I also mention the names of writers but whenever I am doubtful then I deliberately avoid inverted commas.
My experience says that the examiner really likes literary touch so stay optimistic !

can any one comment...?

my essay outline..

place of urdu in pak and supreme court rulling

inro
urdu in historical perspective
views of quid.. (quote)
place of urdu in pak
... a culture of oblivion t regional languge
... how govt has made eng language superior to urdu in political and high power corridor..
...
benefits of urdu as official language of pak..
..as a,medium of communication...
..as medium of education...
..as medium of technologyy and science..
.....
...
supreme court rulling

and its impacts

how forighen govt...are distorting our culture...

is it disastrous to promote urdu as oficail language
..cost
..language controversry(bangladesh)...


wats needs to be done to promte urdu as oficial language..

on the part of..

govt
civil socity
educational institutions
media
intellectuals..

there is no conflict bw urdu and other regional languages

need to promte other regional languages ..(punjbi ..balchi..sindhi ) to the level of national language to stop volcano from burstingg

conclusion

IA... BTW in which range was your roll #? Mine was in 11k... I want to make sense of whether examiner will check your or mine essay first?

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Papers are checked roll number wise?

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9k

It was the second essay that I wanted to attempt but I didn't go for it because I was not aware of current proceedings.
Not many people would have attempted it so you would have an edge over others.If you didn't make spelling mistakes in paper like you did here,your outline covers almost all aspects.

Good luck

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I attempt this topic..World as a Global village learning to live together.
Introduction:
Present world is interdependent and interconnected, by collaborating and working together we can reap fruits together.
I discuss Political, economic, social, religious where world can collaborate and can live and work together.
i started my essay from president obama quote...like" No doubt we are super power with strong economy and military but we cannot solve world problems alone". i cannot recall exact quote it was something like that. Then i discuss how iran and P5+1 deal can be generalized to solve other world issues in this interdependent and interconnected world.
Then in religious harmony i talk about Pope visits to Palestine and Isreal in addition Saudi Grand Mufti decree in which he declared suicide attacks un islamic and connect these two points how we can adopt them in this world to benefit.
In economy i talk about north south division and its elimination with one universal economic system.
In social gave examples of Multinational corporations hiring best talent around the world by giving example of Google CEO.
Conclusion:
By accepting diversity and working together we can reap fruits together.
Draw backs:
As it was my first attempt i was not having wrist watch nor i was aware about having one in the hall and that too when left with one hour and twenty minutes. I spend soo much time on outline but i wrote just 7 pages essay due to time shortage with outline it was around alomst ten and ten and half pages.
As i am writing after so many days almost forgot outline except those main points.
I am extremely upset because i am not satisfied with the material that i wrote there in hurry.
I will be extremely thankful to all of you for your comments especially sis Farah.:-)

You have discussed various aspects of globalization.It shows that you have interpreted the topic well.I can see some tense mistakes there that can be your weakness if you have done the same in paper.Otherwise stay hopeful!

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Quitters never win and Winners never quit..!!!

Hey have a look on my essay outline on page 8 on other topic.friend wala thread

Very nice outline and excellent effort by Farrah Zaffar.Hopefully you got good score.IA

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A comprehensive outline and full of literary shades. Thoroughly impressed.

But can you explain how you incorporated this part "...because we fall too easily in the trap of being our worst enemies" in your essay?