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Your outline is totally relevant and to the point. Suggestion part is extra and can only be written at end if someone has time. In general practice, teachers advice to write suggestions if problems are asked. Likewise, if suggestions are asked, it is a hidden requirement to mention causes and impacts. No idea about words. Last time, I wrote around 20 pages and got 57 in essay without any preparation or practice. This year, I have done the same with some improvements.
I agree with your entire observation. Perhaps I should have added another Suggestion heading for addressing the problems right after problems,,, Earlier suggestions only focused on the regulations of Social Media in right direction.... In my opinion, similar heading like Suggestion for tackling / redressal / avoiding of the problem,,, should have been added... WELL after hearing about it from all of you proved pretty comfortable to me,,, I highly appreciate it.
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I agree with your entire observation. Perhaps I should have added another Suggestion heading for addressing the problems right after problems,,, Earlier suggestions only focused on the regulations of Social Media in right direction.... In my opinion, similar heading like Suggestion for tackling / redressal / avoiding of the problem,,, should have been added... WELL after hearing about it from all of you proved pretty comfortable to me,,, I highly appreciate it.
Yes, that could have shown earlier suggestion part less awkward. :p
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Your outline is totally relevant and to the point. Suggestion part is extra and can only be written at end if someone has time. In general practice, teachers advice to write suggestions if problems are asked. Likewise, if suggestions are asked, it is a hidden requirement to mention causes and impacts. No idea about words. Last time, I wrote around 20 pages and got 57 in essay without any preparation or practice. This year, I have done the same with some improvements.
Can you please share us your essay outline?
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Can you please share us your essay outline?
Sorry, I cannot share outline of this year as I do not want every other person to pass comments about my attempt. However, I can share outline of my previous year essay in which I have scored 57. My topic was "Is colonial mentality impeding Pakistan's progress?"
Do you want outline of that topic? If yes, let me know so that I can post after examination.
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Sorry, I cannot share outline of this year as I do not want every other person to pass comments about my attempt. However, I can share outline of my previous year essay in which I have scored 57. My topic was "Is colonial mentality impeding Pakistan's progress?"
Do you want outline of that topic? If yes, let me know so that I can post after examination.
Well, in that case, there is an option of an email but if you don't want to share, in any case. no problem.

Thanks for the reply. Best of luck with your upcoming papers.
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Well, in that case, there is an option of an email but if you don't want to share, in any case. no problem.

Thanks for the reply. Best of luck with your upcoming papers.
Thank you.
Actually I do not want anybody to comment on my recent attempt. It will depress and demotivate me. Otherwise, I am more than willing to share all sorts of helping material that I have gathered.

I will post outline of previous attempt essay in 2-3 days In Sha Allah.
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Thank you.
Actually I do not want anybody to comment on my recent attempt. It will depress and demotivate me. Otherwise, I am more than willing to share all sorts of helping material that I have gathered.

I will post outline of previous attempt essay in 2-3 days In Sha Allah.
I can understand that it's totally fine.I need your suggestions in some cases and I will talk to you in detail after you done with your ongoing papers because I don't want to waste your precious time now.
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Thanks for stopping by and reviewing my outline... This is my last attempt, , I did cleared essay last time in 2016 & failed in P&C...

The Emerging Power of Social Media: Prospects & Problems

1. Introduction.
2. Understanding Social Media.
3. How power of Social Media emerged?
4. How much power Social Media has?
5. Prospects of Social Media; as
a. Social Media; as medium of self-fulfillment, self-esteem, an ultimate tool of socialization & building public opinion.
b. A marketing tool for businessmen.
c. A source for society to ventilate grievances.
d. Shares role of opposition.
e. Can press govt. to act, postpone or suspend a course of action.
f. Sets benchmark for policy makers.
g. Employment pool.
6. Suggestions to regulate Social Media in right direction.
7. Problem of Social Media.
a. Cultural invasion.
b. Loneliness & isolation.
c. Depression.
d. Elevated exasperation.
e. Deteriorated patience.
f. Declining writing skills.
g. Moral devaluation.
8. Conclusion.
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