[QUOTE=Noor_2009;177140]1st u should past ur own outlines then after getting comments u can improve better your skills n thoughts in right direction . it is much better if u like



Regards[/QUOTE]

thanks for showing concern sis
im all w/ u in this,but sis unfortunatly i cant exactly recall how i organised my outline.i can give a very very rough skectch of the same but then i considered much more useful to invoke others' participation.in that way i'd be in a better position to commemorate my work.
n secondly there s no harm if,those in whose memory thier work is saved would share thier experiance.I HOPE RESPECTED MEMBERS' BE READY TO HELP UNCONDITIONALLY.
best regards

[QUOTE=KAWISH;177133]aoa i read ur outline,n if im not forgeting something,i did comment on it.i do believe u did miss the essentials in ur outline to mention.unlike when on forum u once post ur outline on terrorism it was good.anyways i want to say that it can be lack of practice as well as pressure,we feel due to exam that we commit mistakes like this.my essay was on same topic as yours,n im confidant n hopeful that i did good job,if not best.remember me in ur prayers.n i ll definatly pray for u:))
regards[/QUOTE]

thanks Kawish, Yes, you are right I lacked practice and the thing which upset me more is my own mistake. I had the fear of essay paper and I was worried about this. Due to over confidence I never consulted any senior, which ruined all my efforts. all other papers remained excellent but....
ne how you didn't comment on my outline, just go through it is somewhere in this same thread.

I hope you all did well.
prayers and wishes for all.

[QUOTE=Sabah Hunzai;177246]thanks Kawish, Yes, you are right I lacked practice and the thing which upset me more is my own mistake. I had the fear of essay paper and I was worried about this. Due to over confidence I never consulted any senior, which ruined all my efforts. all other papers remained excellent but....
ne how you didn't comment on my outline, just go through it is somewhere in this same thread.

I hope you all did well.
prayers and wishes for all.[/QUOTE]

aoa dear i have read ur outline i feel bad saying anything unpleasant in my life but when its for others' own benifit i never hold myself from doing that...i did feel reading ur outline that u wandered away from the topic n it looked more for Terrorism than accomplishing the entire topic.but its not time to losse heart but to take it ,n get urself prepared for doing best.Good luck n prayers though

i think there is no hard and fast rule for essay marking.
last year one of my friend write essay without outline and in simplest english. he was pass in essay paper.
its all luck i think.pray to Allah and now focus on next things

i totally agree with Deadly Sahib!!!


i would say hope for the best and prepare yourself for the worst :P:blink:

[QUOTE=KAWISH;177373]but its not time to losse heart but to take it ,n get urself prepared for doing best.Good luck n prayers though[/QUOTE]

thanks for your good wishes. it's indeed a great lesson.

someone said well ''If anything went wrong, don't think that all your work has been in vain, perhaps it has been for the best, so smile and try again.''

bundles of thanks and prayers for all those who encouraged me.

"all human beings are born equal in dignity and rights but they are in shackles."
Introduction: human beings in chains throughot history; they're in chains in the present world. Common sources of chains and bonds......religion, sex, colour, race etc.
Historically:
I) inquisition in Europe: how muslims and jews lost their freedom of religion to the fanatic rule of Isabella and Ferdinand in spain.
2) US constitution begins with the words: Men are born equal. But Blacks remained slaves and disenfranchised for a better half of US history till 1960s.
3) Women disenfrachised in europe historically till 1930s.
4) Colonialism
Freedom and human rights in the Present day world:
1) Muslims denied religious freedom in the west: the scarf issue and ban on minarets on mosque bulidings.
2) dictatorial regimes around the world
3) women denied access to education and other basic rights in some societies
4) Taliban playing havoc with freedom of expression and human rights in parts of afghanistan and pakistan
5) Israel trampling on the rights of palestinians
6)India dfying human rihjts in kashmir
Conclusion


fourteen pages excluding outline.

'can women be equal to men in Pakistan?'
if yes ,how?then one can write essay on this line
if no,why?similarly one can write on this line as well
if yes ,then comes all suggestions of women empowerment
if no,then all the factors and problems leading to hurdles in women empowerment.
or a third approach combine above two
one can start with saying no women are not equal,so write all problems of women and then write yes women can become equal to men by doing following(women empowerment)steps.
finally giving conclusions

i am giving this after discussion with my fellows

[QUOTE=DEADLYDOCTOR;178516]'can women be equal to men in Pakistan?'
if yes ,how?then one can write essay on this line
if no,why?similarly one can write on this line as well
if yes ,then comes all suggestions of women empowerment
if no,then all the factors and problems leading to hurdles in women empowerment.
or a third approach combine above two
one can start with saying no women are not equal,so write all problems of women and then write yes women can become equal to men by doing following(women empowerment)steps.
finally giving conclusions

i am giving this after discussion with my fellows[/QUOTE]
Dost!exactly mene aisa hi likha tha.sab se pahile likha ke dominant view in pakistan is that man and woman have two different roles to play.i gave current scenario then genesis of current situation.After that why it is required to equal women to men.Then solutions and role of govt,media and ngo's.conclusion of only six lines.i wrote ten pages 1300 words and revised it once.i wrote outline of only 7 lines with pencil.

[QUOTE=zoombhuto;178565]Dost!exactly mene aisa hi likha tha.sab se pahile likha ke dominant view in pakistan is that man and woman have two different roles to play.i gave current scenario then genesis of current situation.After that why it is required to equal women to men.Then solutions and role of govt,media and ngo's.conclusion of only six lines.i wrote ten pages 1300 words and revised it once.i wrote outline of only 7 lines with pencil.[/QUOTE]

why do you write outline with pencil?
and which of the line did you follow?