Asslam o Alaikum Guys! I hope you will be fine. I have taken my last attempt of CSS Exam ( CE-2015) this year. It was an excellent experience since I started preparation for CSS in Feb 2013 till now. I have learned a lot of things. It was an amazing time. I studied a lot of new things and subjects, I havent read before. It developed reading habit and interest in diversified subjects. In a nutshell I come to know about the whole world and things going around. Coming to the point I ll try to share my study plans and strategy to crack each subject as well. I will also share the things I have learned. I will try to describe my experience of exams as well in detail. Now as CSS has foster love for reading and books, I want ro help the aspirants who are going to appear in upcoming exams. Guys I can share notes, I can make notes for you here, I can solve the past papers for you also else everything you want me to share in order to help you . This offer ia more flexible for aspirants who belong from far areas or who cannot afford expenditures to avail themselves of every kind of opportunity. I will advise you people to please go through the necessary details about CSS and all the subjects on forum before asking me. Guys I never asked about anything on forum rather I searched threads first in detail and I found very very helpful details and material regarding preparation so you should also. Moreover It would be a pleasure for me to help anybody. I do not know whether II will pass this exam or not but I have achieved and gained enough knowledge Alhamdulilah.So feel free to ask anythibg you want to.I will try to fulfill your demands at my earliest and at yhe beat. Remewmber in your prayers.Good Luck.
P.S: My optional were:
Geography
Punjabi
Forestry
Arabic
Arabicor not

that would be great

Thanks Man Jaanbaza;
1st of All best of luck for 1st attempt, Our prayers are always with you InshAllah!
Secondly, I really appreciate your attitude towards new members, which is very cooperative and friendly.Unfortunately My optional subject do not match with you. But i have to start from scratch and 1st target is Essay.Here i need your help.I always write something, but i don't know, whether it has some grammatical mistakes or not. Is it possible that, You give me topic for essay and i write on it.And after completing my essay i will share with you on this forum and you identify the mistakes, So through this way i can observe my mistake that i commit but didn't recognized.

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Introduction
sep 9/11 attack on U.S
U.S INVASION OF AFGHANISTAN
U.S INVASION OF IRAQ

HUMAN RIGHTS.
Freedom of conscience
Freedom of thought
Freedom of expression in a sense that consoles collective liberty
freedom of movement
freedom of beliefs

How war on terror has has contributed to the growing abuse of human rights

Missing persons
stern laws (Protection of Pakistan Ordinance,PATRIOT Act,LAWS ENACTED BY ARAB COUNTRIES)
bar on freedom of expression (ARAB STATES)
bar on freedom of movement
Indiscriminate killings (drones, military operations)



BUT

Terrorism is itself an excess so, its eradicating measures will also be excessive

CONCLUSION.

Dear,
Man Janbazam can better guide you regarding your outlines,My suggestion is that before writing outline one should focus on the Essay and think what the examiner want..

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Thanks Dear. So nice of you for your prayers. Jazak ALLAH
Dear I will try my best to help you also in your optional subject as well.
Brother In my opinion ESSAY WRITING needs a lot of study. I have posted some detail also on ESSAY WRITING TECHNIQUES. You can go though that as well. Moreover, First thing while attempting an essay is understanding the topic. Many students start writing history and statistics. No never. Only write what is asked in the topic. Divide the topic.
Okay after understanding the topic, the first thing is outline. A good outline helps in essay writing till end.
Outline should not be large enough that it contains vague detail rather be very precise.

For example the topic is:
Decline of Education Standards in Pakistan
Here is the suggested outline:
1. Introduction
(Write 2,3 Lines under introduction in Outline)
2. Thesis Statement
Develop argument according to given topic. For Example in this case Thesis Statement will be:
Unfortunately in third world countries like Pakistan, education standards are declining perpetually instead of government efforts and It is deteriorating the society at large by curtailing basic educational facilities because education in Pakistan is exam oriented not education oriented. There is a dire need to reform educational policies in Pakistan in terms of providing better education to future generation.
(Now the whole essay will rotate about this argument)
3.Causes for decline of education in Pakistan
(Give brief details in outline of all the causes in your mind that are responsible for declining standards of education and describe each cause in one paragraph in essay)
4. Effects of declining education on Pakistan Society
(Now give brief detail of effects in outline and describe each effect in one paragraph in essay)
5. Critical Analysis of Government Educational Policies
(In essay write one or two paragraphs about different government policies. Describe distinguished steps taken by government and the reason for their failures )
6. Remedial Measures to Improve Education Standards in Pakistan
(Write brief measures in outline and Describe each remedy in one paragraph in essay)
7. Conclusion
Write one or two lines in outline of conclusion and a paragraph in an essay

I hope you will get a better idea about essay writing after reading above sample. Dear for grammar you have to practice a lot and get your work checked on daily basis. (better from any good teacher). Write on daily basis to improve your skills. However, you can consult some good books like (English Grammar & Composition (WREN & MARTIN) and solve exercises given in it. This is the only way to improve your grammar. I would also highly recommend to study on daily basis. Study some good English books on any topic like of Russel e.t.c and also read news paper so you can come to know about the art of writing and develop your vocabulary also. One more tips is read all the Precis Paragraph of past papers from (1971 to 2015). It will benefit you a lot.
Okay If you want me to suggest the topic, here it is:
"Moral depravity is the root cause of poverty"

I have tried my best to answer your queries. You are always welcome. Good Luck

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Dear what is your thesis. You have not mention any measures ?
But your outline is good. A bit distracted but It can fetch you good marks I hope so.

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The world is changed by your example, not by your opinion !

Dear i think u are right in one direction regarding war on terror. But what you have taken of "growing abuse" and "contribution"
In my view when there is contribution, it means there are other contributors other than terrorism. Therse were also to be mentioned.
In growing abuse i think u nust have written about human rights abuse before 9 11. This is my point of view and what do u think ?

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No brother ! It is always open. You are most welcome anytime !

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@ Man Jaanbazam brother, I am preparing for the upcoming Kp Pms exam. I have decided to opt Geography and Forestry InshaAllah. Can you please share your study material plus strategy for these subjects. Also, if you have some material for these subjects in soft form, can you please share it with me?

Best of luck for your Pms result.