days, a school room looked rather empty.
During Colonial days, a schoolroom looked rather empty.

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7.The helium- filled balloon rose in the air.
The helium-filled baloon rose into the air.

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8.If I had the address, I would have delivered the package myself.
If I had had the address, I would have delivered the package myself.

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9.Do you know that these gloves have lay on the bureau all week?
Do you know that these gloves have lain on the bureau all week?

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11.Valarie claims that cats made the best pets.
Valarie claims that cats make the best pets.

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12.By next month Ms. Jones will be Mayor of Tallahassee for two years.
By next month Ms. Jones will have been Mayor of Tallahassee for two years.
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Correct the following sentences:
  1. Each night when night came and the temperature fell, my parents lit the fire in the bedroom.
  2. Francis promised to bring the Papago basket that she bought in Arizona.
  3. He has lain his racquetball glove on the beach.
  4. I would have lent you my notes if you would have asked me.
  5. Many scientist are still hoping to have found life on another planet.
  6. Because she had an astounding memory, Sue has never forgotten an important equation.
  7. She is a real good swimmer.
  8. Some of you will have to bring their own beer.
  9. To be lacking in self-discipline is to lack any true commitment to the goals one has set.
  10. Lie the baby down for her nap.
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