Précis paper 2011
Causes of unhappiness

Many causes may be attributed to the unhappiness however, main reason behind all of them is same. An unhappy man usually emphasizes on achieving a thing from which he has been deprived throughout his life while ignoring all other activities. Besides this a situation which has become common now a days is that a person feels so obstructed that he starts drinking to satisfy him. Self centered people try to find out happiness in illegal means such as intoxication bec they found no hope except unconsciousness. Peoples who remain unhappy in spite of knowing the way to become happy are very few and these are usually those people who have enjoyed most of the things in their earlier life and find nothing to be left to live for. These people usually feel pride in their unhappiness.
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[QUOTE=sajida11;543830]Précis paper 2011
Causes of unhappiness

Many causes may be attributed to the unhappiness however, main reason behind all of them is same. An unhappy man usually emphasizes on achieving a thing from which he has been deprived throughout his life while ignoring all other activities. (here activities are referred to consequences,means he wants to achieve that thing with whatever sources legal or illegal)(So we can write that "An unhapp man can adopt any kind of means to achieve a thing from which he had been deprived in his youth)
Besides this a situation which has become common now a days is that a person feels so obstructed that he starts drinking to satisfy him.
Do not use examples which have already been discussed in the original text.
Self centered people try to find out happiness in illegal means such as intoxication bec they found no hope except unconsciousness. (Another example)

Peoples who remain unhappy in spite of knowing the way to become happy are very few and these are usually those people who have enjoyed most of the things in their earlier life and find nothing to be left to live for. These people usually feel pride in their unhappiness.
We can replace it with one line:
People who feel pride in being unhappy are not actually unhappy
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plz coorect me if i am wrong title should never consist of sentence.it should be a phrase.

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Title can be supplied with a single word,phrase or sentence.
Usually it is supplied with a short,concise and appropriate sentence-what we call a key sentence-a sentence that gives central idea of the original passage.
The key sentence is usually found at the beginning or at the end of the original passage.
In certain typical passages you find many key sentences,in such situations it is upto your mental dexterity that how you make the most appropriate and pertinent one apart.