seniors plesae check my outline

[bushra shakeel]

I may disapprove what you say may , but I will defend your right to say till my death
• Introduction
 Term explained
 Un declaration
 Pakistan constitution
• Consequences of free speech
 Charlie hebdo
 Yellow journalism
 Abusive language by political parties
 Satanic verse by terry john
 Allegation on ISI
 AIB Indian comedy program
• Recent statement of Pope of France about freedom to speech
• Reason for putting ban on speech
 To protect national security
 To save ones character
 To avoid shia sunni clash
 To protect national organization like isi
 To protect one belief and conviction
 To protect ones religion and respectable personality
• Steps needed to make limits on freedom
 Education on tolerating other’s belief and conviction
 Leaders must come on front as role model
 Role of u.n

[timeOn]

It sounds good. I think you should have added democratic values to freedom of speech. Moreover, graphs make essay marks yielding..............wish you good luck.

[Metlo]

Originally Posted by bushra shakeel

I may disapprove what you say may , but I will defend your right to say till my death
• Introduction
 Term explained
 Un declaration
 Pakistan constitution
• Consequences of free speech
 Charlie hebdo
 Yellow journalism
 Abusive language by political parties
 Satanic verse by terry john
 Allegation on ISI
 AIB Indian comedy program
• Recent statement of Pope of France about freedom to speech
• Reason for putting ban on speech
 To protect national security
 To save ones character
 To avoid shia sunni clash
 To protect national organization like isi
 To protect one belief and conviction
 To protect ones religion and respectable personality
• Steps needed to make limits on freedom
 Education on tolerating other’s belief and conviction
 Leaders must come on front as role model
 Role of u.n

your essay is not good at all; it's irrelevant, disorganized, contains too many examples thus, lacking the discussion of major issue .
This essay should have been based on 2 main points; importance of civilised dissent,its promotion and protection , and limitations of free speech.

[haseebbaloch]

Originally Posted by bushra shakeel

I may disapprove what you say may , but I will defend your right to say till my death
• Introduction
 Term explained
 Un declaration
 Pakistan constitution
• Consequences of free speech
 Charlie hebdo
 Yellow journalism
 Abusive language by political parties
 Satanic verse by terry john
 Allegation on ISI
 AIB Indian comedy program
• Recent statement of Pope of France about freedom to speech
• Reason for putting ban on speech
 To protect national security
 To save ones character
 To avoid shia sunni clash
 To protect national organization like isi
 To protect one belief and conviction
 To protect ones religion and respectable personality
• Steps needed to make limits on freedom
 Education on tolerating other’s belief and conviction
 Leaders must come on front as role model
 Role of u.n

this statement is of voltiare i may added to give some views of greeks and romans about freedom how they enjoy freedom and PEMRA on Pakistan level secondly ur ideas are valuable i attempt same like it but i ommitted and went with terrorism becoz the statement is not about freedom its little bit confusing in the first context the sayer said i disapprove what u say means the value of dissent second the proverb is encourage the right to say i was totally confused but after went through the topic the idea is clear that freedom is a right to say
best wishes to you and also pray for me

[bushra shakeel]

statement was wth refernce to charlie hebdo case...... i have proved that i will never defend ur right to say because we cant defend others right to say when they hit our religion or character or integrity of country e.g....

[bushra shakeel]

Originally Posted by Metlo

your essay is not good at all; it's irrelevant, disorganized, contains too many examples thus, lacking the discussion of major issue .
This essay should have been based on 2 main points; importance of civilised dissent,its promotion and protection , and limitations of free speech.

:'(

[shamsDahar]

Not good