My outline :
Hierarchy of employees in organizations:
1:Higher level employees
Policy makers
Bureaucratics, CEOs, etc
2:middle level
Staff managers
3:lower level
Peon, clerks etc

Reasons of incompetent employees in a hierarchy:
1:lack of training
2:lack of specialization in particular field
3:nepotism in government sector
4:centralization system in sectors


Effects of incompetent employees in a hierarchy:
1:corruption in government sectors.
2: failure in target achievement.
3:blame game between senior and Junior officers
4:deserving employees are not given promotions
5:the check and balance system remains no more long.

]Solution to make a hierarchy of competent employees
1:training coachings for new employees in organization
2:technical education must be given to all level of employees
3:transperancy in promotion system
4: incentives and bonuses must be given
5:decentralization of organization
6:employees must be given task according to their specialization
7: increments in salaries
8: control in corruption
Conclusion

how much you secured on essay paper Dark moon?

• 1 introduction
• 2the war on terror had contributed to growing abuse of human rights how?
• why war on terror only ? because it was
• a tact to repeat incident like pearl harbour through 9/11 to stirr up america and whole world
• a strategy to declare muslims as terrorists
• then to attack afghanistan to gain strategic control to create trouble in middle east.
• 3 how war on terror had contributed to growing abuse of human rights?
• directly
• 2 indirectly how?
• through proxy wars
• through sectarian violence
• directly how?.
• abused right of freedom
• of what?
• of action
• of thought
• of inquiry.
• abused right of property.
• and finally right of life
• 4 impacts.
• death
• destruction
• and atrocities
• 5 conclusion - the end

My Friend!

Your point number 2 is completely irrelevant and can be safely omitted.

The hint, I can give you in this regard is to tackle the essay topic as a whole.

For example, just as if you set out Human Rights separately, it will appear to be irrelevant, so is the case with the description of the WOT.

I hope it helped.

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Yeh bro it was irrelevant.thanks for help but how is rest of outline from why war on terror only.? I think description of story starts from question why war on terror only? What's the strategy? Mainly to have strategic influence. And then human right abuse .this or that way..I think it becomes irrelevant too.abuse of human right is fine..but what's your say on it bro.is story is okay to mention? The way all started?

What are you trying to convey by using the phrase:

(why war on terror only)

Because examiner said so. And do not assume that what you know, the examiner also knows. That's why be expressive. And write clearly.

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will tell you after final result

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