hey plz rate my essay's outline n put suggestions abt it, also put out mistakes n add some thing in it

Introduction:
-Meaning of longing.
-What is love?
-Longings in Islam.
-How Islam define love and longing.
Types of longings:
-Religious (ishq-e-haqeeqi).
-Worldly (ishq_e_majazi).
+ Physically.
+ soul.
Types of love:
-Religios love.
-Friends love.
-Opposite sex's love.
Why we feel the need of love?
Relationship of love and longings:
-Longing for love is ever lasting.
-Without longing love is not possible.
-why we have longing of love.
Merits of longing for love:
-Motivation.
-Support for spending life.
-Love is not a physical but a spiritural.
Demerits:
-People keep it in wronge way.
-It is a sourse of fulfillment of physical desires.
-It take them away from their religion.
-Create selfishness.
Why people take love in wronge meanings?
-AS they demand only pyhical love not spiritural love.

its steriotypical and gross facile, it doese,nt inspire the quintessence of wholesome pilgrimage of life. its on the model of a science essay

Outline is gud enough to at least pass the essay if the language it is written does'nt get too many red circles.

Critically though spkng, ur outline confines itself as being 'longing for love' strictly in an Islamic philosophy. True indeed for the reason that its the only perfect philosophy, however, it shud not be forgotten that Islam is a Deen for all humanity and love is also a universal phenonmenon. Your types of 'longing for love' mention Ishq haqeeqi followd by ishq majazi. don't u know that its first ishq majazi always which if being full of truth gives way to ishq haqeeqi and not vice versa. Further, Ishq haqeeqi encompasses all of Allah's lively creation from plants, insects, to animals to humanbeings of whatever religion. Love for parents and kids for instance, whatever different religion they might follow, is appreciated by Holy Quran. A muslim son's love for his kafir parents or opposite way are but based on the universality of Love.

In other words, Love is a universal longing;its both a physical necessity and spiritual one for all humanity. Its infact the sincerity and truthfulness of love which makes its longing worthwhile. Hence, from contextual point of view, the outline does need revision.

Of course, an essay, though however beutiffuly and perfectly written, if does not follow the subject deserves to be zeroed.

Regards.

ok thnx for ur reply now i request to u that plz write a correct essay on it n them post plz
i shall b very thnx full to u

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“May the love hidden deep inside your heart find the love waiting in your dreams. May the laughter that you find in your tomorrow wipe away the pain you find in your yesterdays.”

it could be equally worst , but i may ry haphazardously



1-Meaning of longing pecular to a person,s pilgrim of life

2- Defination of love ,,,< ACROSS THE GATEWAY OF MY HEART, I WROTE ,,NO THOROUGHFARE,,
BUT LOVE CAME LAUGHING BY AND CRIED:
I ENTER EVERYWHERE

3-RELEGION HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH LOVE

4-BECAUSE LOVE ITSELF IS DEVINE ,, ISHAQ HAQIQEE PERFECTS ITSELF ONLY AFTER THE TRIAL AND TRIBULATIONS OF ISHAQE MAJAZI.

5. TO REALISE ISHAQE MAJAZEE YOU MUST MAKE A TRUE UNION OF HEART AND BODY WITH A WOMANYOU TRULY LOVE WITH ALL HER NUMPH HAVING VISITED UPON YOU IN ALL ITS SEDUCTION

6- IF SO YOU WILL SURELY BE DESTINED TO ENDURE A LONG SPELL OF DESERTION AND WILDERNESS WHICH WILL WRENCH THE QUINTESSENCE OF YOUR SOUL AND SET YOU ON THE ETERNAL PATH OF ISHAQ HAQIQEE, SUCH IS THE CROSS AND CRUNCH OF ISHAQE MAJAZI IF ONE REALLY EXPERIANCE IT IN TRUE SENCE OF WORD



I Think it can be improved many time over, anyway i just fiddle my fancy of it

Brother its quite difficult to evaluate ths essay, coz its a literary 1.Though ur effort is very gud bt its a risky topic. I dont suggest to choose a topic which is contoverical with respect to its approach.
My personal practical experience reflects that FPSC does not want very good vocabulary and very impressive and well constructed sentences with heavy words from its candidates,instead it wants a candidate should b able to convey his ideas and thoughts in logical and non ambiguous way. Means ,he shoud be clear about wat he is going to write. In my view,FPSC examiners are more happy and give more marks to a candidate who has personal ideas and vision about the chosen topic and has ability to write all that in his own words where he does not reflect himself to be confused and unclear abut the same.Whatever stands he take he proves it with logic.......Best of luck...

penta,
you are not off the mark upon elaborating the hazard of opting literary essay, but its really where you get judged,there is difference betwen heavy and high vocabulary.this outline i just conceive in couple of minutes and it is pretty incomplete.but litrary essay has to be embroidered with litrature an history and then your pilgrim of life. obviously , very few can pull it along. you are absoloutly right. but he who has the intelectual enterprise needn,t do any preparation for litrarry essay he just sleeps , gives paper and smiles

this observation is not always right as far as essay is concerned there is always the appreciation of a splendid edifice. again , it must not suffer from any kind of plagerisam in the sence that no second-hand stuff but genuion exposition of the subject matter. many has also failed for writting plain and prosaic with no entertainment of elevated temporal and spatial symmetry of facts. but yes, then why go for litrary essay.