Rewrite the following in your own simple words.
 

Rewrite the following in your own simple words.
Of one great Father, in whatever clime.
Nature or change hath cast the seeds of life-
All tongues, all colours: neither after deaths.
Shall we be soared in to languages
And tints, white, blacks, and tawny, Greek and Goth.
Northmen, and offspring of hot African;
The All-Father, He is whom we live and move.
He, the indifference Judges of all, regards.
Nations, and hues, and dialects alike.
According to their work shall they be judged, When even-handed in scale
Their good and evil weighs.

Correction
 

Thanks for reminding me sentence 09. I couldnot compelete due to light.

1. If I was her I will not do it.
If I were her, I would not do it.

2. He is witty than any boy in class.
He is witty than any other boy in the class.

3. Although he is senior than any officer yet he is not promoted.
Although he is senior yet he is not promoted.

4. Since two nights I could not sleep.
From last two nights I could not sleep.

5. Five workers have dismissed and two replaced.
Five workers have dismissed and two have replaced( is it use of Have been?)
6. The world War has been ended in 1945 and Pakistan has been sine 1947.
The world war ended in 1945 and Pakistan got independence in 1947( M confused, as Pakistan is not ended in 1947 but established or got indeependence so make me clear plz)

7. Being a bad weather I could get plane services.
Due to bad weather, I couldnot get plane services.

8. She is succeeded to win the first prize.
She has succeeded to win the first prize.

9. A bunch of flowers were presented to the chief guest.
A bunch of flowers was presented to the chief guest.

10. The two first page of the book are torned.[/B]
The first two pages of this book are torned.

4. Since two nights I could not sleep.
From last two nights I could not sleep. posted by ramshakhan.
Dear brother It wouls be like this.

Since two nights I could not sleep.
For last two nights I could not sleep.
Although he is senior than any officer yet he is not promoted.
Although he is senior yet he is not promoted.

Although he is senior than any officer yet he is not promoted
Although he is senior than any officer but he is not promoted.

She is succeeded to win the first prize.
She succeeded to win the first prize.

The world war ended in 1945 and Pakistan got independence in 1947( M confused, as Pakistan is not ended in 1947 but established or got indeependence so make me clear plz)
Dear u r right. Pakistan established or come to existence.
correct me if I am mistaken
rgds

[QUOTE=ramshakhan]
6. The world War has been ended in 1945 and Pakistan has been sine 1947.
The world war ended in 1945 and Pakistan got independence in 1947( M confused, as Pakistan is not ended in 1947 but established or got indeependence so make me clear plz)[/QUOTE]

The sentence doesn't seem to be right anyway. And by further addition of words it will fully change.

@ faisal memon
 

Make corection , m girl, Ramsha khan not borther.

I am surprised how it could be

[B]Although he is senior than any officer yet he is not promoted.
Although he is senior yet he is not promoted.[/B]

With any , other is always used. With Although, yet is used.

You can say as
Although he is senior than any other officer yet he is not promoted. gramatically yet is used. Confirm it. M dead sure about my statement althoug hm not claiming tobe perfect.

[B]She is succeeded to win the first prize.
She succeeded to win the first prize.[/B]

You have changed sentence into past. if I wana tell some other person about her achievement on the same day , then what should we say?

@ lord Avalon,

thanks, I was thinking so.

Correction will be appreciated.

@ ramshahkhan I appreciated . keep it
 

With any , other is always used. With Although, yet is used.

You can say as
Although he is senior than any other officer yet he is not promoted. gramatically yet is used. Confirm it. M dead sure about my statement althoug hm not claiming tobe perfect.

My dear daughter I think Although n though is conjunction. n we can nt used both conjunction at same time. Reference Exploring The World English. page no 467.
Though he is fat yet he runs fast.
Though he is fat but runs fast.
Though he is fat still runs fast.
this is correct Though he is fat, he runs fast.
So we can say that
Although he is senior than other officers, he is not promoted.
thanks, I was thinking so.

Correction will be appreciated
regds.
Faisal Ahmed

open for comments.

The world War has been ended in 1945 and Pakistan has been sine 1947.
I don't know even if its a sentence,
"Pakistan has been ??? since 1947."
There is something missing, putting a verb wont justify as the meaning of the sentence will drastically change.

The world War ended in 1945 and Pakistan came into being in 1947.

Its the best solution according to me.

