Thanks Dear.

Zuhaib i have read almost all your written essays,your style is very impressive,how did you come up to this level?..i mean any specific reading or any other source that you think most influence your writing.

Hmm! Thanks!
Dear Sis! As with passage of time child gets maturity so does writings. The more one writes the better it becomes. I should say one should be scholar and he should write for common people.
I am poet. =) So my expressions becomes poetic, scholastic and metaphoric. I have written two novels, almost 100 poems and read hundreds of literary books specially of philosophy and Sufism.
So, my writing style is poetic and literary which leaves its color in others mind.
I try to play with words. Like;

Woman has been being deprived for centuries; their tortures, tensions, torments and tragedies are too terrifying.

You can see a letter 'T' is common in above sentence and it creates rhythm and music. Doesn't it?

Essay has its own rules and regulations which are much necessary one should not neglect them.

It is introduction of Essay;

The woman is practised sole of shoe since the time, she is ever limited till ceilings, caged in four walls, murdered for sake of honor, deprived of education, bereaved of due rights, victim of acid spree, brides are burnt, enslaved, engraved, chocked, banned, chained, sold in dark of nights, for rapist and lusty men she is like an innocent sheep among dogs, foxes and wolves and she has ever bore and tolerated torments, tensions, tragedies and tortures. Is the woman born for miseries?

In it their is little touch of music in words and when one reads he feels rhythm and completes without any pause.
It is specialty of my style that i keep music in words.

See words of mine in a poem.

Shadowy clouds showering over,
The starless sky stares downer.
So soulful sighs, oh! Scary sight!
Shrouded night and seized light.
Silent all songs, shivery season,
Shackled souls and strange station!

Here letter S is common.

Writing is an Art and art is not learned in one day as Rome was not build in one day.

I hope you have understood. Simply, expressions should be impressive and words should be worthy of music.
You have quite good curiosity and passion, and indeed, it shall secure success.
May Allah Bless you.

Enough stisfying reply by you my sweet brother,since childhood i also inspired by Sufism,i have read,Buly shah,allama iqbal,rumi,ghazali,scorates,plato,aristotle,taj baba,sultan baho and many more....that made me potes as well but because i read many stuff in urdu and punjabi so i became a urdu writer...now i started reading English novels in order to get key to success in css...would you suggest me some very good stuff of english...

Thanks. Hu, Rumi takes away my Breath.
Read Rumi in English translation.
Read Alchemist, The Zahir i must say read all novels by paulo coelho.
Broken wings and The prophet by Khalil Jibran.
prince of abyssinia by samuel johnson.

Try to write more and more.

Cutie Pie Sis, When are you going to appear in CSS?

dear brother
i read ur essay..........i noted 1 thing
ur whole essay just about miesry........ what govt steps taken in past years y goverment and either any improvment occur in society or not .........what steps to take by common man and by govt.......and be little positive.......
my own grammer too weak so no comments about it
otherwise very good wayof expression .........keep it up
regards

zohaib where from u got relevent material...?and great if you are in inter...best command over comprehension

thanks for suggestions,yes i am trying to write ....i appeared in 2011,passed in all except essay...now i ll appear in 2013....i am abroad no body here for discussion on current topics that's why i though i should not go 2012,....i ll try to find these books on-line and the i ll read them

Bro your comments boasted up my confidence because the essay is a good one though, but i believe i can write better(no offense to Zuhaib). i was much worried about essay paper. .

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Mujhe Manzil Ki Talab Hai Na Hi Nakami Ka Dar
Muhjhe Safar Me Acha KHasa Lutf Aata Hai......(hamid)

dear zohaib your talent is really appreciable. The way of your expression is praiseworthy, and above all, the thing which convincingly prove your intellect is your being in intermediate.
I am also interested in sufism and of the opinion that it is a good source of knowing the realities attach to our own existence and enhance our thinking capabilities about metaphoric objects, what to talk about the materialistic perspectives of nature.
It is an acknowledged fact that when one envisages to find out hidden realities of nature many things unfold to him and his wisdom grows.