Ok Guys
U Have Made Good Discussion
Nuclear Weapons Are Threat So Means That They Are Also Hope For Maintainig Peace
They Are Also Used For Having Hope For Peace
They Are Also Used For Having Hope For Scurity
Deterence
So U Firs Discuss Nuclear
Benefits
Usage
Positive Usage
Negative Usage
Then Go For Weapons
Weaposn Usage
Defence
Protection
Fight
Attack
Then U Go For Countries Which Have Nuclear Weapons
Y They Have Nuclear Weapons
Need
Then First Who Got Nuclear Weapon Then Y Another Got
As India And Pakistan
America And Iran

Israel And Iran
North Korea
Then Go To Describe The Reasons
And Finally Come To Conclusion
Here Essay Itself Gives Conclusion
That They Are Also Hope
So Got That
Wish U Alll Best Of Luck

Salam,

Sometime ago I asked about using headings in essays. I was strongly advised against it. But I am having some confusion now. Please tell me what is the best way to write the following, in heading form or in paragraph form:



Corruption has numerous facets and types, some of which are:-
a. Extortion: This is one of the ugliest forms of corruption, in which innocent
people are forced to pay for none of their faults;
b. Abuse of Public Office: Such as using the advantages of a tax audit or
legal sanctions to extract personal favours;
c. Bribery: It takes two to bread corruption: giving and taking bribes;
d. Graft: Graft is the act of a public office holder personally benefiting from
public funds in a way other than prescribed by law;
e. Campaign Contributions and Soft Money: In the political arena, it is
difficult to prove corruption, but impossible to prove its absence. Politicians
are placed in apparently compromising positions because of their need to
solicit financial contributions for their campaigns. Often, they appear to be
acting in the interests of those parties that fund them, giving rise to talk
of political corruption.


My other question is that: suppose we have to give some recommendations or tell the causes of something, again do we have to use paragraphs or are we allowed to write it in points.

dear.... it is upto u.
Don't bother, if u feel ease to hav headings i.e. no pb.
I personally asked CSP-2004 and CSP-2005 ur question, and was advised to use headings.

Four CSPs said to write in paragraghs ...... so I hav concluded that "It doesn't matter 2 write in "Headings" or "Para-graph"

As per my knowledge, my suggestion 2 u is that "focuss on ur stuff rather than being confused 2 present it. u must hav appropriate, precise and accurate material and present it in ur own style."

Best Regards

AoA

brother it depends upon the nature of the essay. there are some essays, which require headings, points and even some tables/graphs etc. however, never over stuff ur essay with bulky material.

It is an advise to make outline of every essay either it requires headings or else.

may ALLAH be with you.

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@Tabassum

Rightly said!

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In essay, heading are not appreciated because it obstruct the logical development of thoughts. A detailed outline highlights your all possible points. Start each paragraph with a concise 'topic sentence' which should appear as a heading.

Can we use headings in essays. And if we can, then is there a problem in using too many headings?
Dear u may use headings in ordinary queries but headings r nt allowed in essay paper. thats a forthright answer to ur query.
By the way I used headings in Essay in 2006 and I got 47 marks. Hows that?

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hello everybody

i am a new memebr of this forum. i am in Foreign Service of Pakistan i am ffrom 32nd common. i was just browising the forum and saw this post, i thought if i could share my experiance.

firstly about Headings, i think that headings should be avoided in the essay because usually they are not used and are not liked by the examiners.

secondly when you attempt an essy, regardless of the topic's dimensions, one should write a deatiled analysis of the topic. in your case you were right that you discussed both sides of the topic. i would suggest that while attempting an essy, you should discuss all aspects of it and then should give your own conclusion of the topic. Conclding the essay is very important and you have to put forward different dimenisions before you can conclude.

anyway let me tell taht this a wonderful forum, i had heard a lot about it but joined it just now. it provides excellent opportunity to those who are to appear in the exams

@imtiaz gondal

Respected sir,
Welcome to the forum,and thanks a lot for giving tips regarding essay writing...hope u will keep sharing ur experinces with us in future...looking forward for more guidance.
regards,

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