dear seniors this is one of the essay outline i wrote today n its my first essay which i wrote on this forum i request all members comment on my essay and if there is any mistake point out that and also give marks out of 100
OUR NATION , PAKISTAN
1. Pakistan
2. Introduction
3. Motto and Languages
a.unity faith and discipline
b. punjabi
c. pushto
d. balochi
e. sindhi
f. perian
g. kashmiri
4. Government and Geography
5. History of Pakistan
6. Formation of Pakistan
a.father of nation
b.dream of iqbal
c.problem at emergence
d.government
e.martial laws
f.currency
g.banking at formation
h.trade and communication

Essay is always based on a certain contention otherwise it becomes a simple report Your topic havs no contention in it so it was not a good topic to write an essay You must try past papers in order to get a good topic for essay
thanx

dear members actually there was some problem thats why my complete essay was not posted this is the one i wrote , ya i know abt it that its not current topic for essay actually it was my first try thats why i choose this topic wanted to see what stuff i have, all members requested to give marks neglecting the importance of topic.

OUR NATION PAKISTAN
1. Pakistan
2. Introduction
3. Motto and Languages
a.unity faith and discipline
b. punjabi
c. pushto
d. balochi
e. sindhi
f. perian
g. kashmiri
4. Government and Geography
5. History of Pakistan
6. Formation of Pakistan
a.father of nation
b.dream of iqbal
c.problem at emergence
d.government
e.martial laws
f.currency
g.banking at formation
h.trade and communication
7.historical places
8.politics of pakistan
9.foreign relations
a.super powers
b.sino pak relation
c.arab countries
d.southern countries
e.neighbours
10.national symbols
a.flag. flag of pakistan
b.anthem. qaumi tarana
c.animal.markhor
d.flower. jasmine
e.tree. cedres deodara
f.juice. sugarcane
g.sports. hockey
h.dress. shalwar kameez
i.bird.chakoor
11.metropolitran cities
a. islamabad
b.karachi
c.lahore
d.quetta
e.faisalabad
f.multan
12.economy of pakistan
a.economic condition
b.poverty
c.population
d.inflation
e.Gdp and taxation
f.economic stratification
g.27th largesteconomy in purchasing and 48th in dollarterm
h.global recession
i.drought
j.foreign reserves
k.literacy rates
l.developement programs
m.imports and exports
n.stock market
o.finance or economic aid
p.employment
13.agriculture of pakistan (20 headinds)
14.industry of pakistan (20 headlines)
15.problems of pakistan
a.terrorism
b.corruption
c.crime
d.poverty
e.population
f.tribal areas
g.social conflicts
h.social problems, drugs, prostitution, smuggling, child labour.
i.energy crisis
j.pollution
k.oil politics
l. lack of leadership
16.democracy
a.zardari
b.importance
c.history
d.political influence
e.image of pakistani leaders
f.future of pakistan
g.remedies
17.pakistani culture
a.cultural roots
b.joint families
c.pakistani musics
d.architecture
e.literature of pakistan, IQBAL
18.education
a..literacy rate4
b.institution n scope of education
c.role of modern world
d.education system
e.teaching n role models
f.education developement
g.financial aids and scholarships
19.women empowerment
a.status of women
b.islam and women
c.rights and duties
d.history
e.role in society
20.communication
a.airways
b.railways
c.waterways
d.telecommunication. telenor , ufone ,
e.internet.
21.danger of nuclear war
a.nuclear weapons
b.danger of world war
c.pakistans opponents
d.u.n role
e.pakistans nuclear power
22.pakistani forces
a.army
b.military
c.f.c
d.airforce
e.navy
f.f.i.a
g.c.i.d
h.rangers
i.police
23.banking system
a.central banking
b.commercial banking
c.islamic banking
d.financial aids
e.functions and remedies
24.role of modern world
25.present conditions
26.future of pakistan, an ideal state
27.islam, a threat to west
28.remedies
29.epilogue
30.reference

this is just my outline .

Dear users,

People seem to be spending too much time on preparing an outline rather than the actual essay itself. Remember people that an essay is a discussion of specific topic, producing impressive and detailed outline may distract the writer from focusing on the core issue, and thus producing irrelevant paragraphs/material.

I would advise everyone to keep their outline simple, not exhaustive for the sake of keeping the discussion simple, and relevant to the point.

As far as the outline is concerned, no doubt that it is impressive, and extremely dense in content, but please consider the feasibility of producing an essay using this outline.

In my humble opinion, you are aiming for something very ambitious here, and the outline is more focused on producing a white paper rather than an essay.

A fellow member pointed out that there is no contention which is apparent in your outline, therefore, it would be a futile exercise to comment or give marks on your outline, remember an essay is not a mere collection of paragraphs, it is a thought process, and the outline should at least give a hint of that process.


All the best to all candidates attempting this year

well, I do agree, not only outline, rather the whole essay should be well knitted. one should not go for lenghth at the cost of quality. I think the assessors are more concern about quality of your thoughts and quality of your fine writting.

I myself is bit confused. I have just started to work on essay, and my first step is to collect relevant material from different sources, after going through different perspectives on a given topic I will go for actual writting practice.


all senior members who have appeared in past exams and cleared the essay paper, please suggest me some important topics, so that my endeavor of collecting material remain specific.

also please share some ematerial, some good articles on
Democracy, terrorism, climate change, Islam in contemporary dynamics and Women empowerment. I am bit optimistic for these topics, what do you think?
I do hope all seniors will extend their help.

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aoa mehikan its just a junior member here but i think that when the topic is lifeless u should give it life by putting argumantative n productive input.as seniors suggest that examiner is well aware he dnt need facts from us.it is our thought,he concerned about.so try to re write it by giving it an interesting outlook.respected members do comment plz.thnx Noor

i will give you........

10/100

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Seems like I am viewing CIA Fact Book Pakistan. Can't assign marks because it is not an essay.

thanks dear members 4 correcting me . and i request u all can any put some proper outline which explains how 2 write an essay properly

@ Mahikan

In a nutshell, an essay should be consist of the following:

Introduction ( Briefly explain what you intend to discuss and define your topic, for e.g. if you intend to discuss Global warming then start off with a definition.

Main body (Reasons, arguments, counter-arguments)

This part should be the heart and soul of your essay.

Discuss the effects of global warming, why we need to take action?, why some people think global warming is a scam? what action we can take to prevent global warming?

Conclusion ( Your opinion )

Express your opinion in accordance with the main body of the essay, your opinion should not be expressed in other part of the essay.

What ever you have written in the main body should be summed up in the conclusion, and in the end, give your opinion on the topic.

This is a very brief introduction to essay writing, I hope you will find it useful, as I keep reiterating, carry out your own research, and keep practicing