In the fight against terrorism and corruption, it is imperative not to compromise on human rights

Thesis statement:
Human rights violations in the name of fight against terrorism and corruption has proved to be counterproductive. So, the prevention of terror and corruption, and protection of civil liberties should run together.

2. Why is it necessary to fight against terrorism without compromising human rights:
2.1 Indiscriminate killings of innocent civilians occurs when human rights are not taken into account.
2.2 Terrorism will rear head in some other form as in Iraq, Syria , Afghanistan etc
2.3 It will result in worst humanitarian crisis as in Yemen, Afghanistan etc
2.4 Countering terrorism without caring for human rights results in endless civil wars.
2.5 Socio-economic growth of the nation comes to halt.
2.6 Massive migrations and internal displacements bear serious consequences for the nation and region as a whole.
2.7 It is against all democratic norms and international conventions i-e UNDHR, International Humanitarian law etc

3. Adverse effects of countering corruption while violating human rights:
3.1 Low business investments and thereby economy
3.2 Dysfunctional bureaucratic setup and administrative affairs.
3.3 Economic meltdown and stagnated development.
3.4 Political instability and governance failure
3.5 Unchecked and iron-handed anti-corruption institutes

4. How to ensure human rights while fighting terrorism and corruption:
4.1 Criminal justice system must be empowered to check human rights violations.
4.2 UN and its offshoots must implement their resolutions and international conventions i-e international humanitarian law etc
4.3 Vigilance of human rights institutes i-e Red crescent etc
4.4 Human rights commissions and ombudsmen can effectively play their role in ensuring human rights.
4.5 Anti-corruption and Anti-terrorism institutes must train their officials well to protect the sanctity of human rights.
4.6 Media should paly its role in highlighting human rights violations.

5. Conclusion.

Nice try, but some comments I quickly came up with.

1) Essay is heavily tilted towards the physical form of terrorism and human rights associated with it. Cyber terrorism is one aspect that must be included and how free speech on digital media is threatened by using anti terror cyber laws.

2) You need to define "Human Rights" first and why they are important in contemprary world, what are basic human rights guranteed under UN Declaration article 19 and Pakistan's constitution. Include the social contract (rousseau and locke) a citizen has with the state, and how state is responsible for ensuring human rights of its citizens.

3)Include a para in which you explain why it is a hard problem to ensure Human rights in wars and conflicts, why fight against terrorism and human rights are hard to do simultaneously

4) Corruption was supposed to be financial only, the outline fails to address, moral, idealogical, intelectual corruption and how govt tries to tackle it, resulting in violations of human rights.

5) Legislative aspect was ignored, how govt legislatiions posed to fight terrorism actually squeezes human rights. Patriot act after 9/11 in US is a good example of that.

thanks