Kindly rate my outline..

[Mehrankhan]

Dialogue is the best course to combat terrorism..

Introduction..
-Defining Terrorism
-Defining Dialogue
-Evolution of need of dialogue

Dialogue is the best course to combat terrorism globally

Means of dialogue..
-Diplomacy
-Neutral party dialogue (i-e trilateral or more)
-At forums of International Organizations

Ways of Dialogue..
-Impartial
-Pure Intention to talk
-On eligible terms

Achievements of Dialogue..
-Berlin's wall
-End to millitary rebellions in different areas (Nepal, Palestine)
-Peace deal (nizam-e-adl) in malakand division of Pakistan

Effects of Dialogue..
-prevents violence
-saves innocent lives
-stable and reliable process
-prevents economic losses
-social and moral values remain intact

conclusion





Is this right approach.. kindly comment..

[ArifAwan]

Is it necessary to give outline before essay?

[samra kanwal]

@mehran
add
recently America wants to undergo dialogue process with Taliban..
need of hour to underwent dialogue process
Govt.of Pakistan should adopt dialogue policy to combat terrorism
dialogue....a road towards peace

[Miss_Naqvi]

Your outline is reasonable but not as mature as is the demand of CSS examiner. Let me point out some of your mistakes.

Originally Posted by Mehrankhan

Dialogue is the best course to combat terrorism..

Introduction..

-Defining Terrorism
-Defining Dialogue
-Evolution of need of dialogue
Refine your language and ideas.

Dialogue is the best course to combat terrorism globally

Means of dialogue..
-Diplomacy
-Neutral party dialogue (i-e trilateral or more)
-At forums of International Organizations

Describe dialogue in just 1 or 2 paragraph because many other important things will be neglected if your focus is on describing the topic.

Ways of Dialogue..

-Impartial
-Pure Intention to talk
-On eligible terms

The coloured heads seems quite irrelavant. You have not clarified your ideas with effective vocab usage. So either rephrase your ideas or discard them.

Achievements of Dialogue..
-Berlin's wall
-End to millitary rebellions in different areas (Nepal, Palestine)
-Peace deal (nizam-e-adl) in malakand division of Pakistan

Good one

Effects of Dialogue..

-prevents violence
-saves innocent lives
-stable and reliable process
-prevents economic losses
-social and moral values remain intact

Good ideas but ill-kintted.

conclusion

Is this right approach.. kindly comment..

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I will be waiting for your next attempt of the same outline. I am sure it will be the best one.

[Miss_Naqvi]

Originally Posted by ArifAwan

Is it necessary to give outline before essay?

It always gives a look to your essay and add impression to it. Essay outline helps you to limit yourself for the topic and stick to it. So it is highly recommended to write outline before your essay.

[concious]

a.a seniors i have written this essay in papers and made outline as given below kindly evaluate it and give your valuable suggestions
1 introduction
2 women in islam
right to live
right to get education
right of property
right to merry
3 women in middle east
4 women in india
5 women in pakistan
child marriage
karo kari
honour killing
marriage with quran
6 causes of negative attitude towards women
role of orthodox ulemas
feudalism
lack of education
trible system
7 steps taken by govt to ameliorate the condition of women
attitude of quaid e azam
role of fatima jinnah
ayub era
bhutto era
zia era
first women bank
fatima jinnah university
cedaw act
protection of women act
protection against harrassment of women at workplace bill 2009
aurat foundation
role of saarc
millennium development goals
8 suggestions
education of women
job opportunities
eradication of feudalism
positive role of media
9 suggestions

[Mehrankhan]

salam and thanx 4 evaluating.. though a little late.. as i already appeared in 2011..

And as far as i think only key points are to be mentioned in outline.. not the exact story like vocab and ideas.. just give it a bullet like form and put ur valuable knowledge in the body..

Lets c.. Do pray for my result..

Fee amaanillah..