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War On Terror Has Contributed To The Growing Abuse Of Human Rights (2015)
1- Introduction
2- War Is Cowardly Action Of Brave Souls
3- Discord Causes Destruction
4- War; An Agent of Human Rights Violation
4.1- Hitler’s Genocide
4.2- American “Little Boy”
4.3- Israel-Arab War
4.4- Vietnam War

5- War On Terror: A Short Definition
6- Clash Of Civilization Under Umbrella Of WOT
7- Exposition Of Human Souls To Sufferings
8- Human Rights In The Light Of UNDHR And Geneva Conventions
9- Violation Of Human Rights
9.1- Right To Life;
9.1.1- Drone Strikes Killed Lesser Terrorists And More Civilians or Innocents
9.1.2- Havoc By Diseases e.g Polio, Diarreha etc
9.1.3- Manipulation Of Biological Weapons
9.2- Right To Property
9.2.1- Plumped Buildings
9.2.2- Blasted Hospitals
9.2.3- Ruined Infrastructure e.g Roads, Bridges etc
9.3- Right To Education
9.3.1- Malala Yousaf Zai’s Cry
9.3.2- School Destruction Because of Bombings
9.3.3- Thanatophobia Among Children
9.4- Violence Of Women Rights
9.4.1- Sexual Abuse
9.4.2- Abduction
9.5- Insult To Mankind
9.5.1- Human Agony By Reason Of WMD
9.5.2- Defiance To Prisoner’s Rights e.g Unhuman Treatment Of Prisoners In Bay Of Gautanamo And Abu Garib Cells
10- Outcomes Of Abuse Of Human Rights
10.1- Action And Reaction Syndrome
10.2- Space For Militancy e.g Opportunity Cost Of Aftermath of Cold War Was: Talibanization Of Afghanistan
War On Terror Contributed in Creation Of ISIS
10.3- War On Terror Vindicated Ideology of Terrorism
10.4- Islamophobia And Threat To Islamic Civilization
10.5- Civil And Sectarian War In Many States
10.6- War On Terror is An Addendum In Growth Of Illiteracy
10.7- Economic Recession
10.8- Loss To Life And Property
11- Guidance For Eradication Of Evil
11.1- Dialogue Is The Best Course To Combat Terrorism
11.2- Implementation Of UN Resolutions Pertaining To Human Rights
11.3- Limiting Drone Birds
11.4- Ban On WMD
11.5- Proscription Of Unhuman Treatments Specially In Prisoner Cells
11.6- Rejection Of Samuel P Huntington’ Opinion: Clash Of Civilizations
12- Conclusion.
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Am neither an expert nor a mediocre authority on essay writing, but i will share some thoughts.

Your points are valid - there is no doubt about that. Relevancy is conspicuous. That's good.

You are trying to use informal words which may be part of our day to day vocabulary but are can not be part of academic writing. For example, you use Drone birds -- drone alone says all and trying to impose more sense by using 'birds' only takes away all the valuable point that you were going to make.

After introduction, you added five points. They are either desperate attempt to give length to the essay, or you have not been able to build up your essay so that it hits the bull's eye. For me, these 5 points are just a waste of time.

Am not sure why you used the concept of clash of civilization at two points. That show you are trying hard to add something you know, but in reality thats just a peripheral information with high potential to devalue the good points you made

The points that you mentioned regarding human rights are undoubtedly the best. I did learn something from your outline. I liked the way you divided various violation into separate points, which does amplify the abuse - the main crux of the essay.
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I found the introduction completely irrelevant,the rest is fine.
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