Dear,

I am starting this thread to exercise your efforts of solving precise and get checked by other forum members and CSP officers.

Rule: Use R.Dhillion Exercise for your precise practise, So we can share our solutions with each others.

I have attempted the following exercise;

Exercise # 07

Fascism , in the words of Mussolini , believes that `war alone brings up to its highest tension , all human energy puts the stamp of nobility upon the people who have the courage to meet it ` . Again a doctrine which is founded on the harmful postulate of peace is hostile to Fascism .The Fascist then is one who believes that the bombardment of open towns with fire , poison and explosives is intrinsically good . He is one who rejects the teachings of the prophets and believes that the best society is the national society living in a state of chronic hostility towards other national societies and preoccupied with ideas of slaughter . He is one who despises non - attached individuals and holds up for admiration the person who , in obedience to the boss who happens at the moment to grabbed a political power systematically , cultivates all the passion ( pride , danger , envy , hatred ) which the philosophers and the founders of religions have unanimously condemned as the least worthy of human beings . All Fascist planning , therefore , efficient as a war machine. Industry , commerce and finance are all controlled for this purpose.( 200 words )



The doctrine of fascism is the survivor of the fittest . It appreciates the destruction of the the society and condemned the unanimous message of peace . Purpose of the fascism is to utilize the resources of the society for wagging war against human beings and to transform the society into predator. In a nutshell , fascism is misanthropist


Regards,

Dear Reader,

Do you want to pass CSS exam? Than practice your Precise writing from R. Dhillion. It is recommended by many English Professor's and CSP Qualifiers.

My another efforts is given below:


Exercise # 01
Page : 42

Perhaps the best way to understand what is meant by zest will be to consider the different ways in which men behave when they sit down to mean. There are those to whom a meal is merely a bote no matter how excellent the food may be, they feel that it is uninteresting. They have had excellent food before at almost every meal they have eaten. They have never known what it was to go without meal until huger becomes a raging passion, but have come to regard meals as merely an ordinary occurrence. Like everything else, meals are tiresome but, it is no use to make a fuss, because nothing else will be tiresome. Then there are the in valid who eat from a sense of duty, because the doctor has told them that it is necessary to take a little nourishment in order to keep their strength. Then there are the gluttons who fall upon their food with eager rapidity, eat too much and grow lethargic, finally there are those who begin with a sound appetite are glad of their food, eat until they have had enough and then sop. Those who are set down before the feast of life have similar attitudes towards the things, it offers. (210 Words)


By having meal in distinct ways determines the different ways of enthusiasm for it. Meal has become tasteless for the people who had enough variety of meal because they had not enjoyed the taste of hunger. Meal is as tiresome to have as other activities but contains nutrients. The attitude of disabled person of having meal is as similar as voracious and sound appetite person. ( 60 words )


Note: Comments are welcome

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that is a very nice effort...may i correct you a bit please...i think its 'survival of the fittest'...the darwin theory.

Dear,

You are absolutely right ! thanks for correcting me.

Regards,

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كُلُّ نَفْسٍ ذَآئِقَةُ الْمَوْتِ - Every Soul Must Have The Taste Of Death

Zest can be understood by analysing people's approach to take a meal. Some don't value it until they are hungry. Taking meal may be a little hectic activity but not much. Some only take it to live - as a compulsion, whereas some live solely for it. Some adopt moderate approach towards it. People adopt similar attitudes towards life.

Title : 1) Different Life Styles
2) Ways of Living etc etc....

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Nice effort bunko but I reasonably observe some unrequired words in your precis by every word and test of a definition precis means "precision" which I see unmarked unto some extent.

I am overhauling your attempt hope it will be appreciated in the context of goodwill.
I goes somewhat like this :

having meals in different ways determines distinct enthusiasm. Meal becomes tasteless to whom have had varieties, for they have not famish. meal is tiresome as other activities but bear nutrients. disabled having meal resembles sami voracious consumer. (38 words).

PS: Exercise put in practice pertains context of helping spirit furthermore should not be taken as something sarcastic

Thank you
sheryar khan

Dear,

@ Leopard,

Very well done brother ! Nice work.

@ Sheryar Khan,

Thank you brother, But I am taught that Precise should be 1/3 of the original passage thats why may be it seem to you un-required words used in my precise.

No doubt, Your precise is highly appreciable.
But don't you think it should be 1/3 of the original passage?

Note: Precise should be 1/3 of original passage, According to:

1) R.Dhillion
2) Prof. Nagpal
3) Prof. Ali Rizvi


Regards,

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Try to Boil Down !!

Exercise # 02
Page: 38

If today, I have a quarrel with another man, I do not get beaten merely because I am physically weaker and he can knock me down. I go to law, and the law will decide as fairly as it can between the two of us. Thus in disputes between man and man right has taken the place of might. Moreover the law protects me from robbery and violence. Nobody may come and break into my house, steal my goods, or run off with my children. Of course, there are buglers, but they are very rare, and the law punishes them whenever it catches them.

It is difficult for us to realize how much this is safety means. Without safety those higher activities of mankind which make up civilization could not go on. The inventor could not invent, the scientist find out or the artist make beautiful things. Hence order and safety although they are not themselves civilization are things without which civilization would be impossible. They are necessary to our civilization as the air we breath is to us and we have grown so used to them that we do not notice them any more than we notice the air.


Regards,

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Law is mightier than illicit acts. It protects whether weak or strong against unjust and law breakers acts. Safety makes viable environment to nurture the civilization; It becomes indispensable to our civilization as air to breath.

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كُلُّ نَفْسٍ ذَآئِقَةُ الْمَوْتِ - Every Soul Must Have The Taste Of Death

Here goes my attempt. plz seniors evaluate it. Thanks.

Law is the order of the day. It has made the lives of individuals more secured and peaceful. Law sows the plant of safety and under its shade various fractions of the society impart their ingredients into the vital composition of civilization. And civilization respires and grows in the presence of safety and order. (54 words)

Title: Law - vital organ of Safety and Civilization

Regards,
Ali

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Action may not always bring happiness, but there is no happiness without action. ( Benjamin Disraeli )

Law- Benefits to Mankind

Today, Law has the ultimate power. Law has cease disparity between stronger and weaker. People can live safely without any fear of theft, violence. Mankind has benefited by law even civilizations get nourished and it is now become part of our life.

@ Bunko

Brother pls see my attempt and comment/ criticize on it.
Seniors do check our efforts.

Waiting from you side.

regards,
csp

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Today, Law provides security to the Weak and it has alleviated the concept of Might is Right. Though its net is not impregnable but It shield us against crimes. It maintains peace which is vital to nurture civilization. We are so acclimatized to Law that we take its benefits for granted. (51 words)

Title: 1) Importance of Law
2) Law- Vital for Society etc etc...

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