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@ Audacious:
your essay is a good effort. n m glad that u took pains to write it and post it online.....some of the points raised by fellow members have been quite right. i suggest u should try to manage ur thoughts on national and international aspects at the same level. For example, media was not evolving in Pakistan alone or US & Israel are not the only countries that have used media to their advantage. But i believe u must have already started improving these points...... I wrote the same essay this year in exam and here is my outline that i wrote: Here is how i wrote it: media in modern world--an intro media through ages basic human instinct: to communicate early humans invention of printing and paper widespread use of printing press media in renaissance transfer of knowledge arrival of periodical newspapers in early 18th century invention of radio and tv media's latest channel: internet media's role in the present day world basic functions of information, news, education, entertainment, awareness, other functions include: check on govt policy socio-political role: a case of lawyer's movement an agent for change opinion making forum: a case of 9/11 and invasion of iraq connectivity--public participation: a case of obama's election and his use of internet some negative impacts of media yellow journalism blackmailing sensationalism: an example of mumbai carnage biased approach: blatant refusal of western media to acknowledge the atrocities on kashmiri and paletinian people intervention in foreign policy news selling as product future role of media more sensible true journalism to be followed latest technologies to be used ***************************************** Hope u keep ur spirits high...... |
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I was surfing through forum to find some data regarding media and cursory glance of this thread has made me to add my opinion. Please no offence as I in my perspective you are the prospective future CSP and preparing Essay for CSS examiner. I wont give you marks first rather will elucidate the mistakes you have committed. Your mistakes are bold while my suggestions are in dark red.
Outline has already been checked by other members and some valuable suggestions has been given to you so my focus is on your essay. Quote:
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@ Miss Naqvi
Thanks for your criticism. Secondly, it was an essay written without any preparation for the topic. I just read the topic and started to write whatever came in my mind and whatever I though appropriate and related to topic. Ideas can vary from person to person so the expression of writing. Everybody writes in his own capacity and knowledge, so did I. Thank you very much. don't you think that with such type of expression and knowledge one can pass essay paper? I hope you will say no. But I passed with the same expression and weak sentences in 2009 on the topic of War On terror securing 43 marks. A good Quote "When There is a will, there is a way". Regards and Reverence |
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