[B]Dear bro Lord Alvon[/B]

Dear brother, i think u r correct.
The world War has been ended in 1945 and Pakistan has been sine 1947.
but dear it is appropraite that we should write as
The World War had been ended in 1945 and Pakistan has been sine 1947.
rgds
Faisal Ahmed

[B] -----------------------------------------------------[/B]

Seniors r requested to solve the exercise. espcially dr asgar, raz n other members

[B]Lets fill in the blanks.[/B]

1. There’s only---------------- letter here; where are___________ others.
2. To learn____________- language, two things are essential____________ good teacher and_____________ will to work.
3. ___________ evening by______________ fire in__________ winter is better than________ visit _______________ cinema.
4. ___________ beggars live___________ charity.
5. __________ of _________ things like most __________ ice-cream.
6. A reward_________ fifty pounds ___________ offered.
7. The majority ___________ students _______ in favour __________ a holiday.
8. My trousers ___________ too ____________-.
9. The position ______________ an officer ___________ quite different ___________ that of his men.
10. Everybody ____________ a hobby; my brothers___________ stamps collecting.
11. She ______________ all her house work ___________ the evening.
12. Everyone __________ shouting_________ the crowd __________ getting wilder.
13. ____________ horse is _________ quadruped, but ___________ human being _______________ biped.


[B]Rewrite the following in your own simple words.[/B]

Of one great Father, in whatever clime.
Nature or change hath cast the seeds of life-
All tongues, all colours: neither after deaths.
Shall we be soared in to languages
And tints, white, blacks, and tawny, Greek and Goth.
Northmen, and offspring of hot African;
The All-Father, He is whom we live and move.
He, the indifference Judges of all, regards.
Nations, and hues, and dialects alike.
According to their work shall they be judged, When even-handed in scale
Their good and evil weighs.

[QUOTE=Faisalmemon]


Seniors r requested to solve the exercise. espcially dr asgar, raz n other members

[B]Lets fill in the blanks.[/B]

1. There’s only---------------- letter here; where are___________ others.
2. To learn____________- language, two things are essential____________ good teacher and_____________ will to work.
3. ___________ evening by______________ fire in__________ winter is better than________ visit _______________ cinema.
4. ___________ beggars live___________ charity.
5. __________ of _________ things like most __________ ice-cream.
6. A reward_________ fifty pounds ___________ offered.
7. The majority ___________ students _______ in favour __________ a holiday.
8. My trousers ___________ too ____________-.
9. The position ______________ an officer ___________ quite different ___________ that of his men.
10. Everybody ____________ a hobby; my brothers___________ stamps collecting.
11. She ______________ all her house work ___________ the evening.
12. Everyone __________ shouting_________ the crowd __________ getting wilder.
13. ____________ horse is _________ quadruped, but ___________ human being _______________ biped.

.[/QUOTE]


If you allow me with the blanks :)


1. There’s only [COLOR="Red"][B]one[/B][/COLOR] letter here; where are [COLOR="Red"][B]the[/B][/COLOR] others.

2. To learn [COLOR="Red"][B]a[/B][/COLOR] language, two things are essential [COLOR="Red"][B]a[/B][/COLOR] good teacher and [COLOR="Red"][B]the[/B][/COLOR] will to work.

3. [COLOR="Red"][B]An[/B][/COLOR] evening by [COLOR="Red"][B]the[/B][/COLOR] fire in [COLOR="Red"][B]the[/B][/COLOR] winter is better than [COLOR="Red"][B]a[/B][/COLOR] visit [COLOR="Red"][B]to[/B][/COLOR] cinema.

4. [COLOR="Red"][B]The[/B][/COLOR] beggars live [COLOR="Red"][B]on[/B][/COLOR] charity.

5. :blink:

6. A reward [COLOR="Red"][B]of[/B][/COLOR] fifty pounds[COLOR="Red"][B] is/was[/B][/COLOR] offered.

7. The majority [COLOR="Red"][B]of[/B][/COLOR] students [COLOR="Red"][B]are/were[/B][/COLOR] in favour [COLOR="Red"][B]of[/B][/COLOR] a holiday.

8. :blink:

9. The position [COLOR="Red"][B]of [/B][/COLOR]an officer [COLOR="Red"][B]is[/B][/COLOR] quite different [COLOR="Red"][B]to[/B][/COLOR] that of his men.

10. Everybody [COLOR="Red"][B]has[/B][/COLOR] a hobby; my brothers [COLOR="Red"][B]have[/B][/COLOR] stamps collecting.

11. She [COLOR="Red"][B]does/did[/B][/COLOR] all her house work [COLOR="Red"][B]in/by[/B][/COLOR] the evening.

12. Everyone[COLOR="Red"][B] is/was [/B][/COLOR]shouting [COLOR="Red"][B]and [/B][/COLOR]the crowd [COLOR="Red"][B]is/was[/B][/COLOR] getting wilder.

13.:blink:

9. The position [COLOR="Red"][B]of [/B][/COLOR]an officer [COLOR="Red"][B]is[/B][/COLOR] quite different [COLOR="Red"][B]to[/B][/COLOR] that of his men.

shouldn't it be

The position [B]of[/B] an officer [B]is[/B] quite different [B]from[/B] that of his men.

??