NOTE: Comments and suggestions are welcomed from the members.

Introduction

Reasons Behind Rising Unemployment in Pakistan

Myopic policies
Poor governance
Shrinking economic growth
Flight of capital and De-industrialization
Unequal distribution of wealth
Under-performing agriculture sector
Eroding foreign direct investment
Population explosion
Unfair regulation of competition; academic and market
Global economic crunch

Effects of Surging Unemployment on Pakistan

Increase in debt burden
Ballooning inflation
Widening poverty pool
Turmoil and chaos in society
Brain drain
Plethora of social evils
Eroding sense of affinity towards state
Psychological disorder

Pragmatic Solutions to Tackle Rising Unemployment in Pakistan

Paradigm shift in economic policies
Good governance
Sustainable economic growth
Equal distribution of wealth
Modernizing agriculture sector
Market attraction for FDI
Ensuring law and order situation
Overhauling education sector
Skilled labour
Encouraging small industries


Conclusion

really nice points but i should suggest the sequence of your essay, as we know that head-body-concluding structure i must suggest that after introduction you should enlist the effects (which are mentioned at second level) and then come on the reasons behind this problem (beacuse the reason section looks larger and more effective part of this essay) and then solution and little bit conclusion that must looks different then suggestions.

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Thank you Khuro!
yar this mantra is reiterated many times that the structure of essay should be like
intro
reasons
effects
solutions
conclusion

But what you are emphasizing seems a bit odd. Would you explain a bit what you stand for?

actually what i had posted earlier is not according to any mantra. it was just a simple structure of essay, and was kind suggestion, nothing more. my posted suggestion wasnt mean to contradict to your post.

Regards.
Khuhro

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Dear Safeer,

U have made a nice effort......but u can add few following points..

in the portion of reasons.

1- Terrorism-- Destroys infrastructure
- Discourages foreign direct investment
- Major share of budget goes to counter terrorism
2- Energy crisis...
- Closure of many textiles n other industries
- No work on load shedding times.
3- Lack of political stability
4- Deteriorating situation of law & order especially in the economic hub Karachi and KPK
5- Our major dependence on primary economic activities
6- Lack of Research and development activities to create more jobs
7- Lack of technical training centers

n many more can add

in solutions area.

1- Skill development based education
2- Education according to market requirements
3- More industrialization
4- More R & D work
5- Strengthening and support to already developed institutions and fields like Railway, textiles, steel mills and agriculture

n more u can add

Thanks

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thank you very much for your insights gentleman. Your concerns are highly noted.

Very well executed. sub heads in outline are very catchy. its a good passing outline.

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@Saba2007 : well dear this increase in unemployment is due to economic crises but it itself is not among economic crises. it is the result of economic crises and then it would also add to the crises.

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its ok saba, well sister if you talked about the outlines of essay of economic crises pakistan there is huge factors. however, unemployment could be the one reason and factor simultaneously. for the economic crises of nation, along with many other factors.

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Pakistan is not a poor country but its a poorly managed country. Military operations, bad governance and pathetic law and order situation leading this country towards record breaking unemployment. Foreign Direct Investment has flown and limited trade relations with neighbors has been created massive unemployment throughout the country. Our multilateral education system can not produce quality labor because it creates radicalization in the society and now our efforts are in reverse direction to de-radicalization.