my outline for PMS essay.2013

[ambitious gal]

please seniors evaluate and mark my outline on terrorism ,2013 PMS essay topic,that i attempted ... these are points I remember till now so there can be some mishappens..sory for it.. kindly mark it and evaluate it...


TERRORISM as new threat to contemperory world.

1.definition and background
a. terrorism: powerful VS powerless
b. terrorism as phenomena of today
2. terrorism in different spheres
a. terrorism at local level,Pakistan as case study/recent incidents
b. terrorism at regional level,Afghanistan & India as case study
c. terrorism at globallevel: USA, uk,spain
3. start of new age of terrorism
a. post 9/11 era: afghan war and its outcomes
4.Rise of taliban
a.history of taliban
b.what are taliban objectives
objectives in past
objectives in modern age
c.concept of utopian state of justice
5.charateristics of new age of terrorism
I.global
II.lethal
III.no distinction
IV. advanced technology
V. fanaticism & hatred
VI.modern terrorism is advanced
VII. no boundary no limits
6. Conflict between medivalism and modernism
a.what is medivalism
b.What is modernism
c.USA as symbol of modernity
d.Taliban as symbol of medivalism
7.terrorist groups
a.Tehreek e taliban
b. lashakr.e.tayaba
c.hizab ul mujahidin

8. war on terrorism
a.alliances of USA
b.USA motives
c.USA in Afghanistan,Iraq,conflict with Iran
9.outcome of war on terrorism
10.Pakistan victim of terrorism
a.contributions from pakistan
b.what lost,what gain?
ii.effects of afghan war
11.estiamtes of terrorist attacks
12. western states strategies to counter terrorism
a.USA policy
b.Russia policy
13.can terrorism be curtailed???

[comp Engr]

Originally Posted by ambitious gal

please seniors evaluate and mark my outline on terrorism ,2013 PMS essay topic,that i attempted ... these are points I remember till now so there can be some mishappens..sory for it.. kindly mark it and evaluate it...


TERRORISM as new threat to contemperory world.

1.definition and background
a. terrorism: powerful VS powerless
b. terrorism as phenomena of today
2. terrorism in different spheres
a. terrorism at local level,Pakistan as case study/recent incidents
b. terrorism at regional level,Afghanistan & India as case study
c. terrorism at globallevel: USA, uk,spain
3. start of new age of terrorism
a. post 9/11 era: afghan war and its outcomes
4.Rise of taliban
a.history of taliban
b.what are taliban objectives
objectives in past
objectives in modern age
c.concept of utopian state of justice
5.charateristics of new age of terrorism
I.global
II.lethal
III.no distinction
IV. advanced technology
V. fanaticism & hatred
VI.modern terrorism is advanced
VII. no boundary no limits
6. Conflict between medivalism and modernism
a.what is medivalism
b.What is modernism
c.USA as symbol of modernity
d.Taliban as symbol of medivalism
7.terrorist groups
a.Tehreek e taliban
b. lashakr.e.tayaba
c.hizab ul mujahidin

8. war on terrorism
a.alliances of USA
b.USA motives
c.USA in Afghanistan,Iraq,conflict with Iran
9.outcome of war on terrorism
10.Pakistan victim of terrorism
a.contributions from pakistan
b.what lost,what gain?
ii.effects of afghan war
11.estiamtes of terrorist attacks
12. western states strategies to counter terrorism
a.USA policy
b.Russia policy
13.can terrorism be curtailed???

Brother dont need to write so much outlines.Don't do like this in next exam whatever.

[comp Engr]

Main outlines are;

Effects of terrorism on Pakistan Economy.
Introduction
a)Pakistan joints war on terror
B)Impact on Economy
c)War on Terror effects on Pakistan
d)Economical cost of war on Terrorism
d.1)Financial Losses
d.2)Loss of visitors
d.3)Local Consumption
d.4)Exports:Country's exports
d.4)Decline in FDI
d.5)Investment-to-GDP Ratio
a.6)Expenses on security needs
Conclusion

[ambitious gal]

sir please check the topic of essay,it has nthing to dowith economy.but talks about specifically terrorism and global phenomena

[comp Engr]

Originally Posted by ambitious gal

sir please check the topic of essay,it has nthing to dowith economy.but talks about specifically terrorism and global phenomena

My dear You didnt understand.You should add these outlines in your essay instead of such useless things.Economy is only problem that your our country compel for begging money from World.Its an important part of terrorism.

13.can terrorism be curtailed??? Dont ask questions while design outlines.Its totally reflecting bad impression on examiner.

what are taliban objectives Dont ask questions
objectives in past
objectives in modern age

It should be like this

Taliban Objectives.

Objectives in past
Objectives in Modern Age.

@ My dear sister

My dear your essay is Best ok.Hope to get good marks.MAY GOD BLESS YOU.Allah aap ko exam main pass kare.

AMEEN!

[ambitious gal]

thanks for pointing out mistake and guidance. but sir can u please give me your ooinion regarding its score.how much I may be able to gain.actually m student of IR.so i took it in that perspective. while gave all facts and figures and 4/5 quotes from different political leaders and taliban's head. kindly evaluate it and tell me is it point.scoring essay? i am hoing it will give result in positive. thanks again..

[comp Engr]

Originally Posted by ambitious gal

thanks for pointing out mistake and guidance. but sir can u please give me your ooinion regarding its score.how much I may be able to gain.actually m student of IR.so i took it in that perspective. while gave all facts and figures and 4/5 quotes from different political leaders and taliban's head. kindly evaluate it and tell me is it point.scoring essay? i am hoing it will give result in positive. thanks again..

My Dear sister.Insha allah you will get good marks in essay.In my opinion you may be get good marks min 40-50 if an examiner sincere.

Ap ache marks be le sakte ho.Koshish kare ke essay main quotes Itna use mut kare.Dont worry kuch nahin hota.Dont take any tension ok smile and sleep.GOD will Do better.

[Shahab Farooqi]

Originally Posted by ambitious gal

sir please check the topic of essay,it has nthing to dowith economy.but talks about specifically terrorism and global phenomena

I think comp Engr is very much correct in his point. Economy must be discussed in the essay because the essay is represented as a threat to the modern world and here the threat means threat to economy, threat to governments, threat to world policies etc. Economy should be one of the points to be discussed in the essay.

[ambitious gal]

Originally Posted by comp Engr

My Dear sister.Insha allah you will get good marks in essay.In my opinion you may be get good marks min 40-50 if an examiner sincere.

Ap ache marks be le sakte ho.Koshish kare ke essay main quotes Itna use mut kare.Dont worry kuch nahin hota.Dont take any tension ok smile and sleep.GOD will Do better.

sir does word count matter inessay.writing... I wrote around 3500wwords,while demanded were 4000-5000. so with 4quites and facts and figures regarding terrorist events and death.tolls are enough to score good.

[comp Engr]

Originally Posted by ambitious gal

sir does word count matter inessay.writing... I wrote around 3500wwords,while demanded were 4000-5000. so with 4quites and facts and figures regarding terrorist events and death.tolls are enough to score good.

Dear if they already defined to you that an essay should be 4000-5000 so ok,But try to represent yourself as you have much knowledge about an essay you wrote.Dont need to count words or pages just analyze what your are writing in essay.

Many people writes an essay of any topic about many pages but they just pass or fail.Ok pass in essay is very important for everyone but we dont predict that may be we secure 40-50 marks no never don't think,Just think how to get good marks.