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So no need to unnecessarily lengthen the outline.

Please explicitly express that you wrote exactly the same outline there as well , so I may take a comforting breath.

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lol.
It's the exact outline i wrote there. I posted this outline just after completion of the exam.
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lol.
It's the exact outline i wrote there. I posted this outline just after completion of the exam.
Hello again (friend)

One thing more just struck my mind, and that is that this topic is quite unconventional. So, how frequently did you quote from the work of others?

Personally I don't like to quote others.

And did you expand the concept in the thesis statement, or merely rephrasing the topic did the trick?

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this is the topic and the given outline that i attempted in last attempt and Alhamdolillah passed the css.
A few more things:

1) Your outline is a mixture of phrases and sentences. Is it an acceptable practice?

2) here is the outline I just wrote by adopting the skeleton of your essay, but all the points are original.

Since I had seen your outline before, I took less than 15 minutes to write it. But I didn't copy any point from your outline. Please have your say.




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The Thesis statement (Preamble in your case) is being written in the Outlines and not in the Introduction?

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